a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35* - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Bcz I m ASR ian & Gueesing is My JSA

Waise Maine yeh bhi guess kia Y Kabir was angry on Nishu vo bhi pehli baar...😆 jab aap yeh disclose karoge den I wl again Dance If My guess was rt on dat tooo🤣

achaa thik h .. let me update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya

Nice chapter 😊
NiBir 😳
Sheena and her friends...how dare they 😡
Felt bad for both Nisha and Kabir
Continue soon...

P.S Dekh kitni jaldi unress kardia... 🤣

riya... 🤣... itna jaldi unres... mai to bhul bhi gyi thi ki koi res reh gya h 😡 🤣...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dheere Dheere Mere Zindagi main Agla RES aana... 🤣🤣🤣
Dheere DHeere Mere DIL ko Next Update se Attack Denaaa...🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Dheere Dheere Mere Zindagi main Agla RES aana...
🤣🤣🤣
Dheere DHeere Mere DIL ko Next Update se Attack Denaaa...🤣

tu aspirin mnga k rakh le... 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

riya... 🤣... itna jaldi unres... mai to bhul bhi gyi thi ki koi res reh gya h 😡 🤣...


Aila 😲 🤣
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this one is for annie and niha... I know I have made u guys wait too long... sorry TJM - 4 Kabir turned around and found a crew member from NYC trip. " hey... anshika... tum yha..." kabir said surprised. " ha vo... show successful tha to mjhe holiday mil gyi... to mai yha aa gyi mere ghar..." she said. " nice... tm yha se ho" kabir asked. " ha... waise mjhe tm se kuch baat karni thi kabir... tmhari... wife k baare m.." she said in a serious tone. Kabir looked at her and then at nisha. " cafeteria chale " she said and he nodded. They both sat on a corner table. " kya baat h anshika... kuch hua h kya" kabir asked. " ha kabir... bhot kuch ho gya... shayad tmne notice kia ho ki nisha kuch gumsum si h... actually vo... hua ye h ki..." and she told him how jiya and sheena has talked about nisha and how she heard them and all about her reaction at that moment. " mai wha se guzar rhi thi when I saw nisha running towards ur room crying and saw jiya and sheena smirking seeing her and when I confronted them they told me how they made nisha felt awful about herself" she concluded. Kabir was almost in tears hearing it. " kabir I hope u will sort this out... n I wanted to tell u this in New York itself but didn't get the time... and when I saw u here I thought to tell u all this..." she said. Kabir thanked her. " I will take ur leave kabir... m getting late" she said and left. Kabir was hell angry now. How could people get so low. But he kept himself in check and thought to talk to her in home. they reached home and nisha went straight to her room ignoring kabir. " hua kya h is ladki ko... kam se kam mjhe to bta sakti thi ye..." he thought. She looked at their wedding photo which soon got blurred due to tears. He entered the room and stood behind nisha. " nisha mjhe sach janna h..." he said. " kaunsa sach..." she asked. " ur jhuth nhi sunna mjhe nisha... tu kaise kisi ki bhi baat p ese behave kar sakti h" kabir screamed. Nisha was dumbstruck. " ha nisha sab pta h mjhe" kabir said. She turned towards him and moved away. "Kuch galat to nhi kha na un lgo ne kabir... jo kha vo sach hi to tha... dekh mjhe... ur dekh khud ko... did I match u... no... " she said. Kabir was baffled at what he heard. "What..." he screamed. " ha kabir... vo kya sab yhi sochte h... ur sahi hi h... mai hu hi kya... kuch bhi nhi... tere layak nhi hu mai " she screamed. " Nishaa... " kabir shouted. He moved forward and grabbed her shoulders. " how dare u... how dare u say that... " kabir said. " I didn't dare kabir it is a truth... jab tjhe ye realise hoga tb tk..." she couldn't complete her words as they got lost in a loud noise. " CHUP... EK DUM CHUP NISHA... EK SHABD UR NHI SAMJHI... SAMAJHTI KYA H TU KHUD KO... JO TERE MAN ME AAEGA BOLTI JAEGI... JRA SA DIMAG H KI NHI TUJME... YE SAB BOLNE SE PEHLE... TUNE EK BAAR... EK BAAR NHI SOCHA..." kabir was out of his senses now. She was standing rooted to her spot. His eyes were bloodshot red... anger dripping from them. It seemed he would create a havoc in a minute and his voice was unbearably painful. " MERE BAARE M YHI SOCHTI H TU... KI YEH PAISA FAME DEKHKE... CHHOD DUNGA MAI EK DIN TJHE... YHI JAAN PAYI H TU AAJ TAK MERE BAARE M... KABHI SAMJHA NHI TUNE MJHE???... TJHE JRA BHI BHAROSA NHI H MJHPE... MERE PYAAR P?????... " kabir yelled at her. He hit the wall behind nisha with such a force that his hand started bleeding. Nisha closed her eyes due to its impact. " Kabir tere haath se khoon..." nisha was trying to hold his hand when he pulled it away with a jerk. " koi jarurat nhi h meri fikar