Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally updating it , I know I have updated after a long time college has started so i was little busy but now i will update little fast 😆

Ramesh, Nisha and Kirti entered the lab. Jwala, Saurav and Kabir were already present there discussing.

Ramy - So what have you found Jwala.
J - Sir , I think I have found the murder weapon.
Sir as you can see there is a deep cut, flesh is teared and there is even scratch on the bones ( showing the x-ray)
R - So that means it is a knife and so sharp that it teared through to even scratch the bones ...
J- Yes sir but that was easy to find, the problem was the type and composition of the knife.
There were traces of water inside the cut and water was there around the wound and body too.
These facts and other clues helped me to reach the conclusion that knife was made of the ice...

Others were shocked...

Kirti - Oh my God !

N- It's a brilliant scheme , the ice will melt after some time leaving no clue, especially no fingerprints... Jwalu (hugging her) awesome work

J ( Smiling at kabir) - Actually it was kabir who actually reached this conclusion.. I only found the facts and explained the clues

Nisha turned red and didn't say anything

R - Good work Jwala and Kabir

Now I want nisha and kabir to go meet the victim's families again and interview the witnesses again... I hope you both don't have any problem.

Nibir nodded their head and went out.

Nisha - Kabir I will bring my things meet me outside

K - okay

Outside...

Nisha was going towards her scooty when kabir stopped her.

K- Can we go by my car it is very hot yaar...
N- Okay

They were going towards Mr.Kapoor's house... There was an awkward silence in the car. which Nisha broke...

"Kabir since when you have become so intelligent ".

Kabir was brought back to his senses.. who was lost in his own world, thinking about those cute moments he and Nisha had spent together , those moments he always cherished...

Hmmm sorry what did you say, Kabir said.
"Kabir I was wondering since when you have become so intelligent " Nisha said giggling .

"I have always been intelligent okay , remember that murder of famous singer it was I who found that important clue that turned the case " .


"Oh please it was I who deciphered that clue to find the murderer okay " Nisha said.

They started fighting over who was better ...when Kabir realised this fight was never gonna end soon .
So he said " Nisha okay fine . it was us who solved that case as a team ".
"Yeah you are right we solved it together ...those days ...acha those days se yaad aaya are still uncle aunty after you for marriage ? "

"Nisha you don't know what I am facing these days 24x7 ...whole day fight over marriage ...finally I have agreed and they have almost finalised a girl for me ".

Nisha became sad , she didn't realise how bad she was feeling and it showed on her face .

"Her name is Anchal " Kabir said .
Nisha gave him a shocked expression and Kabir smiled back .

"Do you know one day it was the limit , they asked me if everything was alright with me seeing Saurav and me " he said making a sad face .

Nisha started laughing .

" Yeah you will only laugh you have no one after you like this " , Kabir realised what he has said .

Nisha became teary eyed ...Kabir regretted saying that even after knowing .

"Please stop crying ... I am so sorry " Kabir said as he saw nisha crying . He handed her a bottle of water . He could not see her in tears like this .
They reached their destination .
"I am really sorry yaar ...see we have reached ".

Nisha stopped crying . They moved out of the car and went inside .


Whole day went like this . They didn't talk much . Though Nisha was calm outside but inside Kabir knew she was sad inside . He was helpless and disgusted upon himself .

Finally they got back to the office to report their whole day work to Ramesh .
When they went inside they saw everyone was tensed .

"Oh you are back , come fast we have to leave " Saurav said coming towards them .

Nibir gave him puzzled look to which Saurav replied
"There has been another murder " .

I hope you guys like it . Please do comment and criticise also if you don't find something right . Sorry for any typing errors .
Edited by maniwood - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awewome... yaar loved it totally...
maniwood thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awewome... yaar loved it totally...

thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good writing Mansi...😊 Another murder leading to a series of murders now.
Just one thing yar...The scenes complete very swiftly...I mean...more details like how KN interrogated the witness, how they questioned the family...those details would be helpful to cement the case more...especially the murders being a serial on...😊

But very interesting plot..Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Good writing Mansi...😊 Another murder leading to a series of murders now.

Just one thing yar...The scenes complete very swiftly...I mean...more details like how KN interrogated the witness, how they questioned the family...those details would be helpful to cement the case more...especially the murders being a serial on...😊

But very interesting plot..Update soon.

thanks shwetha 😃
Oh that thing I will show in next part it will focus more on murder and crime scenes I will describe all four
maniwood thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res🤣
unres

awesm update mani...

Ice knife...kabir is so intelligent
loved nibir nokjhok😊
kabir and shadi wo b anchal????
bechari nishu...😔
kabir k parents...saurav and kabir i m rogling🤣🤣
but ye kya nishu said ho gyi
one more murder...
update soon dear
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 👏 ...
Continue soon n thanks for the pm 😊
maniwood thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

Awesome update 👏 ...
Continue soon n thanks for the pm 😊

thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally update 😃
it's really interesting story
loved the update
felt bad fr nishu 😔
plz continue soon n tysm for the pm

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