Nibir SS - Teri Meri Kahani (part 10 in page 42) 7/01 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nitika4

Wow very nice

So romantic
They met on v day and they lost in each other's that part was awesome.they loved each other but kabir left her for her security.waiting for mysterious part.
Update soon and plz plz plz pm me

thanx dear...n send me buddy request den i will pm u for next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
nice update
par yaar tumne toh cute kabir ko deadly gangster kasir bana diya
kabir being a wanted criminal looks odd
really waiting to know the reason behind it
nibir ki pheli meeting was so nice
loved it do update soon
thnks for pm
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: itznimi003

saru...ye tera res mission isi janam me khatam ho jayega na???? 😃



NiMi Voh toh mujhe bhi nahi patha🤪
Well tera Intezaar khatam..🤣 unres ed on pg 3 & 6 do Readd 😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆

UNRES NO:43😆

Nimi.. Yaar..😲 Tu toh ek damm Stylish Writer nikali👏

When I was reading first Part I was Feeling like I was watching a Crime Thriller with full on suspenses & Mysteries to be solved...!!!! Superbly written yaar.. Loved it👏

You knw I m Arjun Fan.. Arjun was a crime thriller on Star plus which is nw off air.. & U knw wat This Stroy gives me ASR (Arjun Suryakant Rawte) feels just like My Mannu dii's FF gives me..!!!!☺️😆

Thank U yaar...🤗

So Nishu & Saurav is behind Kasir😃

Well Mujhe aisa q lag rah ahi ki Kabir & Nisha knws eachother.. Actually frm the tootha taara scene I just guessed...🤣 Mujhe Guess karne ki bimari hai dat too I got frm Arjun☺️🤣🤣 If NiBir knws eachother den Hw they went apart??
Kirti also knws Nishu?? How??? this also indicates towards the fact dat NiBir knws eachother 😆🤣 Let the Stry to unfold first Den I wl get my answers..😉😆🤣

@Bold Loved theis Sentence...👏👏👏

nisha - saurav tujhe pta h...jab b koi taara toot kr aasaman se juda ho k
jaata h na to wo jaate jaate hme ek nyi umeed ek nyi roshni ki kiran de
k jata h...

Kabir's Entry was Suprb.. Loved the Minutr descriptions of his Villa...👏👏👏

Superbly written Nimi👍🏼

Thanks 4 PM😳 Sorry 4 late comments😳
waiting 4 stry to unfold..
wl read part 2 & Unres now..😆🤣

Do write More🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

Thanchu...so much saru 😉 m glad dat u like my story 😊 ...n ya i now dat u r ASR ki big wali fan...i had also watch his show...n i hope ki tumhe...meri story se baar baar ASR feels aate rhe... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

one more res😆

UNRES NO:44😆

B4 Commenting on update lemme Dance bcz My guess was rt..😉😆🤣
NiBir Knw Eachother

NiMi.. Superb Update👏

Loved the FlashBack scene☺️
NiBir First Meeting Fall.. Eyelock.. balloons.. Rose petals.. Poora Filmy aa..☺️🤣🤣

Aww.. Both missing eachother pls jaldi milaa do unko😳

@Bold Loved the Note👏👏👏

"Dil ki h ye kaisi manmaani,
hotho pe h hasi fir b h aankho me pani,
kuch kahi to kuch ankahi si,
shayad yhi h TERI MERI KAHANI"

I wonder How Kabir becum Kasir??😲😕 Pls Mystery ko unfold karo jaldi..😆🤣 Warna I wl guess🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do Write More🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣


thanx dear...ya ur guess was right...n for d answer of yr ques. u hv to wait for next part 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: mishrialways

nice update

par yaar tumne toh cute kabir ko deadly gangster kasir bana diya
kabir being a wanted criminal looks odd
really waiting to know the reason behind it
nibir ki pheli meeting was so nice
loved it do update soon
thnks for pm
ritika

thnx dear...n for dat u hv to wait for nxt part 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
nimi update jaldi jaldi plz...the mystery is killing me...curious to know what is going to come forward
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
so guyzzz here is d next part

Part 3

KUCH ULJHE PEHLU


Next Day

At 10 am in subinspector ramesh mittal's cabin wid his four trusted officers(vijay,arun,sunil & ragini)

Ramesh- Officers pichle ek mahine me already aise 3 cases ho gye n ab ye choutha...sumit malhotra case

vijay- sir i think ki kuch to connection h in sare cases me

Ramesh- hmm...aisi koi to kadi h jise hum jod nhi paa rhe h...

Arun - sir ajeeb baat ye h ki ye chaaro industrialist whi industrialist h jin par bhi ek saal pehle hue drug scam ka aarop lagaya gya tha but sabut n gawah na hone ki wajah se ye chhut gye the

Ramesh - oh...i see...waise d famous gangster kasir ka naam b is scam k hone k ek mahine baad hi sunne me aaya tha na...i dont know y but i think ye dono cases kahin na kahin ek dusre se connected h
after dat he took a pause n said
waise... tum sab kasir k baare me to jante hi ho...but mujhe uske bare me chhoti se chhoti detail chahiye

ragini- But sir uski to koi b detail...kisi b file me nhi h even uski to ek photograph tak nhi h fir hum kaise????

Ramesh- (in strict tone)Officers...bhulo mat...ki...tum sab police officers ho na ki koi civilian aur tumara kaam sawaal puchna nhi balki uska jawab dhundna h...am i right????

All 4 in unison- yes sir

Ramesh- tumhare paas sirf aaj ka din h...i dont care ki tum kya kroge kaise kroge but within 1 day i want all d information about kasir...now u may leave...

all in unison- JAI HIND sir

At 11 am in BCN channel office

saurav- nishu wo tere informer ko call lga na

nisha- saurav mai kab se usi ka phn try krri but uska phn hi nhi lag ra

saurav- nishu abhi 10 min me umesh sir ne hme apne cabin me bulaya h unhe hum kya khenge

nisha- whi to mai b soch rhi hu...after a pause...ek min. saurav mujhe kasir ki file fir se dekhna h

saurav- h kya yr us file me jo tujhe use fir se dekhna h

nisha- pehle tu file de to...

Kasir at his secret workshop about which no one knows...except one person i.e. raj

kasir- maine tumhe jo kaam dia tha wo ho gya...?????

Raj- bhai...aap jo kaam bole aur raj use pura na kre aisa kbhi ho sakta h kya????

on hearing dis a small smile appears in kasir's face n he left frm der

raj(monologue)- bhai is ek saal me aaj pehli baar aapke chehre pe smile dekhi h aap smile krte hue bhut acche lagte ho par us din k baad to jaise aapke chehre ki rounak hi kahin kho gyi...

raj - arey...abhi to bhaai yhi the ab kaha chale gye...n ye workshop b andar se band h...ye bhai hmesha yha aane k baad kaha gayab ho jate h?????...kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta h jaise ye bhaai ka workshop nhi balki koi bhoot bangla h

sorry guyzzz der is no nibir scenes...
plz leave yr valuable like n comments...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
nice part Nimi
Kasir ne smile kiya 1 saal baad😉
Kasir ka kuch bhi details nahi hai
Kasir and drug scam😛
story is very intresting yaar
eager to knw wat happen nxt
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: ammu4u

nice part Nimi

Kasir ne smile kiya 1 saal baad😉
Kasir ka kuch bhi details nahi hai
Kasir and drug scam😛
story is very intresting yaar
eager to knw wat happen nxt
update soon

thnx dear 😊

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