Nibir ff || Love ho jaane do || Part 21 [pg ~ 68] {07/1/16} - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Tanu tanu tanu kitnaaa cute update tha 😳 Luved it. NIBIR ko sath main car main jana hai 😉 But Saurav ka kya kehna 😆 Nishu kabiraa k bahoon main & Kabiraa ne Nishu ko kiss kiya(vale hi forehead pe)... How romantic 😳 Update nxt part soon & thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww... 😳 so cute😊
Amazing update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awww... cutie nibir ☺️ bechara sauro 🤣

Thnks 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
NiBir☺️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

superb chaptr tanya

nibir scene so cute...loved it
cont soon nxt part
thnks for pm

Tysm..will cont soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
it was shoo cute
nibir ko ek car ma aana h
saurav kabab ma haddi 🤣
aww kabira ne nishu ko kissie diya forehead pe ☺️
loved it tanu ❤️
thank you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 15 - B
hey guys as everyone were updating their stories nd starting new one ...i was also feeling to update it ...here is the part b ..ab pta nhi next part kab update ho 😆

next morning
nisha woke up due to the sunrays coming from the window ...she rubbed her eyes , stretched her arms nd sat straight resting her head on the headrest...she opened her eyes completely nd observed her surroundings ...finally she realised that she is not in her room ...she got a bit scared nd hurriedly went outside the room ...she saw dolly , summit nd sauro on the dinning table ...then she realised that its dollys house ...she sighed relieved ...nd dolly saw her ...

d - are nishu uth gy tu ...chal fresh hoja jakar maine tere clothes washroom mei rakhwa diye h .
n - par dolly di mai yahan kyun so rhi thi ..jahan tak mujhe yaad h mai toh car mei thi na ...
d - are nishu tu car mei so gy thi toh kabir ne tujhe yahan guest room mei sula diya kyunki hum late hogy the ...tu jake fresh hoja ...ek minute aisa kar tu plz kabir ko bhi uthade ...breakfast ka time ho rha h maharaj pta nhi kab tak uthenge ..pehle use utha de ...
n - di mai kaise ...i mean saurav bhi toh utha sakta h nd mujhe fresh hona h ..she felt awkard...
s - nhi mai nhi ..meri vaise hi usse ladai hui h ...pta chale subah subah suna de ..na mai nhi...
d - acha aisa kar nishu tu pehle fresh hoja then utha diyo use mujhe or summit ko kuch kaam h sauro se ...toh tu use uthakar breakfst serve kar diyo please ..hum jaldi vapas aa jaenge...
n - theek ..theek h dii ...mai fresh hone jaati hun

nisha went into the washroom ... she saw a simple yet elegant yellow colour kurti ..just the style she wears ...after bath ...she went to the dressing table where she saw matching bangles ...nishas monologue - yeh dolly di bhi na .. she saw a small letter near it ...nishu tu traditional mei bohat cute lagti h plz do wear it ...nisha shook her head..combed her wet hair ,wore the bangles nd went in the hall

n - lagta h sab chale gy ..chal nisha ab tera sabse difficult task .mission kabir ko uthana ..she went towards kabirs room ..she slowly opened the room ..nd went inside ...it was a messy room ...nisha sighed nd carefully stepped so that she doesnt step on anything .nisha called his name - kabir ..kabir uth jaa
he just shook his head nd covered his face with blanket ...do minute ..nd he again dozed off...
n - hey bhagwan ..saare ladke ek jaise hote h ..kabir uth jaa breakfast ka time ho rha h ...she spoke in the most light way she can nd slowly went towards his bed ...a little nervously ...
k - yaar sone do na ..nhi karna mujhe breakfast ...just go from here ..he spoke in a sleepy voice

nisha was loosing her control now ...she never liked waking up someone specially boys
nisha angrily holded his blanket nd uncovered it nd due to the sudden jerk she stepped on smthng , sliped nd fell on kabir ...nd suddenly her anger vanished...he was looking sho cute with a little tired face ..becoz of driving ..nd messed up hair ..she adored his face with an awww expression nd kabir slowly opened his eyes due to the weight nd drops of water coming on his face ...it was from nishas wet hair ...he smiled seeing her face ...with a light make up nd the fragnance of her perfume was giving him unknown freshness ...they had a small eyelock ...nisha realised her position as she was half lying on him ...she backed off ...kabir also came out of his trance ... nisha stood straight while kabir also sat on the bed feeling awkard

nisha without looking at him - wo..wo ..mai tujhe uthane aay thi dolly di kahin gy hui h ..tu jaldi fresh hoke aaja ..mai breakfast lagati hun ...kabir nodded nd nisha hurriedly went outside not making an eye contact with him ...kabir also went to the washroom to freshen up

