Revival : Conquering The Past - A Joint Venture updt scene 15 pg 41 - Page 29

Originally posted by: itznimi003

chap 13
nice update dear
nyay ki devi wala part was supercul
but d way u connected der game wid dat pilani incident was mindblowing...
d emotion behind every line of dat part directly reaches to my heart...
d way u showed nisha n her scared reactn was superb
dadaji felt guilty day wat he was going to do wid her grand daughter
loved how laxmi gave ans. to rupan
awsm update dear

Originally posted by: Nhk2001

Really powerful and nicely written. I felt the helplessness nisha felt!

Originally posted by: arshiss

simply superb rema!!👏👏

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

sorry for such a late comment... I really liked how it is shaping up... loved it specially the pilani part engaged in the game... I have really enjoyed it reading pls do pm me

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Great update Rema...😊 Finally we enter THE moment of the story...😆

I always wished for the entire family to know about Nisha and how RL have been supportive of her. Loved the Dadaji's guilt part.

Originally posted by: Teogapi

Thanks shweta... It wouldnt have been possible without you... You helped a lot...😆

Yaar sabko dadaji wala part kyun itna pasand aaraha hai...😆

Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome update rema

Loved how cousins started the convo and tried to tell nisha the message

Superb way you wrote about nisha

Finally everyone will know about pilani incident

Best part dadu guilt and he cancelling marriage

Originally posted by: Niha205

made me cry😭