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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

superb update ritssy😊😊

nisha ne saurav k shoulder pe haath rakha aur usne jerk kia...bhut acche tarike se tumne nisha k dar ko express kia😊

nibir talk in park was mindblowing beautifully written

nisha kabir pe kitna vishwaas krti h

doctor k paas jane se pehle wali comedy was superb🤣

doctor ne jab kabir ko nisha ka hath pakadne bola i loved dat scene❤️

i hope kabira apni nishu ka fear jaldi khatam kr de wo scene dohra k

excited for precap😊

thanks nimissy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Omg it was lovely 👏

Nibir
Nibir in park
🤣
And that doc nibir scene 😳😳
Loved it yaar 😳
Waiting

thanks star
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

OMG I loved this! Is baar lamba tha yaar ;) ahahaha it's definitely headed in the right place... can't wait for the next chapter! :))) Thanks for the update!

thanks yaar
glad u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha205

loved it ritika😃

👏

thanks nihu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awesome update ritika
kisne kaha yeh boring h 😡
it's nt at all boring balki I really liked it
kabira nishu ko kitna acche se samajta h
loved the park scene ❤️
doctor n nibir ka scene was superbly pennes down
continue soon m exited for nibir trip

thanks vaishu
ok boring nhi tha gussa mat ho😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello guys i'am back with the update
here it goes


Chapter 10

After office kabir went to saurav's house and even asked othersto come over expect Nisha

As kabir entered the house

Sourav- kya hua yaar hum sabko aise urgently kyun bulaya idhar

Dolly- haan kabir kuch tensions hai kya

Kriti- dolly tensions nhi tension

Dolly- haan haan wahi

Kabir- guys relax phele sab batho mein batata hu

All sitted kabir started - actually guys mein Nisha ko suprise dena chahata hun usse kahi bahar le jana chahata hun so uss ke liye tumahri help chahiye

Kriti- hain toh le ja kissne roka

Kabir- kriti mein usse hill station le jana chahata hun

Dolly- kuansa hill station woh jaha hum sab bachpan mein jate the

Kabir- hain wahi dekho na yaar Nisha aaj kal padhai mein itni busy hoti hai ki enjoy hi nhi kar pati thik se toh yeh socha

Sourav- hain toh problem kya hai

Kabir- dadaji

Kriti - oh haan

Dolly- par hum kaise help kare

Kabir- dekho agar tum sab kahoge toh maan jaege and nishu ko permission bhi de dege

Kriti- par kabir kahi aur chalet hain na mein waha ja ja ke bore ho chuki hun

Saurav- hain yaar kabir kissi aur jagah ka plan banate hain na

Kabir(monologue) good job kabire yeh log hill station toh bilkul nhi jaege acche hai waise bhi dr disha ne sirf mere udhar hona sahi samajhti hai

Kabir- accha chalo phir tum kahi aur chale jao mein nishu ko le kar hill sation chala jaa ta hun

Kriti- tu hill station ke piche kyun padha hai

Kabir- arre nishu ka udhar jane ka maan hai iss liye

Dolly- toh tum exactly chahate kya ho

Kabir- dekho hum sab kal jake dadaji se permission lege and Thursday ko nikalege mein Nisha hill station ke liye and tum sab jaha tumhe jana hai par sab Monday ko wapas aa jayega and saare payments mein karunga toh tum sab kidar ja rahe ho

Dolly- jaisalmer chal te hai

Kriti,sourav - ok

Kabir - toh thikhai mein tumhari tickets kar wad eta hun jane and ane dono ki par kal subh Nisha ke ghar yaad rakhna

Kriti, dolly- done

Kabir leaves the house he was about to enter his house when saurav stopped him

Saurav- kabir ek second

Kabir hain saurav bol

Saurav - sab thik hai na

Kabir- hain kyun kya hua

Saurav- aaj tu itni ajeeb bate kar raha than a iss liye achanak yeh plan and woh bhi divided so..

Kabir saurav sab thik hai bola na nishu ke stress o realse karne ke liye.

Saurav - hain thik hai chal bye

Kabir- bye

Kabir leaves but saurav still has some doubts

Nxt morning gangwal house

All of them arrives and tell them about their weekend trip plan dadaji too agrees . all are very happy but kabir is more relieved then happy and Nisha still confused on what is going in his mind kabir notices this and smiles

They had the breakfast at gangwal house and leave while leaving kabir tell Nisha to be ready on time. Nisha nods.

