Nibir FF - Beautiful Mess/ Part 3 pg 24 - Page 12

This is a kind of compensation for late comment.. inspired by your update.. for your update😆

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Why are they blaming themselves 😕

Galti dono ki hi nahi hai..😕

Galti hai toh sirf halation ki.. usske wajah se ekdusre se alag hogaye

But why fear when Rammy is here😎

lets see abh aage kya hoga😆

Sorry for the late comment.. I thought I commented on the story😆

Misunderstanding...😆

Originally posted by: Niya_789

This is a kind of compensation for late comment.. inspired by your update.. for your update😆

Haalton ke haaton kuch iss kadar majboor hue.. Jinka saath zindgi bhar ke liye pana tha unse hi door hue...

Originally posted by: maniwood

Thanks awesome shayyari will use it some way 😃

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆 wl unres not so soon...😉😆🤣

UNRES NO: 21😆

Sorry dii 4 late comments😳

Mannu Dii.. 😲Aap toh Chuparustam nikali..😲😆🤣
U r such a talented writer & U didnt write anything B4🤣
Shukar hai Anu papaji ka jisne aapko manaya likhne ke liye.. Hugs 4 U Anu papa🤗🤗

Abt the update..👏 Simply I just Loved it..❤️😆🤣
This Story is Spl 4 ME u knw Why??😉
Bcz Saru Loves Crime Thriller & This FF gives Me ASR feels🤣

Yaar I was Rofl ng When I read First Victim's name "RAM KAPOOR"🤣

Jwalu, Saurav& Kirti with NiBir mazaa ayegaa Investigation main..🤣

So NiBir had a past... Nishu is haunted by Nightmares... too many Mysteries👏👏👏

Loved The way How Ramesh Consoled Nishu.. Awww😳

Gud Update Mannu Dii👏👏👏

Do Write More🤗 Q ki Saru Ki DMM😉😆🤣

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Just simply fab I want update plz update soon as possible 👏

Originally posted by: Spruha1

bahot badiya...

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Really sorry betu for delaying my comment so much 🤗 pls forgive ur mummy 😊

Now coming to the FF,

OMG 😲🥳!!!! This was my reaction when I got ur pm regarding ur story. I was dancing wirth joy when I came to know that my Betu was writing a story on Nibir 😆 So now I will get FF updates from two Mansis 😆😆 Awesome😆😆😆

Coming to the prologue, it was Mindblowing👏👏👏

I love the kind of genre u have chosen and the kind of setting in which Nibir's story has been set 👍🏼

Love the suspense and the fact that Nibir are detectives ❤️😆

Really looking forward to reading this story😃😳😉