nibir ff Humdard ch 13 pg 61 (12/5) - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awesome update ritika 👏
ramesh n nishu scene was sweetly written...u described their bond perfectly
loved nibir convo a lot...u wrote it beautifully
kabir's advising nisha
it was a sweet n cute update
loved it
sorry for late comment

thanks vaishu
no need for srry
mein iss se bhi late comment karti hun
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely yaar 😳

RN scene was so good 👏
Nibir convo 😳
Their understanding 😳
So cute
Thnx 😳
Waiting for nxt part

thanks star
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4

Superb ritzi

Loved nibir understanding
Nisha and ramesh scene was nice
Kabir se baaki sab last mein advice late hai🤣
Loved it
But bahut chota tha
Update soon

thanks nitika
i know chota tha
issi liye nxt part abhi aa raha hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
ok guys yeh raha nxt part
pata hai tum sab ne alternate update maanga tha par isska last part chota tha issliye yeh phele update kiya
hope u all like it

Chapter 9

Nisha's exams were over today and the entire gang was at sourav's place chilling together. Nisha kabir dolly and umesh were sitting in sourav's bedroom and chatting when sourav came running with kriti running behind him with her sandals in hand. Sourav entered the room and hid behind Nisha holding her shoulders. This was something sourav use to do always as Nisha was the only person who could save him from kriti but this time nisha's reaction took each one of them for a shock.

Nisha stood up jerking away sourav's hands she was hyperventing,sweating and fear could easily be recognized on her face. Everyone was shocked seeing such a wierd reaction from Nisha .

Dolly(concerned) nishu kya hua tu thik toh hai na

But Nisha didn't responded

Dolly shock Nisha and that's when she came back to reality

Nisha- haan dolly di

Dolly- Nisha sab fines hai na

Nisha - haan dolly di sab thik hai

Kriti- phir tune se react kyun kiya

Nisha- ab mein kya kahu sabko soch soch Nisha jaldi soch(monologue)

Nisha - haan woh toh tum dono ka jhagda band karvane ke liye tha

Sourav- matlab

Nisha - arre maine socha ki har baar jaise kya hua kyun ladh rahe ho puchune se accha kuch aur try karu aur wahi kiya and dekho tum dono ka jagda khatam ho gaya

Dolly - oh ab mein samjhi yeh sab tera plan tha welldones nishu

Kriti- dolly di welldones nhi welldone hota hai

Dolly- tum samaj gaye na

Kabir- waise Nisha mujhe pata nhi tha kit u kitni acchi actor hai (sarcastically looking staright at Nisha, Nisha avoiding seeing him)

Kriti - arre humari nishu har chiz mein best hai

All of them sat down and continued the talking all the while kabir was continuously staring at Nisha and Nisha avoiding looking at him

Around 1 hour later

kabir-i think ab mujhe chalna chahiye Nisha tub hi chal mein tujhe drop kar dunga

Nisha- hmm

In car

There was a awkward silence between them neither of them were talking

Kabir stopped the car at a park and went out of the car opened the passenger seat asking Nisha to come out. He held her hand and went inside the park . it was dark and no one else could be seen inside the park accept these two.

Nisha- kabir

Kabir- (angrily) chup Nisha ek dum chup bahut jooth bol liya tune muhe apna best frind kehti hi and mujhse yeh baat chupati rhi ki tera daar kabhi khatam hi nhi hua tha tub se leke abb tak woh wahi ka wahi hai. Ek baar toh bol deti Nisha ki kabir tu uss daar ko kaam nhi kar raha sirf daba raha hai.

