NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago
Unressed on pg 58 and 53 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Soo sweet story ...and thanks for PM
Posted: 10 years ago
superb update superb shayari...
everything is just awesome... ❤️
suger exchanged with salt?!? 🤣 🤣
poor kabiraa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Day 14
Awesome part
Kabir was enjoying with kids n nisha spying on him😆
Whts up...yahaan tosky hai wahaan kya hai🤣kabir was hell irritated
Nisha planned a surprise party...aww
N that confession omg...what was that n in which movie🤣
Niska ka gift wow that was priceless👏
Totally loved it👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Day 15
Nice part😃
Nibir n their fight poor aunty uncle iss umar mein kya kya kya dekhna pad rha hai😆
N the whole gang at nibir's house😉
Salty coffee🤣
Nice part n specially the ending eith those beautiful shayris😊
Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update shibu
tumhara her din dusre se different hota hai and tumhari updates padh me mein nibir land mein kho jatati hun
nisha itna bhi kya lazy hona bechre kabir ke mehenat pe salt pher diya🤣
lovely update
thnx for the pm
update soon
Ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update shibu ⭐️
Loved that coffee part 🤣
That shayari was fabulous 👏⭐️
Thanx for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res 😆
Have unreserved on pg 56😆
Will update this comment and chapter 14's comment very soon😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirians😃, Thanks a lot for the likes and comments😃. Day 16 is updated😛. Enjoy reading the new day that will bring some new memories for NiBir😊.

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Day 16

The set was usual, people were usual, but he was dancing in happiness. His happiness knew no bounds today. The reason for his happiness was that Nisha had decided to participate in a state level archery competition.

*Flashback*

In the morning when they were leaving for the studio, she handed him the form she had filled. Nisha's lips turned into a smile when Kabir's brown eyes stared at her in shock, happiness, surprise and excitement.

Kabir- I am really happy ki tumne yeh decision liya.

Nisha- I know, reaction dekh kar hi pata chala.

Kabir- Toh selections kab hai?

Nisha- ek mahine baad, main soch rahi thi ki aaj leave leke practices ke liye jaau.

Kabir-(faking surprise) Tu sochti bhi hai?

Nisha's hand rose to slap him, but he held it and by mistake pulled her close to himself. Nisha looked at him shock and Kabir was losing himself in her deep orbs. After an eyelock, he left her.

*Flashback ends*

Saurav came and informed him that they were shooting the dance sequence. His mind was now distracted from Nisha. After 2 hours of shoot, he tried to call Nisha but her mobile was switched off. "Shaayad practice kar rahi hogi" He thought to himself and kept his cell aside.

Here Nisha went to the ground. After 3 long years she was practicing archery. Her heart was dancing in excitement. She calmed herself down and picked the arrow and bow. She missed many shots, but there was no frustration, all she felt was happiness in failure and when she hit first aim correctly, her happiness reached on cloud 100. The time passed and she didn't realize when 2 hours were over. She then went home, but there was no much work, so she was watching the television, when the door knocked. She felt happy when she opened the door and saw Kabir.

Kabir- Practices kaise the?

Nisha- (happily)Awesome!

He entered the house, freshened up and went in the living room. Nisha started telling him about the practices. Kabir smiled as she talked animatedly about how she missed the aim or how she competed with a girl there.

Kabir- Haan haan, shaant ho jaayo... kitni excited ho?

Nisha- Sorry, woh bahut dino baad practice ki naa, isiliye...

Kabir- Chalo, tumhari excitement aur badate hai...

Nisha- Matlab?

Kabir- Ice-cream?

Nisha-(excited) Haan chalo.

They went to the ice-cream parlor. Kabir brought chocolate bars for both of them. They were sitting on the bonnet of the car and eating when the bar fell from Kabir's hand. Nisha looked at him and her choco-bar. She gave him the choco-bar.

Kabir- (confused)Kya hua?

Nisha- Kuch nahi, mera mood nahi hai... tu kha le...

Kabir smiled knowing what's going in her in head and started eating the ice-cream.

Kabir-(enjoying her ice cream) Yumm... so delicious...

