Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudiksha10

Tanu Tanu kyaa update likha h merii favrt song yaaar 😛
I just luv dis song soo much isliye ispe nibir VM bhi bnayaa thaa and ye update pdh k ws compltly lost in nibir cute saaa romance luvd it sooo much yaar nisha k baal hawa me udd rhe kabir admiring her sooo cute 😳😳..how badly I wnt to see dis scn ryt now
😭😭
Update soon

Thnku shoo much for such a nice comment
I miss them too😭
Would try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Tanu mindblowing update. Song ekdum perfect tha. NIBIR ko to ek dusre pyar to ho hi chuka hai ab bas dono ka realise karne ki der hai. Update nxt part soon & thanx for the pm.

Thnku
But abhi toh time h realisation mei😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update tani😊

kabir was singing n lost in previous night thoughts n nisha was lost in his singing awwee so cute😊

dono ek dusre ko adore krre😊

song selection was perfect👏👏

fir nisha started singing...

kabir ne uska song complete kia n der 10 sec. ka eyelock❤️

update nxt part soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update❤️
nice song selection👍🏼😳
sorry for late comment😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
read 4 updates back to back awesome yaar
jungle hug and they stared caring so much for eac other
kabir lost saurav shocked
the shawl thing was nice 'the song was perfect u described it beautifully
amazing
thanks forthe pm
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 15
all clapped nd praised their beautiful voice
nisha and kabir had thier snacks nd all retired to their respective rooms
while going towards the room
kabir called out nisha - n ...n..nisha
nisha turned - han
k - u sing brilliantly
n - thnks nd u too...she again turned towards her room
kabir smiled - nisha
she again turned
n - ab kya
k - apni medicines time pe le liyo
nisha smiled - ohk gd night
k - good night
n - ab jaun
kabir absent mindedly - nhi ...
n- kya
k -mera matlab han

in morning dolly nd kirti were keeping the things in the car while summit nd jwalu were helping them ...kabir nd saurav were cleaning the other car while nisha was checking all the rooms

dolly called nisha - nishuu chall
nisha with a upset face came outside
n - han di
d - chal aaaj tu hmare saath chal ,...but nisha wanted to go with kabir she dont knw why nd was finding a reason
jwalu came with some bags ...
n - are jwalu tu mere rooom se toh bag lai hi nhi
j - acha ..ruko mai laati hun
n - are nhi tum sab baitho mai laati hun
she went nd came outside with a bag ...till then all have settled in the car
d - nishuu
n - han dolly di jagah nhi hogi ..koi baat nhi mai kabir ki car mei chale jaati hun
she headed towards kabirs car

there kabir was standing in front of the car taking cars support ..he knew that today nisha wouldnt go with him but his heart was denying this again nd again ...finally he gave up nd turned...but he sensed her presence nd turned only to find her coming towards him with a cute smile
kabir smiled back nd ran to open the gate for her
but suddenly sauro appeared in front of him ..kabirs smile faded nd nisha stopped in the mid way
s - thnks for opening the door ..he was going to sit when kabir stopped him
k - tu yahn kya kar rha h ..dolly ki car mai jaaa
s - are mujhe apne dost ke saath jaana h koi prblm
k - aaj badi dosti yaari yaad aa rhi h ..poori picnic mei toh mai invisible tha na
s - are naraz mat ho ..or chal chalte h ...
k - par nisha ?
s - nisha?
he turned nd find nisha there ...who have listened to their convo
nisha with a fake smile - mai dolly di ke paas jaati hun
she turned but sauro stopped her
s - are uss car mei hmari jagah shopping bags ne le li h ..tu hmare saath hi aaja
nisha became happy - ohk
kabir opened the back door for nisha sadly

in car after half hr
s - kya kabir kitna bore ho rha h ..
he got no response as kabir was hell angry with him nd he also dont knw the reason for it while nisha was enjoyin the view outside the window
s - mat baat kar ...isse acha toh radio hi sunn loon

do dil mil rahe h started
s - wow thats my fav song nd turned the volume up

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke


a smile appears on his face nd his eyed automatically shifts to the mirror to look at smiling nisha ..they were just stealing glances of each other ...sauro turns to get the bottle nd finds nisha smiling ..nd when he looks at kabir ...he finds it weird as one minute ago he was angry nd now he is smiling like an idiot ..he shooks his head nd again starts looking out of the window

finally they reached their home
kabir came out of the car stretching his hands ...nd sauro yawning with eyepads on his head
s - yaar thakk gye
k - driving maine ki ..poore raaste tu soya ...or thak bhi tu gya ..wah yaar
sauro ignores his statement - are nisha kahan h
kabir looks into the car nd finds nisha sleeping like a small baby with a cute smile ..kabir adored her for few seconds
s - are yeh toh so gy yaar ...utha na dekh kya rha h
k - are thak gy hogi sone de
saurav finds it disgusting as few mints ago he was scolding him for getting tired nd now he is saying the same thing for nisha
s - toh kya poori raat ise yahin sone de
k - aisa karte h ise andar tak chod aate h
saurav angrily - toh kya ise apni bahon mei uthakar chodkar aayga
he just finished his sentence nd then kabirs act shocked him..he carried nisha in his arms carefully not disturbing her sleep nd headed towards her house
S - are par abhi vo log aay nhi h
Kabir turned nd without saying anything went to their house
Saurav was not able to understand his behaviour nd he followed him
At entrance
K - sauro
S - han
K - gate kholna
Saurav opened the gate with the spare keys given by dolly
K - mai ise guest room mei chodkar aat hun
Sauro nodded
K - gardan kya hila rha h..gate kon kholega
S. - han..han aat hun
Kabir delicately placed nisha on the bed while sauro went to his room to change
When kabir backed..he again fell towards her..he found that nisha have holded his shirt tightly..he smiled...thier faces were just a few inched apart..kabir adored her angleic face nd unknowingly kissed her forehead
He carefully llightened her grip nd covers her with a blanket nd went towards his room
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... cutie nibir ☺️ bechara sauro 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww!!😳
The last part
Kabir ko Nisha se pyaar Ho Gaya kya???
Kissie diya kabira nishu ko 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb chaptr tanya

nibir scene so cute...loved it
cont soon nxt part
thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
very beautiful n lovely update.

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