NiBir FF: Teri Meri Love Story(Chp 17&18-pg 93)*8/4*COMPLETED - Page 51

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Loved it ishima 😳
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As majority of you know I am doing a job now.. and thanks to that I have become very busy.. so sorry to everyone jinke comments ka reply nahi kar pai
But thanks for the comments 😳
Back with a chotu update 😆
Errors aur mistakes ignore kare please not proof-read it 😳😳
And Natz..Jaldi ek romantic update milega 😉
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Chapter 11

Nisha and Kabir reached the ground where Viraj was supposed to explain them about the event and what they were supposed to do..

At first Nisha was scared .. her legs din't move once they reach the gate of the ground... She kept staring at the board...

Kabir was reading her each and every expression... He could see the pain in her eyes and that reflected on her face too..

"Kuch waqt aur Nisha phir sab kuch theek ho jayega.. I promise "

He thought in his mind... He went and stood behind her... He caught her from her shoulders making her turn around ..

His eyes spoke everything... Nisha just looked at him asking him with her eyes ..

"Kya yeh karna zaroori hai ??"

Kabir blinked his eyes and nodded his head in yes... Nisha closed her eyes...

Nisha : Kyun Kabir.. Kyun ho raha hai yeh sab mere saath ??

Kabir could sense that she would cry any moment.. He quickly wrapped his arms around her waist and gave her a back hug resting his head on her shoulder...

Kabir : Nisha ... Tujhe yaad hai Maa bacchpan mujh se kya kehti thi jab main dance competition main first nahi aata tha ?

Nisha din't say anything she just wrapped her hands on Kabir's arms that were wrapped around her waist..

Kabir : Maa kehti thi ki...

Zindgi har mood pe imteehan legi.. Har imteehan ki ek wajah hogi...

Wajah jo bhi ho yeh yaad rakhna.. Imteehan se jeet sirf tumhari hi hogi...

Nisha smiled a bit hearing this...

Kabir : Nisha.. kya pata shayaad yeh tera test hai.. aur iss test main agar tu pass hogai toh shayaad tujhe sab kuch wapas mil jaye..

Nisha was in deep thoughts and Kabir was trying to read her expressions ... When they heard someone coughing... They both looked behind and found Saurav standing there with a smirk ..

Saurav : Waah.. tum dono ko nahi lagta ki tumhae abhi kisi room main hona chaiye... Vo kya hai nay eh ek public place hai...

Nisha and Kabir looked at him in confusion .. Then Nisha realised their position .. she slapped Kabir's hands around her waist and Kabir unwrapped them immediately..

Kabir : Ouch.. Nisha kya yaar...

But Nisha din't say anything and ran inside the gate to avoid Saurav's teasing .. Kabir smiled looking at her..

Kabir : Chalo.. issi bahane andar toh gai..Now I hope ki aage sab kuch plan ke hisab se hoga...

Saurav : Tu muskura raha hai ? Mujhe laga tu mujh pe gussa karega...

Kabir : Right gussa toh karta ... par tujh se bachne ke liye tune dekha nahi vo kaise andar chali gai.. Tujhe pata hai.. usse andar jane ke liye bhi daar lag raha tha...

Sadness was evident on his face when he said the later part...

Saurav : Yaar tu tension mat le ... sab theek ho jayega.. 7 din hai na humare pass .. inn 7 dino main hum purani Nisha ko wapas le aayenge...

Kabir smiled and they went inside.. Everyone was assembled there.. Kabir went and stood next to Nisha.. Viraj looked very tensed...

Priyanka : Kya hua Bhai... aap itni pareshaan kyun hai ?

Viraj : Priyanka baat hi kuch aisi hai... Darasal jin investors ke wajah se hum yahan aaye hai unhone ne subah hume call kiya tha.. unka trip pre-pone hogaya hai.. and vo kal aa rahe hai...

Nisha : Haan toh sir iss main kya problem hai.. vo bhi dekh sakte hai ki hum kitni sincerity se aapna kaam kar rahe hai...

Viraj : Ms. Nisha problem yeh hai ki vo sirf kal ke liye hi yahan aa rahe hai... Vo purso subah hi wapas chale jayenge...

Everyone was shocked...

