NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago
today I read alll the parts!!!
this was awesome awesome awesome and awesome!!!
what should I say about it actually have no words to praise the way story is going!!!
loved it totally loved it shibu!!!
thankuuu for writting this and most importantly thanks for all the PM's :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirians, Thanks a lot for the likes and comments. Day 15 is updated. Hope you like it.

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Day 15

It was a holiday for the whole crew because of some production house issues. Not knowing what to do, Nisha and Kabir were watching T.V., but both were fighting because Nisha wanted to watch a rom-com and Kabir was more interested in the repeat telecast of a dance reality show. Finally the fight turned into World War.

Hearing the loud noises, Mr. Saxena, who thought his tenants to be disciplined and well-mannered, rushed up. He was shocked to the core when he opened the door. The living room looked at if the earthquake had just hit it, with the sofa turned, books scattered around, the pages of newspapers lying in all possible directions, a glass broken, sandals in two opposite directions, the cotton of pillows flying in the air and the covers of the cushions lying around.

His wife, who had followed her husband, also looked at the scenario. Suddenly they both turned embarrassed as they saw their tenant couple near the sofa. Nisha lay on the floor and Kabir on top of her. Both were lost in each other. Their hair was covered the cotton, but neither of them even had an idea of it.

Mr. Saxena cleared his throat. Kabir looked up and Nisha followed his eye movement. She was so embarrassed that she tried to stand up, but her head colloided with Kabir's.

"Ouch!" Both screamed in pain and looked at each other awkwardly. Kabir stood up and helped Nisha up.

Mr. Saxena- Woh awaaz suni toh... (he tried to explain his uninvited arrival.)

NiBir-(apologetic) Sorry.

Mrs. Saxena-(to decrease the awkwardness, to Mr. Saxena) Chaliye.

Mr. Saxena- Haan...

NiBir looked at each other and started cleaning up. After an hour both sat on the sofa tired. After all you realise the impacts of a war after it ends. Suddenly the door bell rang Nisha asked Kabir to open it, but he ignored her.

She kicked him out of the sofa and signalled him to open the door. He opened the door and his eyes widened in shock.

Nisha- Kabir, kaun hai?

She too came outside and was shocked to see Saurav, dolly, Umesh, Aman, Kirti and Sukku.

Sukku- Hi Nisha, Hey Kabira...

Nisha- Hi...

Kabir- Come in naa...

He made way for them. After serving them snacks,

Nisha- Saurav, yaar chachi ka call aaya tha, ek minute andar aa na...

She took Saurav inside. Kabir too wanted to know what these people were doing there so he too rushed in making an excuse.

Nisha(angry)- Birthday tak theek tha, aaj yeh log yaahan kya kar rahe hai?

Kabir-(tensed) Haan, aur agar yeh aunty yaa uncle se mile toh humara bhanda phoot jaayega na, duffer?

Saurav- Chill guys, maine sab kuch sambhal liya hai... Mr. Saxena aur unki wife kahin bahar gaye hai...

Kabir- Tujhe kaise pata?

Saurav- Mujhe tera camera chahiye tha, isiliye aaya tha, tabhi maine unhe jaate hue dekha... Aur subah Sukku ne mujhse kaha tha ki woh sab mere yahaan aayega, par mere landlord se mere neighbor ne complain ki hai, so I invited them here. Chillax guys...

Kabir(relaxing)- Thikh hai...

Nisha-(threatening) Par agar koi problem hui naa...

Saurav nodded in positive saying that he understood. They went in living room.

Kabir- Main naa, tum logo ke liye coffee banata hoon...

Kirti- Cool...

Nisha and the others were busy chatting while Kabir was in the kitchen making coffee. First milk, then coffee powder, the sugar and the stir. He memorized the easy coffee recipe and kept the milk to boil. When it was warm, he added coffee to it, but couldn't find the sugar. Finally he noticed the container with the tag "sugar" on the compartment. He added three big spoons and then switched off the gas.

He poured the coffee in the cups, kept the cups on the tray and handed them to his or his "girlfriend's" guests. Aman took a big sip of the coffee as it was warm and looked nice. But as soon as the drink touched her tongue, she spat it out.

All looked at her in astonishment. After all Aman was not the kind of girl who would do such a thing. Aman was coughing very much. Umesh rubbed her back. Nisha gave her a glass of water. Dolly drank the coffee and she too spat it out.

Now everyone except the two girls looked at the coffee cups with doubt.

Sukku- (giving Kabir a cup) Ye le, tune banayi hai, tu pi...

Kabir drank it and spat it out.

Kabir- (in disgust) Nisha, yeh kya hai?

Nisha- (confused) Mujhse kya puch raha hai, tune coffee banayi hai...

Kabir- haan, toh pehle doodh mein coffee powder aur phir shakkar dalo, asie hi banate hai naa coffee?

Nisha-(realizing) Ek second, tune coffee kaunse container mein se daali?

Kabir- Black waale?

Nisha- Aur shakkar?

Kabir- Woh white waala, jispe "sugar" ka tag lagaya hai...

Nisha heard this and burst out laughing. Kabir and others looked at her in confusion.

Nisha- (trying to stop her laughter) Kabir, usmein chini nahi, namak tha...

This time she was joined by other 6 while Kabir stared at them in shock. After they finished laughing.

