NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
Behave likemy bf ha hs. Nd kabir angry. Saurav mailing povs. Sb saurav bechara kua hoha uska. Dekhte hai .kya socha hai tumne.gulab jamund fpr u. Nd eagerly waiting for conffession.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salute to Shantanu 😆
And Saurav too 😉
Loved the part... But it was small yaar 😕
Try to update little longer...
Thanks for the PM 😊
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx fr d pm 😃
Biwi ki tarah mat lecture do 😆 😉 haha kabir.nibir fall 😳 saurav galat time pe entry maar dia 😡 😆 nisha kitni k hai kabir ko pitwane waali thi 😆
Nisha j 😳 😆 bf ki Tarah behave nd all 😳 😳 nibir dance 😳 😳
Awsm update loved it 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haay kitna cute update diya tune shibu
Can't wait what will happen next
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Day 25:-
Awesome chapter 😉
NiBir rickshaw ride 😆
And the cher raha hai part was.. 🤣


Day 26:-
Dono ne to J pan Ki limit cross kardi 🤣
And Saurav was awesome 😉

Solly for the late comment 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome shibu
J nisha j kabira 😆
Nibir dance 😳
So cute yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Nisha was jealous and as usually her denial mod
Shantanu planned well and now kabir was j
Kab tak yeh chalega ab to dono mein se ek to purpose kare
Waiting for that
Update soon
Sorry for late comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome blossom shibu!!!!!!
yaaar am faling more for them now!!!!
when when will they confesss?
i hope jaldi hooo!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Day 27 updated. Enjoy Reading.

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Day 27

*VSR Studios*

Nisha joined her friends who were discussing something all excited.

Harsh- Nisha, kal kya plan hai?

Nisha- Kuch khaas nahi, kyun?

Harsh- Actually main soch raha tha, ki kal holiday hai, so why don't you all join me at my place...

Kirti-(excited) That's a cool idea...

Sukku- Haan, we'll come at your place... It will be so much fun, hai naa Nisha?

Nisha, nodded in a yes and walked to meet Viraj to discuss about today's schedule.

She was passing the rehearsal hall, when she saw the dance crew chatting. Vrinda slapped Kabir, because he made fun of her and he lightly patted her cheek. Nisha's eyes couldn't bare the sight, so she walked to meet Viraj.

*After shooting for an hour*

Saurav- Nisha, tera mobile de, I have to call mom...

Nisha- yeh le...(she gave him the cell and went to Viraj who was searching for her)

Saurav talked to his mom. After the call, he tried to search for Nisha, but couldn't find her anywhere. He saw Kabir talking with a dance crew member.

Saurav- Kabir...

Kabir excused himself and went to him.

Kabir- Kya hua?

Saurav- yaar, yeh Nishu ka mobile tere paas rakhle naa, I have to go with Dolly to the mall...

Kabir-(confused) Abhi?

Saurav- yeah, she needs some props for the set, Viru ne mujhe uske saath jaane ke liye kaha hai...

Kabir-Thikh hai...

Saurav gave him the cell and went. Kabir tried to search for Nish, but Vrinda called him so he forgot about the cell.

*After an hour*

The rehearsals were disturbed with someone mobile ringing.

Kabir- (annoyed) Kiska mobile hai?

Lakshya-Kabir, tumhara hai, I think...

Kabir-(confused) Mera?

He remembered that Nisha's mobile was with him. He checked the call and was surprised to see Ramesh calling. Not knowing what to do, he answered the call.

Ramesh- hello Nisha?

Kabir- Ji uncle, Nisha nahi hai, Main Kabir hoon, actually she forgot her cell and it is with me...

Ramesh- Oh, Hi Kabir...Sorry I didn't know...

Kabir- It's ok uncle... Kuch important baat thi kya?

Ramesh-Hmm... haan... Nishu ne tumhe apne decision ke baare mein batayaa?

Kabir- (confused) Kaisa decision?

Ramesh - Bauji ne usse pucha tha, about Harsh and Nisha's marriage...

Kabir heart cringed in pain when he heard Nisha and Harsh's name in one sentence.

Kabir- (trying to hide his pain) Nahi...Par uncle, she doesn't want to get married so soon...

Ramesh- I know, par Bauji ki baat koi nahi taal sakta... 3 saalon se she is avoiding the discussion, par kab tak?

Kabir- Uncle, I think you should give her some time...

Ramesh- 3 saal ka waqt bahut hota hai... Listen, please tum usse bolna ki maine call kiya tha, and Laxmi and I both think that it's high time she agrees for the marriage... I'l call her later...

Ramesh hanged the call. Kabir was shocked.

Kabir- (in mind) Uncle aur aunty bhi maan gaye? Nisha ki shaadi... Harsh se...

