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hey guys ...here is a Nibir drabble... consider it a parting gift...i wont be much active in the forum from now on as college starts monday...but i will forever cherish the memories in the forum...wait a sec I am kidding i will be here whenever i can...but here is the drabble



Forever After...


He had been sitting on the white bench since morning.Mist curled about him.The flowers around him were studded with dew and they gleamed as the sunlight fell upon them. He looked at the flowers and smiled. They reminded him of her. He had been waiting for her, his every thought begining and ending with her. It had been a long time since he saw her, every minute seemed to him like an eternity as he waited for her to come. Eternity. He will be with her for eternity now.Last time their journey together was cut off midway. But not this time. This time they will be together forever. He smiled at the prospect.

He felt a gentle arm on his shoulder.His smile widened as he took in her presence. He slowly looked up and found her smiling upon him. She was wearing a white dress, a silver lace was tied at the waist. Her hair was was left untied and the small curls carressed her face.She was wearing white on the day they met. But she looked more beaurtiful to him now. Her smooth skin had a special glow. He was reminded of the white roses in the garden as he looked at her. Simplicity personified he thought.

She sat beside him without taking her eyes off his face.He placed his hand on her hand, took it and carressed them with his cheek. He couldnt believe he was finally with her. He felt complete sitting there in the sunlight with her. His eyes refused to leave her face as he carressed her cheeks with his hands. She hugged him tight, burying her face in his chest and he reciprocated. He slowly lifted her face and looked into her eyes. He smiled as he noticed the familiar glint in her eyes. He felt all his worries melting away as he kissed her gently. She smiled through the kiss sensing his eternal love for her.

"Tu kitna K hai yaar Nisha, kitne der se tera wait kar raha hun main...itna der kyu kiya aane keliye." He complained as he broke off the kiss.

"Tu bhi toh bahuth bada K hai...tu bhi kitna der kiya ...it took you so long to come. Mei toh bas kuch khande der kiya hai" She pouted.

"Oye madam...teri vajah se mujhe der karna pada...You made me promise na...ki mei tujhe milne tab aaunga jab mei saari Zimmederiyan poori karenge...mei toh kab se ready tha tujhe milne keliye." He acted as if he was angry with her.

"Kabir yaar...tu gussa mat karna please...par zimmedariyan nibhana bhi zaroori hai na...pata hai me tujhe bahuth miss kiya...rootna mat yaar...kaan pakadke sorry late hone keliye...ab smile karna please." She held her ears and shot a pleading look at him. Kabir couldnt hold up his facade seeing her face. He hugged her tightly

"Mei bhi bahuth miss kiya tujhe...bahuth...I love you Nisha... I love you so much...ab hum saath rehenge na?...hamesha keliye..." Kabir asked still hugging her.

"I love you too Kabir..." She smiled and said " hum saath rehenge... hamesha keliye... I promise... ab tu uth, bahuth der horahi hai, hume chalna chahiye...sab tera intezar kar raha hai wahan.." Nisha got up but Kabir held her hands.

"Badi hot lag rahi ho aaj" Kabir said with his naughty smirk.Nisha smiled at him, leaned down, her face close to his ear and whispered seductively.

"You too are looking sexy in the white Shirt Mr K" Nisha laughed as he saw Kabir's expression and pulled him to his feet. "Ab chalo" She said as she dragged him to the path in the garden "We should go." Kabir followed Nisha but a thought evaded his mind.

"Kya soch rahe ho Kabir...uske baare me?... Kya tum ek baar milna chahte ho usse? Nisha asked without turning her head." Kabir smiled at her question. She knew what he was thinking as always.

"of course...mujhse zyaad kaun jaanta hai tumhe...hum usse mile bina kaise jaa sakte ho...mujhe bhi usse milne ka mann hai bahuth dinon se..chalo..." She dragged him along with her as Kabir shook his head at her words smiling.

They reached the gate of a beautiful house. Both of them peered through the gate at the lawn. A young woman was sitting cross legged in the lawn and she was clad in white, she seemed sad. A lone tear slid down Kabir's cheek as he looked at her. Nisha placed a hand on his shoulder, he looked at her and found her in tears. He held her close to him and they both continued gazing at her. They looked on as a young man clad in white slowly came out of the house and joined her with two cups of coffee in his hand.

"Rooh.." He called her gently as he sat down beside her.She looked up at him. He gave her the coffee. She took it silently.

"Papa ne mujhe diya tha yeh naam..." She began breaking the silence."Rooh...soul...his soul... I already miss him Krish, maa ko bhi...pehle woh chali gayi...ab papa bhi- She began crying and Krish hugged her stroking her hair gently. Kabir held the bars of the gate tight,tears flowed down his cheek refusing to stop. Nisha cried into his chest. They stood their in each others arms, with each other's support gazing at their daughter. Kabir broke the silence.