Kabir-(confused) Par woh container?

Nisha- woh maine by mistake sugar namak ke container mein daal di and I was too bored to change the container, socha tha tag hi exchange kar dungi, usse pehle hi...

She again started laughing...

Kabir- Par tune mujhe batana chahiye tha na?

Umesh- Woh tumhe kyun batayegi? Tum todhi naa yahaan rehta ho...

Sukku- Aur tumhe shakkar aur namak mein bhi difference nahi aata?

Kirti- Kya yaar Sukku, agar usse differentiate karna aata, toh who namak waali coffee todhi naa banata?

Then Nisha prepared a PROPER coffee and they spent their time chatting, gossiping and having fun. Later they went to a restaurant and then the girls went to the mall, while the boys went to Umesh's house to watch a cricket match.

When Kabir entered the house, Dolly was telling Nisha about the latest dress she had bought. Kabir directly went to the kitchen and changed the tags of the containers. Nisha and Dolly saw this and the three were laughing like anything.

Then Dolly went home and Nisha made a light dinner and both went to sleep.

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Galtiyan sabse hoti hai... par mujhe meri woh galtiyon pasand hai jo tumhe hasati hai...

Teri ek hasi ko dekhne ke liye yeh aankhein tarasti hai... aur dil tadapta hai...

Samjhau kaise main tumhe, khush hone ki wajah tum deti ho mujhe...

Meaning- All make mistakes, but my mistakes which make you laugh are most precious to me. My eyes want and my heart yearns to see your smile. I just can't explain to you, how much happiness you give me...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaay first to comment
Awesome update
Loved the shayari and the story also
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
res one more😆😉

UNRES NO:23😆

Chapter 14: 😉

Shibu lovely update yaar👏👏👏👏 U knw I like ur update s4 a spl reason..😉 U knw Y?😆

U always try to incorporate Show's Moments of NiBir in ur story so I feel Like I m watching NAUC😃👏👏👏

Love U yaar 4 making me feel like dis🤗🤗🤗

Maine kaha tha yeh pillow na rakhne ka idea Shibu ki sochi samji sazzish thi taki HUg ko la sake😉
Loved The start of the day👏 reminded me Kabir's b'day on the show.. (Nishu kissed & wished)😊

I loved the Impatient Kabir waiting 4 Nishu's Call😆🤣🤣🤣

U knw Shibu wenevr sumone asks me Wats Up? I say Up is sky & I was shocked rwading the same dialogue frm Kabir😲😆🤣🤣🤣🤣

Loved the orpahange scenes especially Chandu & Rohan So Sweet & Cute. (Again Remined me B'day celebration at terrace with biscuit cake😊)👏👏👏👏

Kabir's loneliness was well explained with the scenary of Beach👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Last But not least B'day Bash , party was Suprb...😆🤣🤣🤣
Loved Kabir's Proposal😆🤣🤣🤣 K Kahika..😆🤣🤣🤣
Propose toh kiya nahi Seedhe Bache ki maa par aa gayi baath So Fast aa😉😆🤣🤣🤣

Run chase, Fall Again Kab Seekhenge chalna??😉 Ya Jaan boochkar gir rahe ho😲🤣
Vo bhi Ek doosare pe.. 😈🤣🤣🤣 chee.. chee.. naughty naughty 🤣🤣🤣

Loved Nishu's Gift Awww (Remined Show again😃) & the Hug & Thank UAww

That night, when Nisha entered the bedroom, she saw Kabir sleeping with an innocent smile on his face. After all, he had found his dad that day and happiness isn't just smiling all the time, it's all about holding the moment close to your heart.-

@Pink My fav Line in this chapter👏👏👏👏


The shyayari is also gud👏👏👏


Chapter 15:😉

Yaar Tussi na bahut hi smart writer ho...👏👏👏👏
Pehle mera congo le lo 4 completing aadha mahina.. 👏👏👏
Yeaahh 15 days completed🥳
ab sirf 15 days more .. den Our NiBir wl be in LOVE😳☺️🤣🤣🤣🤣

War 4 Remote🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 & Phir se gir gayee ek duje par😲☺️🤣🤣

The room's state remind me of Morning after Khooni Suhagraaat🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kabir's Coffee.. i knew It.. I knew It.. Its Salt not sugar..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Mujhe laga tha baatom baatom main pol na khul gayee NiBir ki shukar hai nahi khula🤣🤣

The Shyayari Part was PERFECT 4 Today👏👏👏👏

Do Write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣🤣



Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fortnight was a beautiful journey thanx for such a lovely story
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Posted: 10 years ago
shibu awesome yaar... namak wali coffee... superb but only 2 weeks left...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow soo sweet...bechara kabir... namak ki coffee lol...nibir's fight was also cute...n your shayri was also lovely...tysm for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awoseme update
salt coffee..😆
shayari is very nice..
.continue soon...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update
Loved the shayari and the story also 👏
Do continue soon
thanx for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome epi... 😃 nibir fights for tv 😆 kabir on top of nisha der faces covered wid cotton 😳 Mr. saxena was like 😡 hhehe yeah nibir rocks n saxena shocks 🤣 den delicious salty coffee
😡 bechare aman kabir n kirti... 😭
den kabir changing tag of sugar 😆 bole to jhakkaas dhamakedaar n farraatedaar update...
waiting for next day...update soon

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