Kabir : Matlab 2 din se bhi kaam hai humare pass plan execute karne ke liye ?!

He said that without realising what he was saying..

Nisha : Konsa plan ?

Kabir : Dekh hum pehle even plan karenge phir usse execute karnege..

Nisha : Oh...

Kaira : Yeh ho kya raha hai... Jab se hum yahan aye hai kuch na kuch ho raha hai.. pehle room bookings main mistake hui aur abh yeh.. hum sab kuch itni jaldi kaise karnege ...??

Nisha : Yeh jagah hi aise hai..

Everyone understood what she was trying to say but they acted as if they din't hear anything...

Viraj : Ok toh hum app sab ko aapke kaam bata de...

Viraj told them what every one was supposed to do...

He assigned Nisha and Saurav their work so that they could start working and they would get time to discuss Kabir's plan...Once Nisha and Saurav left Kabir started to panick...

Kabir : Sir do din main itna kaam.. kaise ?

He was literally biting his nails...

Priyanka : Kabir app tension mat lijiye.. dekhye humare pass ek idea hai.. jisse kal humari jagah Nisha shooing main participate karegi ...

Kabir (excitedly) : Kya idea ?

Priyanka told them her idea and everyone seemed to like it too...

Kabir : Chalega idea acha hai... Sir.. iss event ke liye mujhe kya karna hai ...?

Viraj : Kabir appko iss event ke kuch pictures click karni hai jinhe hum apne prospectus main add kar sake..

Kabir : Ohk sir..

After some time every one got busy with their respective works ... It was lunch time when Kabir came searching for Nisha.. He found her in a corner with a gun in her hand she was staring at it and smiling..

Kabir's monologue : Kal tu iss gun se shoot karegi .. Tera sapna pura hoga Nisha...

He went to her and called her in his cheeky way..

Kabir : Juju..

Nisha turned and gave him a deadly look.. and Kabir gave her a silly smile...

Kabir : Kya hua Juju.. ko kya hua ?

Nisha frowned ...

Nisha : Kabir please mujhe iss naam se bulana bandh kar...

Kabir : Kyun... Juju kitna cute naam hai... and Juju ka toh meaning bhi toh cute hota hai...

Nisha : Haan but mujhe nahi pasand hai yeh..

Kabir : Arey.. kitna cute sound karta hai... Jojo and Juju...

Nisha gave him a stern look.. but then she got an idea...

Kabir noticed the change in her expressions...

Nisha : Tujhe mujhe Juju bulana hai na.. bula.. main bhi tujhe uss naam se bulungi jis naam se main tujhe bachpaan main bulati thi...

Kabir was horrified .. Never..

Kabir : Nahi Nisha.. tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...

Nisha : Kyun.. Jab tu mujhe Juju bula sakta hai.. toh main tujhe uss naam se kyun nahi bula sakti..

Kabir cribbed and frowned...

Kabir : Theek hai phir tujhe mujhe jis naam se bulana hai bula.. but I am warning you.. tu iske liye bohut regret karegi...

Nisha : We will see...

Kabir gave her a wicked smile and left... for a moment Nisha got worried she knew Kabir very well.. when it comes to mischief no one can match him.. She just hoped that he din't do any such thing that will make her regret ...

Nisha's monologue : Nisha kahin tune apne pair pe kulhadi toh nahi maar li na ? chod abh jo hua aage jo hoga dekha jayega.. Kaam khatam kar leti hai..


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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First post 😆
Ishima Loved it to the core
Awesome yaar 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
res🤔 Late ho gayi main..😆

UNRES😆

Mammaaa🤗

Lovely Update again..😳👏👏👏👏👏

Main late pahunchi toh sec aa gaya mera comment🤣🤣🤣 Mannu Dii 😡😆🤣 So Phast😲🤣🤣🤣 Kabhi kabhi aisi harkath mere POST par bhi kiya karo..😈🤣

So As usual NiBir Scenes Made me Awww...☺️🤣

Kabir Supporting Nishu awww... Their Eyes-Talking Soo Cuteee☺️

KT(☯️) 4 My NiBir...

The Shyayari was Soo Apt 4 the situation👏👏👏

Kabir was reading her each and every expression... He could see the pain in her eyes and that reflected on her face too..