after some time..kabir came downstairs nd saw nisha arranging the table...nisha saw him nd smiled ..kabir smiled back nd sat on his place ...he opened the bowl nd saw poha in it

k - yeh kya poha ...nisha i dont eat poha ...please kuch or nahi hai kya khaane ko ..im hungry ...
nisha too sat on her place -nhi kabir ..kitchen mei or kuch nhi h ...yahi khaana padega ...
k - theek h fir aaj mai bhooka hi rehta hun nd he was abt to go when nisha holded his hand ...
n - nhi ruk mai tere liye kuch or bna deti hun ...kabir smiled

nisha went to the kitchen while kabir got busy in his phone ...nd after some 10 minutes she came out with a plate of bread butter jam
k - yeh kya itni jaldi ...kya bnaya h ...
nisha smiled widely nd served him - bread butter jam ..pta h jab mai choti thi na toh maa hamesha yahi deti thi ...ek baar try kar ..tu bhi meri tarah iska fan ho jayga ...
kabir gave a fearing look while trying it nd when he took one bite his face changed to a happy one - wah yaar yeh toh sach mein tasty h ...manna padega teri mom ki invention ko ...yummy n - acha h na ..chalo acha hua ..

they both had their breakfst nd kabir went out to give his car for servicing ..kabir insisted nisha to take care of the house ..nisha denied but at last agreed ...
nisha while reading a magazine - kya yaar kitna bore ho rha h ..pta nhi dolly di kab tak aaygi ..maa ne bhi keh diya ki nisha sambhal le na ghar ..or cousins ..woh toh saare ghode bechkar so rahe hoge ...
while roaming in the house she saw kabirs room nd realised that it is messed up ..she went into the room ...
n - nisha khaali baithne se toh acha h kuch kaam hi karle ...she picked up a broom ...chalo ab iss hell ko heaven bnate hai nd started cleaning up the room
after 1 hr kabir came back ..
k - are yeh kya dolly di abhi tak nhi aay ...or nisha kahan h ..kahi apne ghar toh nhi chale gy ..he called out her name ..nd during her search he went to his room ..what he saw made his eyes go wide
k - yeh kya ..yeh mera hi room h na ..he stepped backwards loooked in the lobby nd again entered ..han mera hi h ..lekin yeh itna saaf kaise ...kahi sauro ne toh ...are nhi use toh khud safai karna nhi pasand ..phir kisne ..he turned to the other side nd found nisha sleeping on the bed taking support of the headrest ...her face was a liitle covered with dirt nd had a cloth in her hand ...acha toh isne kiya h yeh ..lekin kyun ...he waked her up

n - are tu kab aya ...she was just going to rub her eyes when kabir stopped her... nisha looked at him confused ...
k - are tere haath mei dirt lagi h jaa jakar fresh hoja
nisha nodded nd went to freshen up ...nd after some 10 mints she came in the hall ..
. k - aagy acha toh ab bta ki mera room saaf karne ki kya zaroorat thi ...kitna thak gy hogi tu ..
. n - are nhi ...vo mai bore ho rhi thi toh socha kuch kaam hi karlu nd by the way tum log apne room ko itna ganda kyu rakhte ho ...tum aise room mei reh kaise lete ho
k - are ..he was going to argue but he stopped seeing nisha so tired ...it wasnt the right time ... acha vo sab chod ab baith ja or yeh juice pee le u must be tired ...nisha was surprised as he didnt argue ...she sat nd drank the juice ,...as soon as she finished the juice ..dolly , summit nd sauro entered with a lot of shopping bags

d- nishu nishu ..iam really sorry ...vo aate time ek mall mei dekha sale lagi thi toh bas mujhse raha nhi gya ..i hope is dufffer ne tujhe pareshan na kiya ho bol nisha mai abhi iski khabr leti hu
n - nhi di kuch nhi hua ...kisine pareshan nhi kiya ..or maina ab ghar jaati hu ...boht late hogya h
d- han theek h nd sorry once again
n - di srry bolne ki koi zaroorat nhi
she bid a bye to everyone nd left

hope u all liked it ...please give ur comments nd likes ...
ps - this update is for u roopsha 😊
Edited by tanya119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tanu first of all thanx for dedicating the update to me 😃
Now coming 2 the update... It was superb. 👏
Nishu ka fall n then NIBIR eyelock 😳
Kabiraa ka room
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Vaise aaj NIBIR ko disturb karne wala bhi koi nahi tha 😉
Awesome update. Do continue soon & thanx for the pm 😊
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