Nibir SS - Khatti Mhetti si Zindagi Chp 2 & note Pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: angelanju

superb...👍🏼

continue soon and do pm me😊


Thanks
Surely will
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: janvi0513


Exams ke liye best of luck.
Exams ke baad unres karna mat bholna


Ty didu
Nd unres to exam k baad hoga par its really awesome story...three times padhke bhi man nahi bhara
Nd i want pm from next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: janvi0513


Thanks pikachu am very happy you liked it.

janu i want pm frm next time😊😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Very nice story
Feels so warm reading it. Liked the photo reflection part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
It was Superb Janvi ...
Loved it ..

And plz update your SS phehchan ... i m waiting for it ... plz update soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was soo sweet yaar
superb janvi...loved it ❤️
plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice start janvi
very lovely
unique of disclosing the good news yeh sief nibir kar sakte hain
all at arjun palace for picnic mazza ayega
loved that photo thing
and the dairy one nice thought
cont soon
srry for late reply
pm me whenever u update
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Chapter 2

Dear diary
Aaj Nisha ki pregnancy ka second month hai, yeh first month toh bahut ache se guzar gaya but am scared Nisha ke liye baby ke liye. Tum toh jante ho wo kitni badi bandariya hai, ek jaghe se dusri jaghe se kudti rehti hai, kuch khao toh mujh par hi chillane lagti hai. Okay okay ab chlata hoon, lagta hai meri wifey arahi hai.
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Nisha (very sweetly): kya kar rahe ho.
Kabir (with same sweetness): kyun puch rahi ho janu
Nisha: bolo ne please, diary likh rahe the.
Kabir: jab janti ho toh phuchti kyun ho
Nisha: dikhao mujhe kya likha hai (picking up the dairy)
Kabir: (snatching the dairy) thik hai dikhaunga, Lekin phele tu dikha
Nisha: kya
Kabir: teri diary aur kya
Nisha: mein kyun dikhao
Kabir: phir mein kyun dikhao
Nisha: Tu iss liye nahi dikha raha hai, kyunke tu uss mein meri buriyan likhta hai ne.
Kabir: haan likhta hoon, jaise tu meri buriyan nahi karti apni dairy mein.
Nisha: mujhe tujh se bath nahi karni
Kabir: na kar
Nisha: ja rahi hoon
Kabir: kaha
Nisha: tujhe kya
Kabir: tere liye nahi apne baby ke liye phuch raha hoon.
Nisha:(pouting) tujhe sirf baby ki tension hai
Kabir: (cupping her face) mujhe apne dono babies ki tension hai, bas bari wali ki shayad thori zyada.
Nisha: batein na bana
Kabir: Arre batein kaha bana raha hoon, saach, tu hi toh hai meri pheli baby, dairy phadni hai tujhe
Nisha: haan
Kabir: thik hai, jab baby ayega uss din, par tu bhi degi apni dairy mujhe
Nisha: okay
Kabir: that's like a good girl, ab bolo kaha ja rahi thi
Nisha: academy, aur kaha
Kabir: Academy, kyun kuch hai, waise bhi aaj Sunday hai right
Nisha: Mein soch rahi thi dekh ke ao agar koi kaam ho.
Kabir: Tu tension kyun leti hai, bhai ko teri zarurat ho woh call karenge
Nisha: Kabir Lekin mein phele se kahe chuki hoon unhe ke I will be coming
Kabir: don't worry mein khe dunga bade bhaiya ko ke tu nahi ja rahi hai, (looking at a plate lying there) ye lo abhi tak breakfast nahi khaya, chal khale mein bhai ko phone karta hoon.
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Dear diary,
