main tumhe late comments post karne ke liye sorry kehna tyaag rahi hun Mansi kyunki ab toh sorry word bhi mujhse tang aa gaya hoga😆🤣
iss liye seedhe story pe aati hun😉
I m feeling bad that iss story ke prlogue pe bhi maine comment nahin kiya which I used to love doing and motivate u to write an awesome story 😭
but koi baat nahin ab at least first chapter pe comment karke tumhe khush karne ki koshish karti hun😊
What an intriguing and amazing start Mansi👏
I was jumping with joy when I read the start
I m in love with your concept and the prologue itself❤️
This story had an insane amount of optimism and positivism attached to it which is pulling its readers like a magnet😳😃
dear diary... u know how it feels when u go crazy for something... I will tell u... it feels like u... u r an iron piece being pulled towards a magnet and that thing or I say that someone. U hallucinate... u daydream... everything around u seems to be indicating towards the same thing... u smile stupidly when alone... and try to hide that from everyone as they will think u have gone nuts... n all of a sudden when ur sanity surface in ur mind again... u think u have acted like a fool all this time but again that craziness hover over u n u throw ur sanity back in the head... thats how u feel... n that's how I feel... yes deary... I have gone nuts... crazy over someone I can't have... just can dream of him... I haven't in my wildest dream have dreamt of something like this... I badly wanted to say that to him but alas... I can't... he is far from my reach... but still m happy... happy to feel this way... I don't know if its love or just an infatuation... whatever it is... I just love the feel... I don't know how long it will last... but I will definitely cherish it for long..."- Love this part❤️❤️ U have as always penned down Nishu's thoughts beautifully👏👏👏 Nisha's enthusiasm and energy is tranferred onto us through this diary and we as readers are equally excited to know her emotions and her story😳😃😃 U have captured her emotions very well👍🏼
" hey sweetheart, I know I write so less these days... but u r the only one I have with whom I can share it with. God bless the person who gifted me you... ahh... kya kahu... aaj fir vhi baat likhunga... ha... fir vo hi chehra... jo haunt me like a mirage... that liveness of her eyes... that beautiful smile... that musical laughter... her heavy eyelashes... that pink ting on her cheeks... every thing... almost every detailed thing haunt me... but alas... I can't see her again... u know what people say... they say when u became someone big... u can get everything... but thats the half truth... I can't get her... I don't even know her name... I can't find her... she is just a beautiful mirage... but I want to know her... tell her how crazy this all is... I have barely saw her for 2 minutes that day... but it was enough for me to go mad for her... I tried... I tried to get out and call her or just see her for some more minutes... but that wasn't possible... and now here I m... sitting... remembering her and letting my heart pound with loud thuds by her mere thoughts... m helpless and it seems to be a crazy thing... but I love it too... I luv her memory... I luv this feel..."- Love this part too❤️ The way u have described Nisha in Kabir's thoughts is again commendable👏👏 The plethora of emotions and feelings in his mind has been conveyed exceptionally😳😳
Sleep had evaded him since that day. He just kept thinking about the possibilities to meet her again... see her again. " stop it kabir... u r going to get mad one day..." he rebuked himself. " will I always just burn like this... or maybe destiny get us along some day..." he hoped.- So deep Hayee mai mar jaawan😳
Their desire to meet each other and their feelings towards each other are just overwhelming😳
Loved the introduction too much😉
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Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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