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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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I was waiting for this... I love it
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awsum
vj n nisha scene was so sweet.
viraj is taking all d responsibilities..gud...
kabira ki k panti phir se start...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...blushy blushy update...☺️


Luved it...Continue soon & thanx for the pm...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
AUTHOR'S NOTE

Hello guys...
After a long time here posting next part of the story...
I know sab diappointed hoge mujhse...next part dene mai itna time jo lga dia 😳 😳
but i know K khaandaan k K's mujhe maaf kar denge...
bcoz of my exam itna der hua...age se aisa na ho ye yaad rakhungi aur koshish bhi karungi..
i want to say sorry to all those K's jinhone mujhe regularly apne update k PM's kiye hai but mai bcoz of my busy routine abhi tak unki stories pe comment nhi kar pai... K's mai roj kuch kuch update padh k comment kar ehi hu... so jin jin ne update k PM bheje hai unhe wait karane k liye sorry...
Lastly , want to say sorry for not rply everyone pichle update k comments par 😉
now K's enjoy the next part
Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello..😳
chotu update k liye sorry 😉
time ka issue hai...
unse fihaal itna hi ho paya 😳

PART 13

Next day

Vasu - viraj kha hai aap ??...(to decorator) oho...beta ye kya lga dia hai...kitna pheeka lag rha hai (annoyed) ise badaliye...(to other decorator) aur aapne flowers lagane m kitni kanjoosi ki hai... aur acche se sajaiye (irritated)

Viraj - (smiles seeing her mom in this state) maa..maa..maa..(vasu ko side hug dete hue) calm down...relax..

Vasu - (tensed) hum kaise relax ho viraj...

Viraj - maa.. wo sab apna kam acche se kar rhe hai...aapko tension lene k jaroorat nhi hai...plzz relax...(lovingly)

Vasu - (deep breath lete hue...yet making tensed face) ohk..

Viraj - (smiles) maa...kabir ne sari daramebaazi aap se hi sikhi hai...

Vasu - (viraj ka ears twist karte hue) hum daramebazi karte hai...

Viraj - (fumbling) n..nhi...hmne aisa kab kha...

(n both starts laughing seeing eachother)

Viraj - (lugh ko control karte hue) maa...aap bilkul bhi fikr mat kariye ye reception bilkul bhi pheeka nhi hoga..

Vasu - (viraj k cheeks ko caress karte hue) I know beta...

KN House

Kabir - nisha... ye bhai ne kha ka address dia hai yaar...unhe pta hai ki mujhe jaipur k bare m kuch bhi jayada nhi pta fir bhi pta nhi ye kha ka address mujhe de dia hai aur evening m direct whi pahuchne ko kha hai..(irritated)

Nisha - oho...kabir... iti si bat pe itna irritate kyu ho rha hai...(kabir k paas ake) la mujhe dikha address...shayad mujhe pta ho...

Kabir - ya...may be...

Nisha - wow... (shouts in excitement)

Kabir - (sacred) oye..kya hua ?? gala kyu faad rhi hai ??

Nisha - kabirr...ye tere papa ka palace hai...(happily) aur viraj sir ne hamara reception wha rakha hai...

Kabir -papa ka palace (in a slow voice in emotional tone)

Nisha - (kabir ko side hug karte hue) ha kabir...

Kabir - (bade bhaiya kitna sochte hai hum sab k liye...mere liye , maa k liye )(emotional)

Nisha - kabir I m super happy today...for you , me n our chotu si small si family...(in a childish way)

Kabir - (nisha ko head pe kiss karte hue) me too...( pta nhi bhai ne aur kya kya soch rakha hai ...I LOVE YOU BADE BHAIYA)


Gangwal house


RaLa bedroom

Ramesh - (confused n lil angry) vasundra ab kya chahti hai ?? hume kyu rathore palace bulaya hai ?? baccho ka phone bhi nhi lag rha k unse hi kuch pta chal sake... na jaane ab kya karna chahti hai..

Laxmi - (worried) whi to... mujhe bhi bht tension ho rhi hai... aise achanak phone kar k rathore palace bulaya... maine socha nishu se baat kru par pta nhi kyu use bat hi nhi ho paa rhi...

Ramesh - chalo niche chal k babu ji aur baki sab se iss bare m bat karte hai... jo faisla hoga wo khud hi le lenge...


Everyone in courtyard

Dadu - ha ramesh... bolo bhai... kya bat karni thi tumhe jo sabko yaha aise achanak bulaya (in his usual tone)

Ramesh - babu ji wo...(was about to tell everything...tabhi piche se viraj k aawaj ati hai)

Viraj - Namaste (viraj hath fold kar k)

Everyone surprised

Ramesh - viraj... Aap ??

Viraj - (dadu ka pair chute hue) namaste dada ji... aap sab soch rhe honge ki hum yaha achanak kaise aur kyu ?? to hum aap sab ko kuch batana chahte hai...

Ramesh - (tensed) kya bat hai ??

