NiBir FF: Teri Meri Love Story(Chp 17&18-pg 93)*8/4*COMPLETED - Page 55

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
kabira is soo caring
that jojo and juju is too cute
nishu ko bed pe sulakar khud chair pe so gaya
Kabir showing his k panti was nice...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
cute update dear

update soon nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres ed on pg 70
☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello..I am back with a small update... 😆
Isske baad next update seedha 15th October ke baad 😆
Tab tak isse enjoy karo 😆
Likes and comments are must or else you won't get the next update soon 😈
I know I have become a Devil right.. but what to do .. I want good response that encourages me because the response I get for the updates is making me sad and I don't feel like writing when I am sad

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Chapter 13

It was morning now.. Saurav went to Kabir's tent to wake him up but he wasn't there thus he decided to check Nisha's tent and he was right Kabir was here sleeping n the chair resting his head on the bed and both were holding eachothers hands he smiled at the two ..

Saurav : Bhagwan ji please aaj Kabir ka plan successful ho jaye ...aur yeh dono hamesha aise hi rahe...

Saurav went to Kabir and shook him...

Kabir muttered in his sleep

Kabir : Nisha sone de na...

Saurav (facepalming) : Yeh kabhi nahi sudhrega.. neend main Nisha Nisha hi karta hai...

Saurav : Oye.. uth .. main Saurav hun...

Kabir : Haan toh bhaag yahan se sone de mujhe...

Saurav : Isse uthane ka koi faidya nahi.. Nisha ko utha hun...

He called Nisha but even she muttered in her sleep

Nisha : Saurav nikla yahan se waran bohut maar khayega.. sone de mujhe..

Saurav was shocked...

Saurav : Kaise dost hai yaar.. koi izzat hi nahi hai meri.. yeh bhagne bhol raha hai.. ek maarne ki baat kar rahi hai...

He stood there thinking what to do then an idea struck him..

Saurav : NiBir .. utho dekho subah ho gai...

Hearing the word NiBir both Nisha and Kabir opened their eyes and first thing they saw was eachother's smiling face...

They both instantly got lost in eachother's eyes shocking Saurav.. Now he was irritated.. He shook both of them..

Saurav : Kabse tum dono ko utha raha hun.. aur abh jab tum dono uth gaye ho toh ek dusre ki aanhon main kho gaye ...?

Nisha blushed and tried getting up but she forgot that Kabir was holding her hand and thus she was not able to get up she looked at Kabir who was busy giving angry stare at Saurav .. she called him and signalled him to leave her hand but Kabir couldn't understand her signals..

Kabir (Irritated) : Kya bol rahi hai ?

Saurav : Abey haath chodne bol rahi hai...

Kabir looked at Nisha who was blushing like anything and he understood that Saurav was trying to control his laughter...

Kabir : Nahi chodunga.. He went to and sat on the bed next to Nisha making her blush more...

Saurav : Oye.. jitna romance karna hai kar le... par event ke baad...

Nisha : Oh haan .. aaj toh event hai.. Kabir haath chod mujhe bhout kaam karna hai.. guns bullets sab ek baar wapas check karna hai..

She freed her hand from his hold and went inside the hotel... Kabir and Saurav also followed her...

When they all reached inside they saw that everyone was sitting tensed...Nisha went to Kaira and asked

Nisha : Ma'am kya hua sab itne tensed kyun hai ?

Kaira : Nisha vo Priyanka subah washroom main slip hogai aur uske haath main sprain aagaya..issliye vo shooting main part nahi le payegi...

Nisha : What ? Abh part kon lega...?

Kabir came inside and understood that everyone had started executing the plan..

Kabir(acting innocent) : Kya hua Nisha ?

Nisha explained him everything...

Kabir : Itni si baat.. tu part le lena na.. vaise bhi tune aaj tak apna aim miss nahi kiya hai..

Nisha stood there rooted to the spot.. she knew that Kabir was right but after Pilani incident she had never practiced shooting or archery...

Nisha : Kabir main..

Before she could complete her sentence Kaira came to her

Kaira : Sach ? Nisha please aap aaj Priyanka ki jagah le lijiye... Yeh event Lakshaya Academy ke liye bohut important hai.. please naa mat kariye please...

Nisha : Ma'am maine kafi saalon se practice nahi ki hai.. aur mujhe nahi lagta ki main kar paungi..

Kabir : Ek minute.. tujhe khud pe trust nahi hoga par mujhe tujh pe pura trust hai.. tu sirf haan kar Nisha and I am sure tu jeete gi...

Nisha was scared she knew that today was a very important event for Lakshaya Academy and she didn't want to be the reason of the failure of the event...

She looked at Kabir and he assured her through his eyes that she can do it...

Nisha took a deep breath and nodded her head in yes... everyone was very happy that the first phase of their plan was successful...

Nisha practiced for a few hours and she didn't miss her aim even once.. this gave her a little confidence...

Finally it was time for their event... everyone had assembled on the ground .. Kabir had taken a few pictures of the banner of the event and the other participants when they shot ...

Viraj was continuously looking at the investors and their expressions told that they were not satisfied with the performance...

It was Nisha's turn now.. Kabir saw her from the camera lenses and smiled seeing her.. nervousness was clear on her face.. she kept looking here and there for Kabir and finally she spotted him in a corner busy with his camera...

Kabir lowered the camera and wished her luck and also gave her a flying kiss... which gave Nisha little confidence ...