karne ki... hu kaun mai ha... koi maayne to h nhi mere tere lie... to ye fikr kyu nisha... jab tjhe mjhpe bharosa hi nhi tu mjhe apna samjhti hi nhi to fir ye chinta kyu?... koi jarurat nhi h is sab ki"... he hissed bitterly yet painfully. He turned and walked towards the door crashing another glass vase into the ground deepening his wound further. But his mind never registered the pain and he banged the door leaving behind a shattered nisha. Nisha slide down the wall with never ending tears in them. " what have I done... how could I..." she cried louder. " how could I even think like that... how could I hurt him" she asked herself hitting her own head. His words has pricked her heart and soul. Kabir was on the terrace when nisha came running and tried to get hold of him. " mna kia h na tjhe... samajh nhi aata kya..." he said. " kabir dekh tu kitna bhi naraz hoja par please ye chot to.." she said. " mna kar dia na nisha... " kabir said jerking her hand. " please kabir... dekh m really sorry... mjhe kya hua tha mjhe khud samaj nhi aaya kabir par dekh I'm really sorry don't hurt urself for me..." her tears blinding her when she felt her head spinned again but she tried hard to control herself. " kya samjhu mai nisha... mujhe sirf itna hi samj aa rha h ki tjhe mjhpe bharosa nhi h... warna tu esa kyu karti kya matlab tha mjhe avoid karne ka.. ese behave karne ka... tune aaj jo kha h use mai kabhi nhi bhulunga nisha" he yelled looking away hiding his tears amidst his anger. " Kabir..." she tried to get hold of him again before her head took her for another ride and this time she couldn't control it and passed out. She would have fallen if kabir hadn't catched her in the nick of time. " nishaa.. nishaa .. kya hua... bol..." kabir cried her name. He quickly picked up her in his arms and ran towards there room. " Nisha mam... " he heard a voice near the door. " kabir sir... kya hua nisha mam ko..." supriya asked. " pta nhi achanak..." kabir said when supriya continued. " jarur mam ne apna dhyaan nhi rkha hoga... competition wale din bhi unhe chhakkar hi aaya tha isile to vo target miss ho gya tha... uske baad maine kitna bola ki aap rest karo... par inhone ek nhi suni ur usi condition m aapke paas chali gyi" she said in a go. This came as another shock for kabir and his anger now knew no bounds. He softly placed her on the sofa and ran to bring the water. He made nisha drink some water and splashed some on her face. " kabir " she said still in daze. " tmhe pta tha to tmne mjhe phone p kyu nhi btaya supriya" kabir asked in a low but angry voice. " mjhe lga mam aapko khud bta dengi... vo itne mahino se khud ko itna stress kar rhi thi... to " kabir cut off supriya. " yha nisha k sath rehna... mjhe kuch kaam h " kabir said trying to control his anger. Kabir stormed out of the house with blood still dripping through his wound. He wasn't in his senses at all. He drove his car like a mad man nearly hitting two or three things lying on the road side on the odd hour of the day. After a mad ride of almost an hour his car screeched to a halt in front of a ruin. Kabir jumped out of the car and kicked a stone lying near by with full force and screamed out loud. " kyu... kyu... kiya ye sab nisha..." kabir cried. " kya mai kuch jaanane ka hak nhi rakhta... kya sach m mere pyaar m koi kami rh gyi" he thought. " kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki..." he was broken today. nisha's word were still stabbing him like a knife cutting his flesh. Here nisha slowly gained her consciousness. " Kabir" she called him. " mam... mam aap thik h na" supriya ran towards her and made her sit. " supriya...tum?... kabir kha h" she asked. " vo to bahar gye h..." she informed her. Tears welled up in her eyes but she controlled them. " supriya... raat bahot ho gyi h... tm ghar jao..." she said. " par mam sir ne mjhe aapke pass..." supriya said. " m ok supriya... ur sir bhi aate honge tmhare... tm jao..." she said. " Ok mam... take care" supriya said and left. Nisha was back in her room. " kya kiya nisha tune... itna hurt kaise kar sakti h tu kabir ko... kya kya nhi feel karwaya tne use... tu uske pyaar p shak kaise kar sakti h... un stupid ladkio ki baato m aake... nhi galti un ladkio ki nhi teri h nisha... sirf teri galti h... jiski sza kabir khud ko de rha h..." she said. She kept weeping remembering how hurt he was. The pain which was reflecting in his expression is now eating her up causing her an unbearable pain. She felt like she would choke to death due to this guilt developing inside her. " Kabir... kha h tu... please aaja" she cried bitterly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...
So cute
I loved this 😳
Continue soon 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res again

