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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_lady

LOL Lachu, I thought you were actually serious at first about leaving the forum for college and I was about to yell NAHIII but then I read your joke and heaved a sigh of relief! 😆 Thank goodness you're not leaving! Anyways, good luck in college yaar! You'll be amazing!

And now to the story. Okay, I kinda guessed that the two were dead -- the dialogues were pretty vague and foreshadow-y 😆 But anyways, it was still cute. I love how you have Nisha-Kabir retain their way of talking -- esp that K bit. Seriously, my favourite part of NiBir and so unique to them as well 😆 But the ending was just pure cuteness. Not a fan of the name Rooh but you made it sound wonderful -- so great job there! 😊

Wonderful drabble Lachu!


i will be around Isha...but not as much as before😆...thank u for the wish

yeah the dialogues were pretty vague and foreshadowy😆...but thank u for liking it anyways...aww i love the name Rooh becoz of its meaning😆...but thank for the review yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼...
luvd it❤️


thank you for reading and liking it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

its beyond beautiful... its amateur... nibir are forever


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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: achuAR

Simplicity at its best...
Just like your drabble...
Made me emotional... 😭
Moreover made me to comment..coz i am more of a lazy,silent reader types... 😉 👏


i am flattered yaar😆...thank u for comnting and liking it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Rula diya yaar... 😭

It was beautiful... ❤️



dnt cry yaar😆...thank you for liking it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Its really beautiful ...
made me emotional😭
The ending they r together forever..so cute..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: -Lachu-


thank you so much ammu...🤗
kya miss u yaar...i think i will be here at least for a min everyday😆...and i will update too😆

then no miss u😆😆 har roz aaana bhul na math😉😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: maniwood

Lachu bua aise kaise hum se peecha chuda sakte ho

Okay coming to drabble one word beautiful
U described everything so beautifully
Surroundings and then nibir emotions awesome

At end I became emotional yaar



i am not leaving😆
yeh sab log itne emotional kyu horahe ho😆...KN are happy yaar...death is not the end na...its just the begining...dekh kitna happy hai Kabir aftr death...he gets to romance his wifey😆

thank you for reading and liking😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

unres😆

Lachu.. Lachu.. Lachu... 🤗🤗🤗Pls dnt becum inactive yaar..😭😳
Study well & be here whenever u r free..😆 & haan update ur SS warna 😈 u knw nahh😉

Abt this NiBir Drabble👏 suprb one yaar...👏 Well written👏👏👏

Mujhe pehle strike nahi hua yeh marne ke baad ka scene hai tab maloom pada when NiBir were staring Rooh😲 den I realised y everyone wearing "WHITE" dress.. I m shocked😲 yeh "WHITE" word mujhse kaise miss ho gaya.. may be I was soo much into the srty dat it went unnoticed.. Anywayss its Ur Writing made this.. So Special Jhappi +Clap tereliye🤗👏

NiBir's Understanding is Unique...👏👏👏 They can read eachother's mind

Loved It.. 👏 Quoating my fav line below.. 😳😆🤣

I love K kabir & J Nisha & K panti of Nibir follows them till HEAVEN🤣

"acha yeh batha...yeh swarg jagah kaisa hai? Kya wifey ko romance kar saktha ha waha?" Kabir asked as they began walking hand in hand.

Do write More... 🤗Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣


first of all

CONGO FOR BECOMING SENIOR MEMBER😆


now everyone will hear your bak bak non stop...

You didnt realize they were dead😲...thats a shocker with ur track record...and i love u too much yaar...u cant get rid of me that easily ...i'll be around.thank u for ur chotu sa comnt😆

ps- sab ko same line pasand aaya😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: shinelove

Its really beautiful ...

made me emotional😭
The ending they r together forever..so cute..


thank you so much😊

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