Nisha-(crying) i am srry kabir ki maine tujhse jooth bola par kabir tu itni kosise kar raha tha agar tujhe yeh pata chal tat oh tujhe bahut bura lagta issliye maine kuch nhi bola i am srry kabir i am really srry

Kabir- (cupping her face) ae nishu please ro mat plz srry tujh pe chilaya i am sorry and Nisha agar tu mujhe baata deti toh mujhe dard nhi hota balki iss baat ka yeki hota kit u mujh pe barosa karti hai

Nisha- mein karti hun kabir

Kabir - janta hu

Nisha hugs kabir and kabir too reciprocates the hug

Kabir - nishu tu mujh pe barosha karti hai na toh ek baat manegi

Nisha- kya

Kabir- kal mere sath doctor ke pass chalegi

Nisha-(breaking the hug) par kabir

Kabir(cutting Nisha) kisiko kuch nhi pata chelega sari prescriptions mein apne ghar rakhunga and medicines bhi. Abb toh chalegi na

Nisha nods a yes

Kabir agains pull Nisha in a hug

Kabir (breaking the hug) chale

Nisha - hmmm

Kabir drops Nisha and goes to his house. He searches for some good psychiatrist in jaipur and gets the number of one Dr Disha

Kabir calls her and takes the morning appointment

Next morning

Kabir reaches the gangwal house , greets everyone and takes Nisha along with him to the doc

Outside the clinic in the car

Nisha- kabir mujhe daar lag raha hai

Kabir- relax Nisha tu abb kuch saalo mein khud ek doc banewali hai and agar docs hi dusre doc ke pass jane se daarege toh baki logon ko kya shlha denge

Nisha smiled and both stepped out of the car and entered the clinic

Kabir- may i come in

Dr disha - come in

Kabir - hello doc i am kabir maine kal raat aapse baat kit hi

Dr disha - yes yes i remember so yehi Nisha hai(looking at her )

Nisha - yes doc mein hi Nisha hun

Dr disha - come both of u ander aa jao

Nisha tum iss chair pe lete jao

Nisha did as told . kabir was sitting behind dr disha and disha beside Nisha

Nisha looked at kabir for assurance and kabir blinked his eyes telling her he is there and this didn't go unnoticed by doc.

Dr disha- Nisha abb apni aakhe band karo and sona ki koshish karo tumneend men ho tumhe neend aa rahi hai aura bb tum apne sapne mein ussi din ko dekh rahi ho and uss din job hi hua mujhe batao shruwat se

Nisha begin telling the entire story of that day how she tried to plz dada ji for permission and finally her papa managed tu gat the permission and how by mistake he even disclosed the secret that kabir is coming back, how happy she was seeing him and their cake fight and dance and everything and finally came the dreadful incident. Nisha facial expressions changed and fear started taking its face as she started descxribing the event of someone taking her into the jungle and forcing him on her. Dr disha indicated kabir to come and sit next to Nisha holdind her hand. He did the same and said that he is there, her fea subsides a little and she told how kabir rescued her and then dropped her at her house, how see could not sleep that night and how kabir came and made her sleep. Nisha also told doc the fact that expect kabir no one else knows about the incident

Nisha was still in sleep and doc asked kabir to come with her to her cabin. They took their seats.

Dr disha - dekho kabir Nisha ke sath job hi hua woh kisi ke liye bhi bahut daravna tha and aise cases mein aksar daar hamesha ke liye rahe jata hai par Nisha ek case mein ek hope hai and shayad last hope and iss cheez ko excute sirf tum kar sakte ho and aur koi bhi nhi kyunki usski umeed sirf tum ho

Kabir- doc mujhe kuch samajh nhi aaya

Dr disha- dekho kabir jab yeh sab hua tha tab Nisha ko bechaya tumne and jaise tumne mujhe bataya ki woh kaise iss cheez ko bhul jati jab woh tumhare sath hoti hai and abhi bhi neend mein jane se phele tumse pucha ki tum ho na aur jab tumne usska hath xthama toh usska daar come hua kabir inn sab se yehi pata chalta hai ki Nisha tumpe bahut barosa karti hai and iss liye yeh akhri koshish bhi tumhe hi karni padegi kyunki iss doctor ne usse 50% cure kar diya hai wahi usse 100% cure kar sakta hai

