Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Nice start bhanji๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Investigation department wow๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
kya baat h mansi... that was suprrb I luved it... nibir in action ahaaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Interesting concept ๐Ÿ˜‰
Continue soon... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Teogapi

This is so good yaar.. Ramy is nisha's boss.. So they will be investigating serial killings.. Superb. Excited to read the b xt part...

Thank you so much rema ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Thank for your likes and comments ๐Ÿค—

PART- 1

Ramesh - So let me give you a brief .

We have identified three victims for now . First Mr. Ram Kapoor , the famous industrialist .

Newsreprter of India Masala - Ms. Navya Thakur

IAS officer - Mr. Prakash Rai

All have been stabbed in stomach two times and a this mark has been made on the body with victim's blood



and a puddle of water found near the body. We have not able to identify the murder weapon.

I wanted my best people on this case so i have called all of you . Let me officially to you everyone

Nisha and Kabir our Main investigators

Nibir (Together) - But Sir ...

Ramesh - I will talk to you two later so

Saurav our Technical expert , Jwala our Forensic expert

and Kirti my assistant will keep the record of the investigation .

And all of you others will help them .

So guys get back to work soon and go over all the evidences once again and report me .

Nisha and Kabir you both stay here .


Everyone else leave the room .

OUTSIDE
( Here k is kirti , j is jwala and s is saurav )

J - what just happened
K - u are new na issliye u don't know

S - kn used to work together before but something happened. KN were solving a murder case together. the witness to the murder was a child. KN were assigned to protect her but due to some mu between the police department and private india she got killed

J - what she was also murdered. Then murderer was caught or not

K- murderer was caught but kn blame themselves I don't know why yaar

S- they decided to never work together even though together they have solved max number of cases


K- I think they even used to like each other , they so were perfect yaar

S- nahi they didn't like yaar

K- they did

J - guys chodo na... Ramesh sir



Ramesh comes outside followed by kn

Jks- sir andar kya hua

R- they agreed

Jks- kya kaise

R just winked at them and told nisha to come with him in his cabin and asked kirti to bring some file .

Inside ramesh's cabin

R- nisha are you alright you seem pretty disturbed / quite shaken

N - nothing like that sir I am fine

R- is it kabir

N- no sir not him I understand the problem i will manage .

R- is it the dream again

N- yes sir... Crying

R (patting her back) - I know this is tough for you but I am always there for you no matter what never hide anything from me and just focus on ur work and finding ur p...

Kirti (Entering the cabin )- sir Jwala found something


Sorry guys for any typing or grammatical error . Hope you like it . Also send me buddy request to receive pm for update from next time ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by maniwood - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
res unres yay first one to comment๐Ÿ˜Š...just loved your update...loved everyone's character...this curiosity is killing mee...amazing...plz continue sooon...n thank you for the pm
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Really sorry betu for delaying my comment so much ๐Ÿค— pls forgive ur mummy ๐Ÿ˜Š
Now coming to the FF,
OMG ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿฅณ!!!! This was my reaction when I got ur pm regarding ur story. I was dancing wirth joy when I came to know that my Betu was writing a story on Nibir ๐Ÿ˜† So now I will get FF updates from two Mansis ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Awesome๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Coming to the prologue, it was Mindblowing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I love the kind of genre u have chosen and the kind of setting in which Nibir's story has been set ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Love the suspense and the fact that Nibir are detectives โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†
Really looking forward to reading this story๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
unResed...!!
awesome update badoo...!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
luvd it to the core...!!โค๏ธ
sorry for chotu sa comment...but i don't have more words to say...it was super awesome...!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

do update the next part soon badoo...waiting..!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part mansi..๐Ÿ‘
Its getting interesting..
Jwala found what..!!??
Suspense mein chod diya...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†
Update next part soon..
Edited by ItsMeAarushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res ๐Ÿ˜‰
unres..

awesome update...
interesting story...
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
update soon.
Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago

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