NiBir SS - Finding Kabir (COMPLETED; Chapter-6 UPDATED on Pg-19) - Page 18

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice update lily👏

Gangwals r such a k...they kidnapped kabira🤣n kabira is DKSBD kuch samjha hi nhi🤣

Loved it n thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

lovely ending.

the min i read Neesha...i knew"Ritesh"!!!! n i was right!!

n the IPKKND😆...even i thought like saurav only😆

nice lili.

do come back n write more.

KJ-90😆

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome ending to ur story

Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Fabulous story Lily 👏👏👏

Loved the plot 😆😆

The climax was superb 😆👍🏼 👏👏👏

Never suspected that the cosuins and Ramesh would hatch such a plan to unite Nibir 😆

Loved the way, u developed the story 😳

Please write more intriguing and gripping stories like this 😳

Waiting to read more of ur works 😉

Continue when u get time 😉

(No pressure 😆)

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Thank you Mihikaa...🤗😊

But today I am free...😆... so I am posting an OS today itself...

Will PM u...😊

I know I havent been able to post my long comments on this story so just thought of highlighting the parts I loved especially in the last chapter.

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

I know I havent been able to post my long comments on this story so just thought of highlighting the parts I loved especially in the last chapter.

Firstly I love ur narration technique 👏👏😃

It keeps the readers so engaged. I feel like I m watching a movie

I loved the scene when Nisha met Kabir and the way they opened their hearts to each other😃😳

The way they solved each riddle was superb👏

The introduction which every member of the plan gave at the end was really amusing😆

Now coming to my favorite lines,

Waise Neesha, kaafi beautiful lag rahi ho... Lag hi nahi raha ki tum pehle wali Neesha ho", Riteish complemented Nisha awakening the J-Kabir.- Ritesh 🤣

Ye naya wala ladka kaun h?? Kahin mera competitor to nahi...! Arey meri to shaadi ho gayi h... *sigh* Thank God!", Kabir asked aside to himself. Loved this dialogue 😆

"Hello friends, my name is Riteish Jain. Apne friend aur 'ex':P ki help karne k liye tall gate guard ban gaya."

Kabir aside to Nisha with his J-ness, "Ye bhi tera ex h?!! Nisha tere kitne ex h??!"- J Kabir 🤣

Kabir's eyes twinkled with mischief. Nisha understood what it meant and smiled at him.- Kabir ki baat Nisha na samjhe aisa ho sakta hai kya 😳😉

"Waise yeh to bata 'KJ-90' ka matlab kya h?", Nisha whispered to Kabir.

Kabir smiled and replied back, "Yehi ki Nisha Gangwal ne K Kabir ko 90 dino (3 mahine) mein J Kabir bana diya..;)"- Hayee 😳 Really cute and smart dialogue 😳 aur inn donon ne hume apne pyaar mein paagal bana diya

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Hi Saaru...🤗 I loved reading your comment...😊

Sry dear...😒... ab ki baar pkka PM pakka...😊

6 (a) Yes, I am a big fan of IPKKND-1...😆... Tum to yahan bhi analysis kar rhi ho...😆😆...good keep it up!!.😉

Thank you...😃... ARSHI k matlab k liye mjhe kaafi friends se puchna padha tha...😆...they were like isko kya ho gaya...😆😆

6(b) Thank you dear...:) Confused Jwala humesha cute lagti h...😆😆

6(c) 🤗🤗

6(d) Agar Kabir K h to usey J bhi to hona padega na, K-J hamesha saath me aate h...😉.

Thank you dear...🤗..you comments over-overwhelm me...😊😆

N dnt wry, m soon gonna post my new fiction (OS)...😊

And I am Fan of your MishRi Analysis...😳...keep writing more...😃

Yeah Lily ne padh lia mera Comment😆 Thank U 4 liking my Analyisis..😆 Do comment dere also..🤣🤣