Kabir- doc maine

Dr disha- haan kabir Nisha ko pheli raat bure sapne aaye the kyun hai na

Kabir- haan

Dr disha - usske baad aaye

Kabir - nhi

Dr disha- wajah jaante ho

Kabir noded in a no

Dr disha- tum kabir tum ne jo bhi kiya uss sabki wajah se usse sapne aana band ho gaye in fact ussne iss cheez ke baare mein sochna bhi band kar diya warna aise patients sirf ussi cheez ke baare mein soch te hain aur kuch nhi

Kabir looked at Nisha and said - kya karna hoga mujhe

Dr disha - Nisha ko woh sab dubra sehene dena hoga

Kabir (surprised) kya

Dr disha- kabir jab Nisha uss incident ke baare mein bol rhi thi daar ke sath gussa bhi tha bas uss gusse ko jitna hoga

Kabir- par mein Nisha ko phirse woh sab nhi bilkul nhi

Dr disha- kissne kaha ki Nisha ko woh khud sehena padega kisi aur ke sath aisa ho usske samne

Kabir - drama

Dr disha- yes kabir par idhar uss jgah nhi kisi nhi jagah kyunki Nisha uss raste bhi toh uss raat pheli baar gyi thi na

Kabir - haan shayad

Dr disha- toh phir tum taiyaar ho

Kabir - haan

Dr disha - yeh lo kabir yeh kuch medicines hai yeh Nisha ko de dena time pe

Kabir - ji doc

Dr disha - kabir yaad rekhna yeh karte waqt Nisha ke sath koi bhi hona chhiye tum bhi nhi usse iss ka samna khud karna hai xhain par usse yeh pata hona chahiye kit um usske sath hi ho usske pass kyunki tum usski taqat ho

Kabir- ji doc

Nibir bided thanks to doc and left

In car

Nisha - kabir doc ne kya kaha

Kabir- unhone kaha ki tujhe jaipur se kahi bahar jane ki zaroorat hai taki tu yeh sab bhul sake and iss liye next weekand hum dono kahi jaege

Nisha- par kabir sabko kya kahege

Kabir- yehi i hum sab friends ek sath ghumne jar aha hai kyunki tere results aane ne baad phirse tu busy ho jaegi and hume time nhi milega and phir baki sabko kahi aur bejh denge and hum by kar hill station jaege

Nisha- hum akele kyun

Kabir - kyunki doc ne kaha hai

Nisha- par kyun kabir

Kabir- Nisha no more questions dekh ghar aa gaya hai abb chup chap yeh medicine lele

Nisha- par kabir batato

Kabir- Nisha medicine

Nisha took the medicine and waited for kabir to tell something

Kabir- kya hua aaj gadi mein hi baithna hai kya jana nhi hai

Nisha - bata

Kabir - baad mein jab jaege tab bata dunga

Nisha- kabir tu kitna k hai

Kabir - aur tu mere k se kitni j hai na chal abb utar mujhe office ke liye late ho raha hai

Nisha went out and frowned at kabir , kabir giggled and left .

i know boring hai par bardash karlo as it was needed

nxt mein nibir ki trip


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome m waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Not at all boring
Waiting for nibir trip😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Nice update and thanks for pm

thanks for liking
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya119

Awesome update

Not at all boring
Waiting for nibir trip😊

thanks tanya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ritiz...🤗 Awesome Update👏👏👏

I knw Ywh Part zaroori tha iss FF ke liye so Mujhe bore nahi hua😃

Infact Mujhe acha lga ki Tumne yeh skip nahi kia..👍🏼

I loved How U made Kabira understand ki Nishu ne usse jhoot bola tha😊

Kabira Understands His Nishu With her slight move SOULMATES❤️

Nishu spitting the truth abt her fear in park was also nicely presented👏

NiBir hug

Dr se milne ke se lekar Nishu ke Sleep talks aur Kabira ko plans banane tak U wrote superbly👍🏼

I m waiting 4 NiBir's Trip & Nishu's Cure

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣🤣🤣

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