"She will be all right soon...Krish hai na uske saath" Kabir said his voice choking. "Haan ...who aakhir meri beti hai naa" Nisha said controlling her tears." Haan apni maa ki tarah strong..." Kabir said smiling through his tears. Nisha smiled at him " ab hume chalna chahiye..." Kabir nodded,they both looked at their daughter once more and gave her a flying kiss.

"acha yeh batha...yeh swarg jagah kaisa hai? Kya wifey ko romance kar saktha ha waha?" Kabir asked as they began walking hand in hand.

"tu kitna k hai yaar kabir..." Nisha muttered while Kabir laughed whole heartedly pulling her to him.


Together...till death do us apart...and then forever after

Edited by -Lachu- - 10 years ago

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ammu4u thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully written lachu👏
loved evry bit of it😛
loved the way u described evrythng👏👏
n K J dilogs my all time fav Nibir dialog😉
now no one can separte them together 4ever 😛
nibir watchng der beti 😭😭 emotional kar diya yaar tune😉
n the K kabir wala dialog ""acha yeh batha...yeh swarg jagah kaisa hai? Kya wifey ko romance kar saktha ha waha?" 😉😆😆"

very well written lachu

all the best yaar study well
enjoy ur college life😉
yaha aathe rehna😉 .. ll miss u🤗


P.s:: tera FF update karna math bhulna OK
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOL Lachu, I thought you were actually serious at first about leaving the forum for college and I was about to yell NAHIII but then I read your joke and heaved a sigh of relief! 😆 Thank goodness you're not leaving! Anyways, good luck in college yaar! You'll be amazing!

And now to the story. Okay, I kinda guessed that the two were dead -- the dialogues were pretty vague and foreshadow-y 😆 But anyways, it was still cute. I love how you have Nisha-Kabir retain their way of talking -- esp that K bit. Seriously, my favourite part of NiBir and so unique to them as well 😆 But the ending was just pure cuteness. Not a fan of the name Rooh but you made it sound wonderful -- so great job there! 😊

Wonderful drabble Lachu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼...
luvd it❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its beyond beautiful... its amateur... nibir are forever
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simplicity at its best...
Just like your drabble...
Made me emotional... 😭
Moreover made me to comment..coz i am more of a lazy,silent reader types... 😉 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rula diya yaar... 😭
It was beautiful... ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lachu bua aise kaise hum se peecha chuda sakte ho
Okay coming to drabble one word beautiful
U described everything so beautifully
Surroundings and then nibir emotions awesome

At end I became emotional yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres😆

Lachu.. Lachu.. Lachu... 🤗🤗🤗Pls dnt becum inactive yaar..😭😳
Study well & be here whenever u r free..😆 & haan update ur SS warna 😈 u knw nahh😉

Abt this NiBir Drabble👏👏👏👏 suprb one yaar...👏 Well written👏👏👏

Mujhe pehle strike nahi hua yeh marne ke baad ka scene hai tab maloom pada when NiBir were staring Rooh😲 den I realised y everyone wearing "WHITE" dress.. I m shocked😲 yeh "WHITE" word mujhse kaise miss ho gaya.. may be I was soo much into the srty dat it went unnoticed.. Anywayss its Ur Writing made this.. So Special Jhappi +Clap tereliye🤗👏

NiBir's Understanding is Unique...👏👏👏 They can read eachother's mind

Loved It.. 👏👏👏👏👏 Quoating my fav line below.. 😳😆🤣

I love K kabir & J Nisha & K panti of Nibir follows them till HEAVEN😆🤣🤣🤣

"acha yeh batha...yeh swarg jagah kaisa hai? Kya wifey ko romance kar saktha ha waha?" Kabir asked as they began walking hand in hand.

Do write More... 🤗Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

beautifully written lachu👏

loved evry bit of it😛
loved the way u described evrythng👏👏
n K J dilogs my all time fav Nibir dialog😉
now no one can separte them together 4ever 😛
nibir watchng der beti 😭😭 emotional kar diya yaar tune😉
n the K kabir wala dialog ""acha yeh batha...yeh swarg jagah kaisa hai? Kya wifey ko romance kar saktha ha waha?" 😉😆😆"

very well written lachu

all the best yaar study well
enjoy ur college life😉
yaha aathe rehna😉 .. ll miss u🤗


P.s:: tera FF update karna math bhulna OK


thank you so much ammu...🤗
kya miss u yaar...i think i will be here at least for a min everyday😆...and i will update too😆

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