Trip day

Kabir comes to gangwal house to pick Nisha. Nisha comes to the car but is surprised to see only kabir but doesn't ask any thing as she knows she will not get the answers she quietly sits in the paseenger seat. Everyone had come to wish them a safe journey.

In car after sometime

Nisha- kabir baki sab kidhar hain

Kabir- jaisalmer ke bus mein aur kaha

Nisha- kya kabir ke sab kya chal raha hai

Kabir- meine bola than a ki hume akele jana hai toh sab whi hai

Nisha - kabir thik se bata

Kabir- accha baba gussa mat ho phele tu medicine kha le phir bata hun

Nisha- waise akbir tere liye achha hai abb teen din ke liye subh subh mere ghar aake medicine nhi deni padegi

Kabir giggled

Nisha- lo medicine bhi kha li ab bata

Kabir narrates the entire convo with the gang

Nisha- kya baat hai maan gye janab par kisiko doubt toh nhi hua na

Kabir- saurav ko and shayad abhi bhi puri tarah clear nhi hai

Nisha- kabir sab thik hoga na kahi kuch gadbad ho gyi toh

Kabir holds her hand- relax Nisha mein hoon na

Nisha blinks her eyes and smile and sees out of the window she is lost in the beauty of the place

Nisha- kabir hum puhanch gye kitna saloo baad aye hain hum yaha phele bachpan mein picinic ke liye aate tha family ke sath(all excited)

Kabir smiled seeing her excited just like child

Nisha- kabir hum kis hotel mein ruke hain

Kabir- jo mil jaye

Nisha - kya isska matlab tune phele se booking nhi kar vai

Kabir- nhi

Nisha- kabir tu pagal hai kya peak season hai and bina booking kiye aaye hai duffer kahika

Kabir- arre mujhe kya pata peak hai ya off hai aur tension mat le hotel mil jaega

Nisha- wahi tere liye achha hoga

Kabir- (monologue) hai bhagwan kya ladki hai apne rakshak ko hi maar na chahati hai yeh toh thik ho jaegi kahi mujhe kuch nhi nhi nhi nhi..bacha lena upar wala raksha kar meri

They reached hotel Blue Roof and parked the car and went inside

Kabir to the receptionist- hume do rooms chahiye

Receptioninst- srry sir abhi sirf ek room available hai baki sari full hain

Nisha gave a glare at kabir

Kabir- thik hai hum kisi aur hotel mein check in kar lege

Receptionist- par sir iss area mein yeh ek hi hotel hai and agar koi hoga toh waha pe bhi availability nhi hogi peak season hai na

Kabir swallowed hard and slowly turned towards Nisha who was giving him a deadly glare and mumbled a srry

Nisha to the receptionist- aap yeh aakhri room hume de dijie

Receptionist- ji ma'am yeh rhi chabi

Nisha took the keys and walked towards the room without sparing kabir a glance

Kabir prayed to god and followed her

After reaching the room

Kabir- Nisha i am really srry mujhe yeh nhi pata tha ki abhi peak season chal raha ha ii am genuinely srry yaar dekh tu tension mat le tu bed pe soja mein mein (looks here and there and see the sofa) haan mein iss sofe pe so jauga thik hai chalegana tu gussa mat ho yaar plz (making his bestest baby faces)

Nisha couldn't control her laughter any more and brust into laughter and pulled his cheecks

Kabir stood at his place fully confused while sat on the bed holding her stomach while laughing

Kabir went and sat next to her

Kabir- daant bahut acche aur white hain dekh lia mane ab daant dikha na band kar aur baat kuan sa joke maara maine

Nisha - aww kabir tu kitna sweet aur cute hai (again pulled his cheecks) duffer mein sirf natak kar rhi thi

Kabir- matlab yeh sab drama tha

Nisha- haan jab car mein tune bataya ki booking nhi kit h gussa aaya teri bewekoofi par par phir tujhse yhi umeed ki ja sakti hai after all tu aadat se jo majboor hai

Kabir- oh ...ek min tu mera maajak uda rhi hai

Nisha - arre tubelight jal gyi

Kabir - Nisha ruk tu abhi batata hu tujhe mein tubelight mein bewekoof ruk tu ruk

And their tom and jerry chase begin Nisha running in the entire room and kabir trying to catch her . finally kabir caught her

Kabir- yeh hun mein tubelight bewekoof tu yeh le(and started tickling her)

Nisha's laughter echoed in the entire room.