unres

superb update mansi👍🏼

anshika ne kabir ko sab bta dia😊

loved kabir anshika convo😊

kabir kinne gusse me h...😔



She looked at
their wedding photo which soon got
blurred due to tears. He entered the
room and stood behind nisha. "
nisha mjhe sach janna h..." he said.
" kaunsa sach..." she asked. " ur
jhuth nhi sunna mjhe nisha... tu
kaise kisi ki bhi baat p ese behave
kar sakti h" kabir screamed. Nisha
was dumbstruck. " ha nisha sab pta
h mjhe" kabir said. She turned
towards him and moved away. "Kuch
galat to nhi kha na un lgo ne
kabir... jo kha vo sach hi to tha...
dekh mjhe... ur dekh khud ko... did
I match u... no... " she said. Kabir
was baffled at what he heard.
"What..." he screamed. " ha kabir...
vo kya sab yhi sochte h... ur sahi hi
h... mai hu hi kya... kuch bhi nhi...
tere layak nhi hu mai " she
screamed. " Nishaa... " kabir
shouted. He moved forward and
grabbed her shoulders. " how dare
u... how dare u say that... " kabir
said. " I didn't dare kabir it is a
truth... jab tjhe ye realise hoga tb
tk..." she couldn't complete her
words as they got lost in a loud
noise. " CHUP... EK DUM CHUP
NISHA... EK SHABD UR NHI SAMJHI...
SAMAJHTI KYA H TU KHUD KO... JO
TERE MAN ME AAEGA BOLTI JAEGI...
JRA SA DIMAG H KI NHI TUJME... YE
SAB BOLNE SE PEHLE... TUNE EK
BAAR... EK BAAR NHI SOCHA..."
kabir was out of his senses now. She
was standing rooted to her spot. His
eyes were bloodshot red... anger
dripping from them. It seemed he
would create a havoc in a minute
and his voice was unbearably
painful. " MERE BAARE M YHI
SOCHTI H TU... KI YEH PAISA FAME
DEKHKE... CHHOD DUNGA MAI EK
DIN TJHE... YHI JAAN PAYI H TU AAJ
TAK MERE BAARE M... KABHI SAMJHA
NHI TUNE MJHE???... TJHE JRA BHI
BHAROSA NHI H MJHPE... MERE
PYAAR P?????... " kabir yelled at her.
He hit the wall behind nisha with
such a force that his hand started
bleeding. Nisha closed her eyes due
to its impact. " Kabir tere haath se
khoon..." nisha was trying to hold
his hand when he pulled it away
with a jerk. " koi jarurat nhi h meri
fikar karne ki... hu kaun mai ha... koi
maayne to h nhi mere tere lie... to
ye fikr kyu nisha... jab tjhe mjhpe
bharosa hi nhi tu mjhe apna samjhti
hi nhi to fir ye chinta kyu?... koi
jarurat nhi h is sab ki"... he hissed
bitterly yet painfully. He turned and
walked towards the door crashing
another glass vase into the ground
deepening his wound further. But
his mind never registered the pain
and he banged the door leaving
behind a shattered nisha. Nisha
slide down the wall with never
ending tears in them. "


@blue m speechless tears are continuosly rolling frm my eyes 😭 u wrote it so beautifully yr...hatts off to uh...❤️

nisha faint ho gyi...supriya ne sab sach bta dia...kabir ko...

kabir ka state dekh k rona aa rha yr...

sorry for late update n thanx for pm
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago

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