Viraj - Mr. Gangwal... oh sorry... Ramesh uncle...aisi tension wali koi bat nhi hai...(smiles) mai batata hu...

Dada ji - are..batao bhi ki bat kya hai ?? (in his usual tone)

Viraj - dada ji aap sabhi jante hi hai jo kuch din pahle hua... Jo hua wo sab maa ki wajah se tha.. aur maa ne apni galti maan li hai.. wo sab kuch accha karna chahti hai... kabir aur humne bhi unhe maaf kar dia.. maa ko unke bte aur kabir ko uska pyaar wapas mil gya hai... aur isi liye maa chahti hai ki ek choti si party rakhi jaye... (dadaji ko invitation card dte hue) aur isi liye hum aap sab ko bulane aye hai..

Dada ji - (card ko dekhte hue) ye to reception ka card hai ?? (Questioningly)

Everyone confused

Viraj - ( smiles) wo...maa chahti hai ki kabir aur nisha k shadi ka ek grand reception ho...kyu k wo kabir k shadi m yaha nhi thi islie...(smiles)

Dadi - (smiles) bhali thari... je to bada hi accha ka faisla lia vasundra ne...

Everyone praises...

Dadu - (smiles) hume badi khushi hai ki sab accha ho gya hai... humari bacchi khush hai... hume aur kya chahiye... kyu ramesh ?? (ishara karte hue)

Ramesh - ( emotionally) ha..babu ji...

Dada ji - (ramesh ki taraf dekhte hue) waise tum bhi kuch kehne wale the na ??

Ramesh - (smiles lightly) jo mai kehne wala tha... jis bat ki mujhe chinta thi wo sab viraj k ane se khtm ho gai

Everyone - matlab

Ramesh - abhi viraj k ane se pahle vasundra ka phone aya tha.. usne bola ki hum sabko rathore palace aana hai aur fir phone kaat dia... Bs iyhi sun k mai...(viraj cuts in middle)

Viraj - wo ...maa ne phone nhi kata balki battery low hone ki wajah se phone kat gya...aur mai yhi aa rha tha to humne dubara phone nhi kia)

Ramesh - koi bat nhi...ab to sab pta chal hi gya hai to hum sab jaroor ayenge...

Evening...


Rathore Palace

(The whole Palace was decorated beautifully with red roses n yellow flowers , with golden n white light curtains and lights all around... seems like GRAND CELEBRATION was going to be held on.. )

Vasu - (seeing palace...emotional)(apne tears pochte hue)

Viraj - maa...(slow voice) aapko pasand nhi aya kya ??

Vasu - (viraj ko lovingly dekhte hue) bht pasand aya beta... thank you iss khubsurat pal k liye

Viraj - maa... kabir hamare bhai hai... Aur apne chote bhai k liye hum ye to kya isse bhi jayada kar sakte hai...aur fir agar ye khwaish humari maa ki ho to unke liye kuch bht grand karna to banta hai na...

Vasu - (sees viraj with eyes full of tars)

Viraj - (hugs vasu) maa hum aapko khush rakhne k liye ye kahte hai...rulane k liye nhi...

Vasu - (apne tears pochte hue)...hum bht khush hai beta...apne bte ko paa k (viraj k cheeks ko sahlate hue) apne beto k beech ka pyaar dekh k , apne bte aur bahu ko khush dekh k...(smiles with tears)

After n hour...


Whole gangwal family enters...

Viraj - (hath fold kar k ) Namaste...aaiye...

Dada ji - (palace k sajawat ko dekhte hue) aapne taiyaari to bht acchi ki hai...

Dadi - (smiles) wo kya kahe hai...hm...beautiful...

Viraj - (smiles ) thank you dadi ji dada ji...

Ramesh - viraj beta sach mai aapne bht hi acchi taiyariyaan ki hai...

Viraj - ( smiles) humne to bs wo kia hai jo maa chahti thi..

Laxmi - ( emotionally) nisha bht hi kismet wali hai jo use kabir jaisa jivensathi aur...sath m itna pyaar karne wali saas mili hai...

Ramesh - waise nisha , kabir , vasundra hai kha ?? (confused)

Viraj - (idher udhar najar ghumate hue) maa to abhi yhi thi... wo subh se hi taiyaariyon k wajagh se hare k ki class lga rhi hai...

Everyone laughs...

Laxmi - aur nisha , kabir...??

Viraj - unke liye gaadi bhej di hai wo dono bs ate hi honge..

Laxmi - (smiles)

Viraj - aap sab aaram se baithiye...hum maa ko dhoodh k ate hai...



waiting for likes n comments...😳

Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nishi a big hug
finally update kar diya
toh rajbir ke papa ke palace pe nibir ka reception ho raha hai
accha laga vasu ko nibir ke liye itna excited dekh ke
vasu and viraj talks was also nice
lovely yaar
cont soon
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update aa gaya finally
Viraj-Vasu 😊
Nibir
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Finally aa gaya
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it😊

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