Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
Omg...
Wat is this yar???
Ye Tha kya???
For the first time i hav read something like this in India forums...
Such an awesome story...
Thriller film jaisi h!!! Full of suspense
And har part k liye alag se title??
Bachpan me Jo cartoon shows dekhti Thi wahan pe aisa hota tha!! Har episode ka alag caption
Bachpan Ki yaad aa gyi...
Just loved ur story!!!
Mujhe na comedy & suspense stories bahut bahut bahut zyada pasand h!! Romantic stories se 10guna zyada !!!
Thanx for writing such an awesome one!!
And novels me v aisa hi hota h na?? Har ek chapter ka alag title...
Maine kabi padhti toh nai novels par meri sis padhti hai!! Uske collections me se ek novel me Maine dekhi Thi... Chapters hoti h bahut saari & sabka alag title...
TU NA NOVEL WRITER BAN JA... EK DUM PROFESSIONAL WRITER K JAISA LIKHTI HAI!!
Kya unique concept h yar...!!.
Me toh intro padhke hi was like...
Hain ye kya h??omg... Kabir ganster & Nishu reporter!! Kya jodi h!! 🤣
Super cool intro,,,
Ek saal pehle kya hua tha???
Ye 5 business man ne kuch to ghapla kiya h!! Aur Kabir k papa Ko phansa diya!!!
Nibir ki kahani... Title padhke toh ek hi song yaad aa raha hai!!
"YE TERI MERI KAHANI HAI... HAI BARISHON KA PANI..."
and wo kheer wala scene ...
Namak & nimbu ki kheer 🤣
Poor Saurav 😆
each & every part till now was just perfect... Loved it...
I m really curious to know the mystery...
Continue soon...