Vrinda looked at him in confusion as a tear slid down his cheek. She went to him

Vrinda- Kya hua Kabir?

Kabir- Kuch nahi...

Vrinda- Apni bff se chupaoge?

Kabir-(annoyed, screaming) Kaha naa kuch nahi...

He stormed from there while all stared at his retreating figure in shock. After all Kabir never raised his voice.

Kabir saw that Nisha was with Sukku and Umesh in the canteen. He decided to give her mobile. He went to her and stood next to her. Nisha looked at him through the corner of her eyes and chose to ignore because she was annoyed with him for spending time with Vrinda.

He kept the mobile on the table. Nisha looked at him confusion.

Kabir-(in monotone) Tumhara cell... Saurav ne diya tha... He had to go with Dolly to the mall...

Nisha- (not looking at him) Thanks..

Kabir- Tumhare dad ka call aaya tha...

Nisha-Hmm...

Kabir stood there thinking that Nisha will tell him about Harsh and her marriage but Nisha didn't even spare him a glance. This added fuel to his fire. Umesh and Sukku stared at their friends confusingly. It was for the first time in the 3 weeks that they weren't talking properly. Awkward silence enveloped the 4.

Umesh- Sab thikh hai naa?

Nisha- Haan, kyun?

Sukku- Nahi, tum dono aise chup...

Kabir-(sarcastically, eyeing Nisha) Agar baat karne ke liye kuch bacha hai, toh baat karenge na...

Nisha-(confused) Matlab? Main tumse kuch chipa rahi hoon?

Kabir- Huh, robber judge ko daante...

Nisha- You meant Chor Kotwaal ko daante...

Kabir- Whatever...

He walked away from there.

Nisha- (in mind) Hadd hai, K Kahin ka...ainvayi drama kar raha tha...

Kabir- (in mind) Akkad toh dekho... Abhi bhi nahi bataya... Jhalli...

Saurav and Dolly witnessed this whole scene.

Saurav-(happily) Finally, our plan is being successful...

Dolly- Saurav, I don't think our plan is working... Tumne dekha nahi, they both were so rude with each other...

Saurav- Tum meri kabiliyat pe shaq kar rahi ho?

Dolly- Nahi par...

Saurav- (interrupting her) Main sir se half day maang ke aata hoon...

Dolly- Par kyun?

Saurav- Main jaisa kehta hoon, waisa karo... (he told her something)

Dolly- Ok.

Saurav asked for permission and messaged Dolly to convince Nisha, while he went to meet Kabir.

*Set*

Dolly- Nishu, tu mere saath shopping chalegi?

Nisha- Sir se pucha?

Dolly- Haan.

Nisha- Ok then.

*Rehearsal hall*

Saurav- Kabir, tu mere saath shopping chalega? Mujhe Dolly ke saath jaana tha, par I am too bored, tu bhi chal...

Kabir- (bored) Tu gaya tha?

Saurav- Haan,par...actually Diya ka engagement gift lena hai usse.

Kabir-Fine.

Saurav and Dolly sat on the front seats. Nisha smiled at Kabir, but he ignored her and looked outside. Nisha was confused. Dolly signed Saurav through her eyes and he started the engine.

*Shopping Mall*

Dolly and Nisha were selecting dresses for themselves while Saurav and Kabir were waiting for their shopping to finish.

Dolly- Nishu, main accessories dekh ke aati hoon...

Nisha- Ok. Main ek aur dress dekhti hoon...

Saurav and Dolly went, while Nisha was choosing a dress for herself. She picked a blue dress and heard Kabir say, "Accha nahi dikh raha hai..." She turned to face him, but he acted as if he was busy with his mobile. She picked a red dress.

Kabir- Tumpe white suit karega...

She smiled. He couldn't be annoyed with her, still he was faking annoyance, for an unknown reason. She went in the trial room and 15 minutes passed, yet didn't come out. Kabir started worrying.

Kabir- Oye,tu thikh hai naa?

Nisha- Kabir, dress ki zip...

Kabir- Kya hua?

Nisha stepped out. Kabir looked at her in awe. She was looking GORGEOUS! Feeling his gaze on herself, Nisha blushed.

Nisha- Woh zip nahi khul rahi...

She turned her back. Kabir loosened the zip for her. They stared at each other through the mirror, but after a few seconds, Kabir moved away.

After shopping for some more time, they went to a restaurant and then to their houses with different emotions. Kabir being upset, Nisha confused and Dolly-Saurav hopeful.

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Tumse gussa hoon... phir bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon...

Teri galtiyan samjhoon... Yaa apne dil ko samjhoon...

Khud nahi jaanta yeh sab kya hai... Par jo bhi hai...

Yeh sab kismet ka ajeeb sa khel hai...

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