"Kuch waqt aur Nisha phir sab kuch theek ho jayega.. I promise "

He thought in his mind... He went and stood behind her... He caught her from her shoulders making her turn around ..

His eyes spoke everything... Nisha just looked at him asking him with her eyes ..

"Kya yeh karna zaroori hai ??"

Kabir blinked his eyes and nodded his head in yes... Nisha closed her eyes...

Nisha : Kyun Kabir.. Kyun ho raha hai yeh sab mere saath ??

Kabir could sense that she would cry any moment.. He quickly wrapped his arms around her waist and gave her a back hug resting his head on her shoulder...

Kabir : Nisha ... Tujhe yaad hai Maa bacchpan mujh se kya kehti thi jab main dance competition main first nahi aata tha ?

Nisha din't say anything she just wrapped her hands on Kabir's arms that were wrapped around her waist..

Kabir : Maa kehti thi ki...

Zindgi har mood pe imteehan legi.. Har imteehan ki ek wajah hogi...

Wajah jo bhi ho yeh yaad rakhna.. Imteehan se jeet sirf tumhari hi hogi...

Nisha smiled a bit hearing this...

Kabir : Nisha.. kya pata shayaad yeh tera test hai.. aur iss test main agar tu pass hogai toh shayaad tujhe sab kuch wapas mil jaye..




My fav part @PINK

Saurav As Usual Very Bad Timing😈😆🤣🤣🤣

Kabir : Right gussa toh karta ... par tujh se bachne ke liye tune dekha nahi vo kaise andar chali gai.. Tujhe pata hai.. usse andar jane ke liye bhi daar lag raha tha...

Sadness was evident on his face when he said the later part...


@Blue See How Much connected NiBir r... When Nishu is happy her Kabira also smile.. 😃When She is sad it reflects on his face too😳 & Vice Versa...😳Perfect Soulmates☺️

So Now only 2 days to execute Plan...😲 Y do I feel Mammaa Aap isse jaldi END karne ki tayyari main ho isliye aap ne 7 days ko 2 days mein cut short kar dia..??😈 Well I want my guess to be prove wrong😳🤣🤣🤣 dnt end this SS so soon pls..😳🤣🤣🤣

Waise I love the Name "JUJU"😆🤣🤣🤣

Jojo ki Juju ❤️ Soo Cutee & Sweet...☺️

Nishu Kabira ko bachpan main KYA bulathi thi...??? 😉*Curious* to knw

BTW Nishu is rt..😉
🤣🤣🤣

Kabira ko K panti aur MishChief main koi nahi hara saktha..
🤣🤣🤣

I wish Kabira wl make Nishu Convince to shoot😉 By His MishChief🤣🤣🤣 Uski Har ek Wicked smile mujhe kuch aur hi ISHAARA de rahi hai...🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do Write More...🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣🤣🤣

PS: Mamma I knw U r bust bt wen once u wl b back na mujhe reply kar dena 😳 I like to read reply to my comments🤪 Tab tak I wl Wait...😈
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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unres
niyu bhabhi...🤗 kya update hai... bus do din...😲 par kabira kuch na kuch kar hi lega...😉 cute nibir scene outside the gate..😳 m waiting for pair p giri khulhadi wala plan 😈
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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res🤣
unres...

kya dhaasu update tha niyu mumma🤣...

viru ne sab ko ground pe bulaya

loved d way kabir understands her each n every expression...😳

d way he wrapped his arm around her waist was awww...

saurav hmesha wrong time me entry marta h😡

but chalo uski wrong timing se kuch to accha hua nishu gate k andar to chali gyi😊
kabir pura dhakkan h ...but shi time me usne baat ko sambhal liya😳

nishu kal gun chalayegi finally👍🏼
nibir scene was perfect...
juju and jojo🤣
pta nhi ab kabira kya krne wala h
mumma plz update nxt part fast cant wait to read...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Niya very nice and cute update
luved the way kabir consoled nisha
Sourav ki kya timing hai
juju and jojo was the best
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Awesome update 👏
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the pm 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
mujhe phirse pm nai mila 😭 😭
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

mujhe phirse pm nai mila 😭 😭

Aww so sorry 😭

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