Nibir SS - Teri Meri Kahani (part 10 in page 42) 7/01 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

nice update nimi😊...aisa lagta h ki drug scam ki vajah se hi kabir kasir bana ...n kabir smiling aftre 1 year...mujhe aisa kyu lagta h ki raj ko diya hua kaam nisha se hi related tha...koi nhi let's see...bt jaldi jaldi update karo yaar mujhe curiosity ho rhi h...n thankx for the pm😊

Thanchu...so much dear...& will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

superb yaar... m excited to read more

thanchu so much dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitika4

Nice update nimi

Curiosity ho rahi hai ki kabir ke past me aisa kya huya ki wo ek saal baad smile kiya
Drugs scam ne hi kabir aisa banya hoga
Plz update soon.
Thanks for pm

Thankyou...so much niti...can i call u niti???...n ya i will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Nice one
very mysterious one
update soon
thanx for pm
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amina...

Nice update ...
Loved it ...
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the pm..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Nice one

very mysterious one
update soon
thanx for pm
ritika

thnx dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
so guyzzz...here is d next part...

PART 4


KHATTI MEETHI YAADEIN


nisha reads kasir's file once again wid full concentration to get any clue

Saurav- nishu is file ko itna kyu ghur rhi...h...kahi tera is file ko "Ankhiyo se goli marne" ka irada to nhi h na????😆

nisha - (while beating him) kabhi to serious ho jaya kr 😡
suddenly dey both got a msg in der phns dat der meeting wid umesh has been cancelled

saurav & nisha- bach gye aaj to

on d other hand kabir on his secret room

the room is full of darkness...just...like his life...
he walk towards his dressing table through his counting distance...n switch on d light of dressing table where only mirror can be seen who reflects his existence ...

kabir - ek saal pehle yhi insaan sara din hasta rehta tha...aur apni utpatang harkato se sabko hasata rehta tha...par ab sab kuch badal gya na wo din rhe na wo pal...

den he open drawl n pick out album

he open d album and sees his family photograph...

kabir , kirti n his father (Arjun singh rathore)
Asr is a social worker n also working for a secret mission about which no one knows
n he lost in his thoughts...

FLASHBACK

After finishing all d work of arranging party wid nisha he returns home
he n his family were new in d city dey already have 1 3BHK flat in Bandra but never shifted here
He rang door bell...
A hot girl wid cute smile on her face came running towards d door ...d door opens

kabir- hie my angel...

kirti- hey bro...how was d first day of yr new clg????

kabir - well it was gud ...i became ACS of d clg

kirti- how blah! bro aaj valentines day h n apko ACS ki pdi h...

kabir- kirti tu sudhregi nhi na...

kirti gave him a wiered look n den both said in unison

kirti aur sudharna...its impossible n dey laugh out loudly
kabir- aaj shaam ko clg me party h
kirti-(excitedly)dekhna bro...aaj aapko aapki miss perfect mil hi jayegi...
on hearing dis nisha's face comes infront of kabir's eyes n he started thinking about nisha...how dey met,der fall ,der eyelock ,d song dat played during der fall
a small smile appears in his face...
kirti comes towards lost kabir n snaps her finger infront of his face...
kabir comes out frm d trance n sees kirti standing der...
before kirti could speak kabir's phn rang
kabir-hie dad how r u?aap kaha h?kab aa re? we are missing uh...
asr-offo...jojo kitne ques. puchte ho tum
kabir- dad plz dont call me jojo
asr- ok jojo
kabir- 😡
asr-anyway...beta maine tumhe ek imp. baat btane k liye call kia tha
kabir-kya dad???
asr-beta tumne nya clg join kia h tumhare kuch nye dost b bnenge aur tumhe kuch nye challanges b face krne pdenge par in sab me apne dad ki ek baat yaad rakhna hmesha apne dil ki sunna kyuki hmara dil hmesha hme shi rasta dikhata h...accha beta ab mai phn rakhta tu m busy now...kirti ko kehna i will talk to her later
kabir-ok dad bye tc

FLASHBACK ENDS

kasir- dad mai aaj jo kuch b krra hu apne dil ki hi sun kr rha hu afterden he saw something n get confused

outside police station(ps)

saurav- nisha hum ps kyu aaye h
nisha-subinspector ramesh mittal ko cover krne
A constable comes to dem n says sir ne aapko wait krne bola h
nisha-ok
saurav- bhut bhuk lag ri yr
nisha- kheer khayega??
den dey remembr something n started laughing

FLASHBACK

2 hr Before going to party
nisha's phn rang n she picks up
nisha- hello mr. ACS
kabir- miss. CS... i want yr help
nisha-kya help???
kabir- actually m damn hungry ghr me koi nhi h n mujhe cooking b nhi aati
nisha- cooking mujhe b thk se nhi aati but ok i will help u...ghar me suji h??
kabir - wo kya hota h???
nisha- tumhe suji nhi pta??... anyway...leave it...kitchen me kya h??
kabir- milk h...
nisha-(in mind) kheer bnana bta deti hu isko ye easy b h n mujhe aata b h
den she started giving instruction to him and kabir following it...
kabir - nisha dudh garam ho gya n usme jo rice tha wo pak gya ab kya krna h
nisha usko bolne wali thi ki usme sugar dalna but dolly usko piche se awaaz deke bolti h nisha kitchen me sabji h usme do spoon namak daal dena n nimbu nicho dena
nisha- kabir ek min. hold kr den she goes to kitchen n remember wat dolly says n she says 2 spoon namak n den nimbu dish taiyaar
kabir hears it n says thankyou n cut d call
nisha- arey duffer tujhe nhi boli...n she realized ki call end ho chuka h
nisha tries to call him but uska call nhi lag ra tha...
nisha- God plz kuch aisa miracle kr do ki wo aaj kheer na khaye

Outside party venue
nisha reached d venue n someone calls nisha n she turned n it was none other den kabir
nisha-hie kabir
kabir-hie nisha...n he gives her a bukey of yellow flowers
nisha(monologue)- lgta h...isne kheer nhi khaya...agar khata to...bukey ki jagah cactus lata...
kabir- nisha aankh band kr na mujhe tujhe kuch dena h
nisha - kya
kabir- pehle aankh band kr
nisha-ok
& she closes her eyes kabir pick out. box frm his car opens it...usme jo tha usme se ek spoon nisha ko khila dia
nisha-(shocked)split it frm her mouth, ye kya tha????
kabir-(angrily)teri masterchef wali dish
nisha felt guilty n she told him about misunderstanding at first dey both look eachother wierdly n den dey started laughing...about thinking wat mess dey had created

suddenly saurav comes
saurav-(on seeing box) ye akele akele tumlog kya kha re
nisha-kabir kheer laya h khayega
saurav-ya offcourse ye b koi puchne ki baat h
kabir gave him kheer n jaise hi usne kheer muh me daali nibir ran frm der

FLASHBACK ENDS

so guyz how is it?? plz leave yr precious likes n comments...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Kheer🤣🤣
superb update nimi
especilly the flashback part😆
jojo n ASR convo 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Awesome update
Kheer... 🤣
Nibir ran away after Saurav ate the kheer ;)
Can't wait what will happen next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

Kheer🤣🤣

superb update nimi
especilly the flashback part😆
jojo n ASR convo👏

thankyou...so much dear

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