Uffo, mera over protective hubby, usse nahi pata but I know wo tension mein hai iss liye nahi jahta ke mein jao, magar isko Kaun samjahe ke mujhe ya baby ko kuch nahi hoga. Lekin jab bhi wo meri care karta hu toh bahut acha lagta hai, waise wo toh humesha meri care karta hai phir bhi. Lekin jab zyada over protective banta hai thora khadoos ban jata hai.
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Call
Kabir: bade bhaiya Nisha nahi ane wali, koi problem nahi hogi right
Viraj: koi problem nahi hai Chote, hum ne khud Nisha se kaha hai wo rest kare, magar usne zid ki, toh hum ne haan ki.
Kabir: thank you
Viraj: waise Chote tum kyun chate ho, ke Nisha na aye
Kabir: bhai ap jante hai wo kitni badi bandariya hai. Apna khyal bilkul nahi rakhegi.
Viraj: hum, Kaira aur priyanka unka khyal rakhte, bharosa nahi hai apko.
Kabir: bharosa hai iss liye itni tension nahi hai.
Viraj: ab hum chalte hai
Kabir: bye bade bhaiya.
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Kabir: Aaj tu academy ja rahi hai, tu ne kal kaha tha
Nisha: haan zaruri meeting hai.
Kabir: Lekin apna khyal rakhna, apni dawayan time par lena, bhol mat jana
Nisha: bhol gayi, toh bhi tu mujhe call karte yaad diladega
Kabir: tujhe nahi bade bhaiya, bhabhi aur priyanka ko, agar tujhe call kiya tu phir se bholagi, un teeno ki wajhe se tujhe academy jane de raha hoon.
Nisha (monologue): thank you bhai, Kaira thanks priyanka agar aap dono na hote toh yeh over protective freak mera jena mushkil kar deta.
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Dolly: kya hua, ase shakalein kyun bana rahi hai
Nisha: Kabir aur Kaun Dolly Di wo pura pagal ho chuka hai
Dolly: kya hua
Nisha: (eating mixed cut fruits) wo itna over protective hai.
Dolly: Nisha iss mein tu ne Kaun se fruits dale hai
Nisha: apple, strawberry aur hai papita
Dolly: kya de mujhe yeh, tujhe pata hai pregnancy mein papita nahi khana chaiye, tu ne phele toh nahi khaya
Nisha: nahi jab se mein pregnant hui hoon nahi khaya
Dolly: shukar manna Nishu, Kabir yahan nahi hai
Kabir: Kyun mera ana pasand nahi hai Dolly
Nisha: tu yahan
Kabir: kyun mein apne saural nahi asakta (looking at the fruit bowl in Nisha's hand) yeh kya hai Nisha tu papita kha rahi hai pagal hogayi hai nahi janti pregnancy mein isse nahi khate
Nisha: nahi khaya, waise bhi mujhe nahi pata tha
Kabir: Iss one and a half month mein, kya mein ne jab tujhe fruits diye uss mein papita tha.
Nisha: tu ne mujhe toh nahi bataya, meri kya galti
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Kabir: jaldi agayi aaj (sees Kaira entering inside) bhabhi aap bhi aye hai, kya bade bhaiya aur priyanka aye hai
Kaira: nahi Kabir sirf hum aye hai Nisha ke saath.
Kabir: waise acha hua hai aap Nisha ko jaldi lekar agayi, agar academy mein zyada kaam nahi tha bade bhaiya aur priyanka ko bhi jana chaiye tha
Kaira: nahi Kabir wo actually...
Nisha: academy mein kaam hai Lekin mujhe aur Kaira ko nahi iss liye agaye
Kabir: bhabhi bataye baat kya hai (Kaira and Nisha look at each other) bhabhi aap mujh se, apne ek lute deevar se sachai chupaegi.
Kaira: wo actually aaj Nisha sidyon se girne wali thi (Nisha closes her eyes because she sees Kabir's expression) Lekin don't worry priyanka time par agayi thi.
Kabir (angry): kya, Nisha tu...
Kaira: Kabir isse danto mat
Kabir: bhabhi mein humesha usse kheta hoon sambhal ke chala kare, phir bhi
Nisha: Kaira khao usse mujhe chakar agaye the iss liye pair phisal gaya.
