NiBir SS - Finding Kabir (COMPLETED; Chapter-6 UPDATED on Pg-19)

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Lily

@do0dleR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Both the chotu chotu baby update were nice

Ye kya hai bujho toh jaane?

The clue is so VJ style ka creepy

It is a riddle...keep guessing..😆

And i am still writing...😆

Next part will be longer...😊

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Lily

@do0dleR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: SONAL30
nice update lily😃
now toh confirm he is duniya ka sabse bada dhakkan aka DKSBD🤣
i mean that stupid playing with nisha😡bechari she is bhery bhery tensed😆
but where is he😕
update soon n thanks for the pm😃

Thank you dear...😊

He is not playing...

but i will not tell you now where he is...😆

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Thank you Annie...😊😊
I got the idea to write detective type NiBir story from your horror story...😆😆
Thank you for inspiring me...😊

woww...me an inspiration...!!!🤣🤣🤣

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Lily

@do0dleR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Thank you Ammu, janvi, mansi, poo10, luvzindagi,alisha17, rsk16, adeenafari, sanchi22, mika17 and shinelove...😊😊...(sorry I don't know all of ur names)...

I really feel inspired to write more reading all your comments... Sorry for the small second update...But the next one is definitely going to be longer...😊

I had planned to post the next update today itself, but my net had problem for almost 2 days, so i couldn't post...I thought to post now, but I have to make some changes...The third part is definitely coming by tomorrow...😊

Today is last episode of NAUC, plus there is going to be confession...really excited!!!