Hi guys this is Ritika.
I am starting with a new story n nibir and you all are my inspirations. It is the very first time that i am writing something. Don't actually know will it turn out. So be patience and do give a read.
Chapter 1
Nisha and Kabir are childhood besties. They share each and everything wid each other and know each other more than they know themselves.
Nisha dreams to become a docter and is in her last year and kabir ,he has completed his studies and presently in doing a job in Mumbai.
Today is Kriti singhal's birthday .she is a friend of both Nisha and kabir . Kriti as every year has throw a very big party for her friends and has invited Nisha too but the major hurdle in front of her is her family's permission. Nisha's family is a convervative one and do not allow girls to be outside home after 8 and Kriti's party starts at 8.nisha really wanted to go to the party as she would be meeting her entire gang together after nearly 6 months. She had been in delhi doing a internship there .
Nisha couldn't actually miss this chance and she knew who could help her, her papa.
She requested her father and he finally agreed but still there was one major hurdle her dadaji's permission. Ramesh talked to dadaji but he was adamant Nisha became sad. Her father couldn't see her like this and once again talked to dadaji about it.this time surprisingly he agreed.
Ramesh went to Nisha and told her about it ans she was jumping with joy . she hugged ramesh out of excitement and thanked her. Ramesh asked her to get ready and was about to leave when Nisha stopped him and asked "papa dadji ko kaise manaya hmmm."
"kuch nhi bas bol diya ki waha kabir bhi hoga aur woh tera khayal rakhega."
Nisha (shocked)"kya kabir aa raha hai par woh toh Mumbai mein hai . woh wapas aagaya aur mujhe bataya bhi nhi .kal raat hi toh hum ne baat ki thi"
Ramesh (monologue) uff maine toh kabir ka sara suprise khrab kar diya
"Nisha woh aaya nhi aaega aur phir sidha party mein jaega . ussne aaj subh phone kiya tha aur tujhe iss liye nhi bataya kyunki woh tujhe suprise dena chahata tha ...samjhi "(teasingly)
Nisha (blushing) haan thik hai app jao
Ramesh left and Nisha stared jumping on her bed
Finally she will be meeting kabir after so long . she was very happy and excited .
Nisha s entire family knew kabir and trusted him a lot and could rely upon him for her safety that is why even her dadaji agreed so easily by just his mention.
And for Nisha , she trusted him the most in the world . he understands her like no one does, is always there for her and could make her smile anytime. Nisha secretly loved kabir and only her father knew about it.she was not even able to tell her feeling to kabir too.
The entire afternoon Nisha spent in dreaming and remembering about kabir.
At around 5 lakshmi comes to nisha's room only to find her sitting at the window ,looking ouside, lost somewhere but having a very beatifaul smile and an unmatchable relief on her face. Lashmi came to her ans caressed her head Nisha looked at her mother and hugged her . lashmi hugged her back and said " kya baat hai nishu tujhe kitne dino baad itna khush dekh rhi hun"
Nisha "woh issliye kyunki dadaji ne mujhe jane ki permission de di" (shouting in excitement)
Lashmi "pata hai mujhe par kya party mein bhi esse hi jayegi ??" Nisha gave a cute smile to her
"jaa jaake ready ho ja "
Nisha "haan maa abhi jaati hun"
While getting ready for the party Nisha remembered the day she realised her love for kabir.
So this the first chapter plz comment and tell how was it
Tamatars, jotas ,chappals all welcomed😊
index
ch 1 above
ch2 pg 6
ch 3 pg 11
ch 4 pg 16
ch 5 pg 21
ch 6 pg 25
ch 7 pg 30
ch 8 pg 36
ch 9 pg 40
ch 10 pg 44
ch 11 pg 49
ch 12 pg 55
ch 13 pg 61
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
