NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 86

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
mai tho kithne dhino se wait kar rahi thi finally tumne aaj post kar liya shibu pothi😃
awesome post😃 really iss jodhi ko kisi ki nazar naa lage☯️
shibu👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the whole story srry was nt able to comment earlier as I was a silent reader but I want to tell u I just keep waiting fr ur updates becoz of the way u write their feelings nd in the end the beautiful lines
Well awesome epilogue
Thnks fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg finally the epilogue is here!
Loved it..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
So officially my last comment on ur story ! 😊
Wow 😆 aakhirkaar woh din aa hi gaya😆 Dont know whether to be happy or sad.
Chalo I hv decided not to be sad😆 So lets talk about ur Epilogue😆
Shibu meri jaaan ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Well your epilogue has left me speechless👏👏👏 Samajh nahin aa raha kya likhoon😆 Lagta hai tumhe sirf mere emoticons se kaam chalana padega😆😉
Fabulous Epilogue yaar👏
Amazing, Lovely, Delightful, Mindblowing👏 Jitni taareef karoon utni kam hai😆
Thoroughly loved it 👏👏👏 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️
So, you know my crazy love story. I entered Nisha's room and stared at her sleeping figure. She is so damn cute! Innocence personified. Par innocent hai nahi... Anyways, I didn't want to disturb her, so I turned to leave, but was surprised to hear her call me. I looked at her and smiled.- Cuteness and adorableness personified😳😳 Nibir toh Mujhe apne pyaar mein maar hi daalenge

A crazy idea came up in my mind. I went and kissed her cheek. She smiled.- chooo cute☺️

Kabir- Nisha, this is a good bye kiss... Main tumhe chod ke jaa raha hoon... wahaan jahaan se koi lautke nahi aata...- Kabir is such a nautanki😆🤣

Nisha was shocked. Then she looked at me with her eyes throwing daggers at me.-😆😆 Hilarious but cute😳😉

Nisha- (angrily)Aisi bakwaas kaise kar sakte ho tum Kabir?

Kabir- I am sorry Nisha... I am going...

Nisha- (angrily)Where? To hell?- 😆🤣

Kabir- Nahi, tumhare sapno se door... tum bas mere sapne dekhti ho... ab bhi sirf mujhe hi imagine kar rahi ho...😆

Nisha- Accha? Mr. Kabir Kumar, don't forget, I can feel your presence... So don't think ki I'll believe that I am hallucinating. You pranks won't work on me sweetheart (she winked)- Sweetheart❤️ ☺️ Sach kaha Nishu ne😃 Nibir are soulmates and they can sense each other's presence

I smiled. Yes, in these 2 months, she had got to know me very well, and I couldn't deny this fact. So playing pranks on her was out of the question- Love this line🤗awww 😳 Cuteness overload🤗

She hugged me. I caressed her hair for some time. -Nibir romance😳

Then I remembered the reason for this Majnugiri, so broke the hug. She looked at me in confusion.- 😆😆😆 Majnugiri🤣 Awesome line Shibu👍🏼😆😆

Kabir- happy one month anniversary Nishu..- Kabir ko yaad tha😃 Normally ladkon ko dates yaad hi nahin rehti magar humara Kabir toh sabse alag hai na😳 One in a million

Nisha looked at me in shock and confusion. I knew she would forget about it, but her statement shocked me.- Nishu ne Kabir ko pleasantly surprise kar diya😳 Waise dhakkan ko laga ki Nishu bhool jaayegi- 🤣

Nisha- Tumhe yaad tha? Mujhe laga tum bhool jaaogi...

Kabir- Aur mujhe laga tum bhool jaaogi...

We both smiled at our stupidity. Of course, we would never forget today's day, no matter what.-😆😆😆 Ab Nibir se zyaada adorable duniya mein koyi ho sakta hai kya😳

I removed a small box from pocket and the ring from it. Nisha gasped in shock. I bent on my knees.- So simple yet sooo romantic❤️

Kabir- Nisha, will you be mine, forever?

Nisha- (happily) yes...

I stood up and hugged her. Then we went to the terrace and sat there enjoying each other's presence. It was perfect and I have no words to describe it... I am here, with my Nishu in my arms and we are lost in the beauty of the star lit sky. What else could have been better?- Hayee😳 Main toh Nibir ke pyaar mein kho gayi This part was just amazing❤️ Chooo cute, sweet and romantic

There was something better than this, it is our love...our togetherness...- Shibu ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ This line makes me fall in love with Nibir and your writing all over again🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Iss chapter mein maano tumne balti bhar chaashni ulat di ho😳😆😆 Sooo sweeet. so lovable, so adorable Tumhari writing itni simple hai phir bhi dil ko choone waali hai❤️ Maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki tumhari stories are just magical Har chapter ko padhte hi ek lammmbi si muskaan aa jaati hai chehre par😃 Aur iss chapter ko padhte hue laga ki my jaw will start paining cz I was smiling for sooo long😆😆😆 Tumhari stories ko padhte hue lagta hai ki Nibir should be christened with the name Cuteness ki misaal 😉 And u are undoubtedly the queen of Nibir cuteness yaar😉😉😉 Nobody can portray Nibir as cute as u can👏👏👏

Love you yaar❤️

And I think the epilogue was definitely worth the wait😉 Specially for the other forum members kyunki u have proved ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai🤗 Extra meetha hota hai😆😆😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yaar trust me ill miss this story it was so good pls ek aur epilogue pls pls pretty pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome epilogue 👏 👏 👏
Loved it 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome yaar nd super thank for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome sissy...👏
a beautiful end to a beautiful story...❤️
i'll miss it...but atleast i wont feel disappointed ki main baaki ke story nahi padh paa rahi🤔
do write more sissy...and dont forget to pm me when u do😊
love u🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 26
lovely update yaar
nisha wanting kabir's attention
nibir dance was very awesome
saurav zaroor pitega
thnks for pm
ritika

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