Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24

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maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi
Nice part mansi..👏
Its getting interesting..
Jwala found what..!!??
Suspense mein chod diya...😡😆
Update next part soon..

Thanks bhanji 😃

Wait for suspense to clear 😆

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

oi twin sis!!🤗

tune sabkuch reveal kar diya?😲

Nishu crying...i feel bad for her

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Nimisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Nisha's nightmare 😭
ramesh consoling her was gud...
jwala found something...
overall nice update...but i m curious to know wat will happn next
update soon

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
oi twin sis!!🤗
tune sabkuch reveal kar diya?😲
Nishu crying...i feel bad for her

Maine socha focus on present 😆

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Nisha's nightmare 😭
ramesh consoling her was gud...
jwala found something...
overall nice update...but i m curious to know wat will happn next
update soon

thanks nimmi

Will try to update soon 😃

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: maniwood

Maine socha focus on present 😆

accha theekh hai...cant wait to see this case being slved😊

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Nice part...Setting the baseline for the plot. Good one...Keep updating..😊

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
Nice part...Setting the baseline for the plot. Good one...Keep updating..😊

yeah i was so confused how to introduce everyone and show basic plot

Thanks 😃

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@lovely_lady

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Oh so the nightmare from the prologue referred to the botched cast KN had. Makes sense. Good job setting that up.

And it looks like RN share a mentor-mentee relationship, so looking forward to that!

Also liked the small little convo between Saurav, Kirti, Jwala. It was actually nice to read, despite the subject matter (KN breakup) 😆

Good chapter Mansi. Set's up the story quite well and introduces you to everyone as well. Looks good -- nothing major I found that needed to be fixed.

Nice!

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poo10

@poo10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Nice
Thnx for pm nd update soon

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