Nisha looked at him with a baby face. Before he could speak further, she snatched it from him and ate some. Finally both shared the ice-cream. Nisha looked at Kabir. A little of the ice-cream was remaining on his lips. She signaled him to wipe the ice-cream. He confusingly ran his hand over his lips but was unsuccessful in wiping it. Nisha slowly wiped the ice-cream. That touch send sparks down their spine. Nisha and Kabir could not stir their eyes away from each other's eyes.

Nisha came out of the trance they then decided to go home. After cooking and having dinner, Nisha sat on the bed with her book. Kabir looked at her mesmerized. Suddenly, he thought of something and called out to her.

She looked up, curious.

Kabir- I want to read the book.

Nihsa was shocked.

Nisha- (shocked) Are you serious?

Kabir- Do I look as if I am joking.

Nisha- Tum mujhe kabhi serious nahi dikhte...

She burst out laughing and Kabir sighed. She signalled him to sit beside her. They both were reading the book, but Nisha's mind was lost in another thoughts.

Nisha- (in mind)Kabir isn't someone who would read a love story, correction, woh book padh raha hia, yahin sabse badi baat hai... Then why is he reading the book? For me? (Realizing) Tu bhi kya bakwaas kar rahi hai Nishu? He must be interested... that's it...

Kabir was lost in the book. Yes he and books would never go hand in hand, but it was a love story and he was in love... So it made sense if he read a love story...

Kabir- (in mind) Kaash Nisha aur main bhi iss author ki tarah ek saath khoobsurat pal bita sake... (out of the trance) heck! What are you thinking Kabir? You already spend beautiful time with her... Each moment is beautiful if she is with me...

Half hour passed with them reading the book. But suddenly, Kabir felt weight on his shoulder. He turned to see Nisha sleeping peacefully. He smiled. He helped her sleep on the bed properly, turned off the lights and went in the balcony.

He took his dad diary with him and was reading it. He hadn't found much time these days for the diary, but today, he wasn't feeling sleepy.

He read about his childhood days, when his dad was guilty for not spending time with him, his mom was guilty for not taking care of him. He read about the pain his dad went through..

He couldn't read further. A lump formed in his throat. Tears glistened in his eyes when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned to see Nisha standing.

Kabir- (wiping his tears) Tu toh so rahi thi naa?

Nisha- How could I sleep when my so-called-hubby is outside, trying to hide his pain for a no particular reason..

Kabir- Nisha, its late, I think you should sleep...

Nisha- (interrupting him)Yes, its late... Agar tumhe yeh diary pehle milti toh you wouldn't be so broken... Kabir it's no body's fault...

Kabir-(not able to hide his tears anymore) I feel guilty for fighting with dad every minute when he disagreed to play with me... for fighting with Mom when she chose Dad's appointments over my school meetings... I just... (looking in her eyes) Can't I change it all?

Nisha- Of course, you can...

Kabir looked at her in disbelief and hugged her when she said the next words.

Nisha- Keep loving your Mom-Dad, they are with you, in your heart...

Kabir found solace in her arms. Nisha held him close to herself, not knowing the magic her presence did to him. The stars that blanketed the sky were watching all this. The night was blissful, not because the stars added their beauty to it, but because, Kabir found the solace he was searching for from so many years...

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Mere dil mein dard bahut hai... Mera dil tadapta bahut hai...

Par jab tum saath ho, mere paas ho...

Toh mujhe yaqeen hai... Mera dard kam hone waala hai...

Meaning- My heart is filled with pain. But when you are with me, near me, I believe the pain will lessen.

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Hope the memories were good coz every memory has a story which is untold to anyone except your heart😊. Do like/comment😊.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Kabir Nisha ke kiye kitna khush hai 😆
Ok you reminded me of the icecream scene in the show.. Its just you role reversed it😆(esmart girl)😉
Nisha and Kabir reading a LOVE STORY.. Aur khud ki love story imagine kar rahe hai *dreamy sigh* ❤️
The end part no words for that 👏
Cont soon..
I am first again.. 😎
You made me a stalker 🤔
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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