Nisha- (tried of laughter) kabir plz kabir aur nhi plz dekh mujhe rona bhi aagaya abb aur nhi plz

Kabir- haan thik hai

Both sat on the bed

Kabir- Nisha jaa jaake fresh ho ja phir lunch pe chalete hain

Nisha- hmmm

She openedher bags took her clothes and went to the washroom

Nisha cameout after twenty minutes or so kabir was playing games on his phone.

Kabir(seeing Nisha) - aagyi aap mujhe toh laga aaj andar hi rehene ka irada hai

Nisha looked at kabir from the corner of her eyes

Kabir- abb look kya de rhi hai sach hi toh bola chalo mein bhi jaata hum fresh hone.

Kabir went to the washroom and as soon as kabir went Nisha started the stopwatch of her phone

Kabir came out whistling drying his wet hair

Nisha stopped the stopwatch

Nisha- kabir tu itni jaldi aa gaya

Kabir- aur nhi toh kya mein teri tere 30-30 min ka beauty bath thodi leta hun

Nisha- oh bina beauty bath ke 45 min 39 secs toh bauty bath mein toh aadha din lag jaega hai na

Kabir- kya

Nisha- kya kya tune pure 45 min 39 secs liye fresh hone mein (shouting at him) aur mujhe bol raha tha

Kabir- na na tu awii bol rhi hai proof hai koi

Nisha - haan hai nay eh dekh (she showed her phone) isse tere jaane pe on kiya tha and anne pe off

Kabir- haan .. toh ..thi..thik hai na koi problem hai tujhe

Nisha - nhi

Kabir- phir chal lunch pe (irritated)

Nisha giggled and they went for lunch.

After lunch

Nisha- kabir khi ghumne chalet hain naa

Kbir- Nisha mein drive karke thak gaya hun aaj rehene dete hain kal chale ge plz

Nisha- haan thik hai koi baat nhi tu rest kar le

They reached thete room and kabir went to the sofa to get some sleep but it was too uncomfortable for him

Nisha- kabie bed pe soja

Nisha - arre pagal hai kya idhar kitna uncomfortable hai mein tujhenhi sone dunga idhar

Nisha- kabir hum dono bed pe so sakhte hain

Kabir- par

Nisha - kabir i trust u

Kabir smiled and came to the bed. He slept in no time while Nisha was reading a magazine

After sometime she looked at his cute face and ran a hand over his face and hair he smiled in sleep as he felt her touch.

Nisha too slept on the otherside looking at him and didn't realize when she dozed to sleep.

Kabir woke up due to the alarm and was shocked to see the time it was already 9:30 he saw that Nisha was also sleeping

He called the room service and ordered food for them and woked Nisha up

Kabir- Nisha uth uhth na yaar dinner karle phir sojana

Nisha- kbir plz sone de na

Kabir- Nisha plz uthja

Finally Nisha woked up but still half in sleep

Kabir shook his head and fed her and she ate quietly

Kabir had his dinner after her while Nisha again went to her dream land

Kabir after his food came to Nisha covered her properly with the blanket and smiled at her cuteness he took his phone out captured her while sleeping, later called the room service o clean everything ,did a little search on his phone about the plces to visit near by , had a talk with Dr Disha regarding the plan as it was to be excuted tomorrow .

Finally he came to his side of bed and slept looking at his angel.

hope u like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update ritika.👏
kabir ne baaki gang ko jaisalmer bhej diya.😲
nisha n kabir in a room😳
nisha trusts kabir😳😳😆
lekin ye kabir ka plan hain kya...mujhe darr lag raha hain...
hope nisha gets well soon...and nibir forever.☺️☺️
do update soon..!!
waiting eagerly..!!😆😳
Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww ritzy... awesome yaar... eager to know the plan...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sam_premc

awesome update ritika.👏

kabir ne baaki gang ko jaisalmer bhej diya.😲
nisha n kabir in a room😳
nisha trusts kabir😳😳😆
lekin ye kabir ka plan hain kya...mujhe darr lag raha hain...
hope nisha gets well soon...and nibir forever.☺️☺️
do update soon..!!
waiting eagerly..!!😆😳

thanks annie
daar mat sab thik hoga
par update jaldi hoga ya nhi mujhe nhi pata😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Aww ritzy... awesome yaar... eager to know the plan...

thanks mansi😆

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