She went and took her spot and aimed the gun.. she took a deep breath and shot .. as soon as she pulled the trigger and the bullet was fired she shut eyes as she was scared that she missed the aim but as soon as she heard loud clapping sounds she opened her eyes and she saw that she didn't miss the aim...

She couldn't believe her eyes... her eyes were moist and she stood there... she looked at Kabir and he nodded his head negatively and signalled her not to cry...

Viraj looked at the investors once Nisha had shot and finally he could see a smile on their faces... all of them stood and gave Nisha a standing ovation ...

He felt little relived and went and congratulated Nisha...

One by one everyone came and congratulated her...

Rest of the shooters also came and kept impressing the investors... when every one had given their performance the investors asked Viraj to come aside and told him something and left...

Everyone was waiting for him to come back.. when he came back Kaira went to him and started asking him questions..

Kaira : Viraj .. kya kaha investors ne ..? Unhe event kaisa laga ? Vo Academy main invest karne ke liye ready hai na ? Boliye na Viraj...

Viraj kept mum and started walking towards Nisha.. he went and stood opposite to Nisha ... This made Nisha more tensed...

Viraj : Miss Nisha.. thank you so much... aapke wajah se aaj Lakshaya Academy ko ek nai umeed mili hai...Investors sab se zyada aap se impress hue hai...

Nisha couldn't believe what she heard.. Everyone started cheering and congratulating each other for their victory but Nisha stood there rooted to her spot...

Kabir took her aside and hugged her..

Kabir : Nisha tune kar dikhaya .. tune apne daar ko overcome kar diya Nisha...

Nisha recovered from her shock and hugged him and started crying... Kabir knew that she needed to cry .. today was a really important day for her... and for him too... he fulfilled the promise he made to himself... he kissed Nisha's hair and whispered I Love You in her ears...

They stood there hugging eachother and letting their silences speak...


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As usual not proof read it so please ignore the errors 😆

Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mammaaa🤗 Kinna Cute aur Pyaara Update tha... Hayee...

NiBir sleeping...☺️

Saurav ki BBB nikali NiBir ne...😆 I was ROFL ng🤣🤣🤣

NiBir Eyelock☺️

Nishu ke haath ko na chodna...☺️

Nishu ko Blashh karwaya aur uske saath bed par baita...☺️

Loved Kabira giving Assurance thru eyes.. ☺️

Luck wish kia with Flying Kiss..😳 Hayeee Hayeee☺️

Finally PLAN Successful...🥳

Nishu Ne Kar dikhayaaa👏👏👏👏

Nishu ki wajah se LA ko investors mile...😃

Nishu ne apna draa overcome kiaa...🥳

NiBir Hug at last part... Awieee... Kiss on Hair + ILU☺️☺️☺️

Thanks 4 PM😳

Sorry 4 Late comments😳

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM☺️☺️☺️


Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update niyu di 😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
niyu bachaa tum kabiraa ke baare mai aisa likhthe hai ki mujhe nisha se J hone lagthi hai😳
awww

NIYU TUM GREAT HO👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res

Unres
Awesome update 👏
Loved it ...
Edited by Amina... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
unres

superb update mumma👍🏼

saurav nibir ko uthane gya air nibir ne bechare k sath kya kya kya kia🤣🤣

Saurav : Kaise dost hai yaar.. koi
izzat hi nahi hai meri.. yeh bhagne
bhol raha hai.. ek maarne ki baat
kar rahi hai...
He stood there thinking what to do
then an idea struck him..
Saurav : NiBir .. utho dekho subah
ho gai...
Hearing the word NiBir both Nisha
and Kabir opened their eyes and
first thing they saw was eachother's
smiling face...
They both instantly got lost in
eachother's eyes shocking Saurav..
Now he was irritated.. He shook both
of them..


bechara saurav...nibir naam sunte hi dono ek dusre ki aankho me kho gye😳❤️

Saurav : Abey haath chodne bol rahi
hai...
- i was rofling🤣 🤣

finally plan execute krne me lah gye sab😊

loved d way kabir said ki tu part le le u had never missed yr aim😊

loved d way u portrayedher nervousness her fear kyuki ab lakshya academy ka future uske hath me h😊

finally nishu ki turn aa gyi😊

loved d way she was looking for kabir n kabir was wishing her gud luck❤️

finally nishu jeet gyi👏...viraj was so happy ki lakhsya academy ko investors mil gye😊

Everyone started cheering
and congratulating each other for
their victory but Nisha stood there
rooted to her spot...
Kabir took her aside and hugged
her..
Kabir : Nisha tune kar dikhaya ..
tune apne daar ko overcome kar diya
Nisha...
Nisha recovered from her shock and
hugged him and started crying...
Kabir knew that she needed to cry ..
today was a really important day for
her... and for him too... he fulfilled
the promise he made to himself... he
kissed Nisha's hair and whispered I
Love You in her ears...
They stood there hugging eachother
and letting their silences speak...


@pink beautifully writtenloved each n every line of it❤️
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res 😊
unres
niyu 🤗
tumhare liye jor daar taliya 👏 👏
nibir kitne jyada cuteee h
this kabira is sooo caring ☺️ ☺️
Saurav ko dono ne daat diya 🤣 🤣
nibir sunte hi uth Gaye 🤣
nisha ne shoot kar diya...yay
I loved the update a lot
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago

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