Kabir: Bhabhi kahye isse agar chakar araha the wo chal kyun rahi thi, ab bas tu academy nahi jayegi, that's it
Nisha: mein ghar mein akele nahi rahe sakti
Kabir: akele kyun mein bhi rahunga tumhare saath.
Nisha: aur humari dance academy Kaun sambhal ayega
Kabir: students have a leave for a week, aurge uske baad assistants sambhal layenge aur chala jaunga agar zarurat pari. But I don't think that will be necessary.
Nisha angrily leaves the room.
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Viraj: Kaira aap Nisha ko ghar paunch ke agayi.
Kaira: yes, Kabir was very angry when he got to know Nisha was about to fall of the stairs.
Viraj: hmm hum baat karenge Chote se
Kaira: aur uss ne Nisha se kaha ke wo academy na aye aur Nisha is baat par upset hogayi
Viraj: hum baat kar lenge
Viraj calls Kabir and ask to meet him at a cafe
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Viraj: kya hua Kabir tum Nisha aur baby ko lekar itni fikar mein kyun ho.
Kabir: wo apna khyal bhi nahi rakti
Viraj: Kabir Nisha ko apne aap se bandhne kar, you won't be able to protect her, you will only suffocate her.
Kabir: mein sirf un dono protect karna chata hoon.
Viraj: Kabir apko yaad hai ek Nisha aur Alisha ko kuch gunde chedne lag rahe the, Alisha ne kisse tarhe tumhe phone lagaya, tumhara phone speaker par tha aur hum bhi tumhare saath the, jab hum ne un dononki awaz sunni hum jald se jald nikalana chate the par apko yaad hai aap ne kya kaha
Flashback
Viraj: Kabir tum itne relax kar rahe ho, jaldi wahan jate hai
Kabir: bade bhaiya, Nisha khud ko aur Alisha ko sambhal layegi. I don't want to go their and make Nisha feel that she needs me to protect her, I will always by her side but that doesn't mean she can't fight on her own. Mere pyaar kabhi uss ki kamzori nahi banyega. Aur agar Nisha ko lagta ke wo situation handle nahi kar sakti wo phone karti na ke Alisha.
Flashback ends
Kabir gets up and leaves
Viraj: kaha ja rahe ho Chote
Kabir: jab se usse academy Jane se manna kiya hai meri wifey mun phula ke baithi hai, uss toh batao ke wo kal academy ja rahi hai
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Kabir: mujh se naraz ho
Nisha doesn't reply
Kabir: acha meri wifey bahut naraz hai, baby apne mama se khao ke wo kal academy ja sakti hai, aur Jo jahe kar sakti hai, papa kuch nahi kahenge, bas wo apna khyal rakhe
Nisha doesn't answer
Kabir: please baat kar, dekh aap very sorry bahut tang kiya mein ne tujhe, Lekin ab se nahi tu Jo jahe wo karo. I know bahut over protective ho gaya tha, but kya karo Dar tha
Nisha: kyun Kabir tujhe lagte hai mein humare baby ko kuch hone deti
Kabir (nods his head negatively): nahi, mein iss baby se bahut pyaar karta hoon nahi jahta usse kuch hojaye lekin mujhe uss ke liye kam tere liye zyada Dar lag raha tha agar tu apna khyal ab na rakhe aur delivery ke waqt koi complications agaye toh (tears in his eyes and looks at Nisha) agar tujhe kho du toh, Agar baby ko kuch hojaye tu phir se pregnant ho sakti hai, agar tujhe kuch hojayega toh mein...
Nisha (hugging Kabir): I am sorry aaj se khud ka khayal rakhungi.

So this was the second month of Nisha's pregnancy, hope you all liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please like this post if you want pms for any further updates of this story., because I am confused who to send it to and who to not.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update janvi 👏
Loved it 😃

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