Nibir SS : Sab mera tu last part on pg 26 (song's link added) - Page 4

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Part 2

As per kabir's instructions whole family tried to make nisha regain her memory. The cousins gang had decorated her room with photos of her with whole gangwal family. When nisha saw them she felt happy bt still she couldn't remember anything. Then she saw a pic in which Viraj was there with nisha, ramesh nd laxmi so she asked ramesh abt him but he told her tht he is Viraj, her frnd. Nisha wanted to meet him as she felt some connection after hearing this name but ramesh refused to let her meet viraj. (in mind ramesh: How can i let u meet the person whos no more nd how i will face you when u will come to knw the truth? Plz mujhe maaf kar dena beta, me jo bhi kar raha hu tumhare liye kar raha hu...and he left frm there bcoz he can not hold back his tears)

While nisha was seeing her pictures kabir came for her regular checkup. Nisha was so engrossed in seeing pictures tht she didn't notice kabir's arrival. Kabir watched all this nd was smiling thinking hez plan may work, nisha may get some glimpse of her past but he was wrong, nothing happened as per his plan. Nisha saw him nd signalled him to start her regular check up. After check up kabir went to meet ramesh. Nd Ramesh told him abt nisha asking abt viraj. Kabir assured him tht he will make sure tht nothing happens to nisha.

To cheer up nisha kabir made plan with cousins tht they'll go on picnic. And make new memories for nisha. Kabir told them tht they can take nisha with them after her check-up bt they insists kabir to come along with them tht it will b good for Nisha so he agreed. On picnic spot they played badminton, blind fold, antakshari etc. While playing blind fold it was nisha's chance nd she started to catch cousins bt in playful mode dolly pushed her nd she fell on kabir. Even kabir fell on ground due to sudden push. Now nisha was on top of kabir nd kabir could not take his eyes off Nisha, she opens her blind fold nd abt to yell bt stops as soon as she saws kabir staring her. They bth share an eye lock which doesn't go unnoticed by cousins. Soon they come out of trance nd stand straight not looking at each other. Cousins witnessed all this bt chose to remain silent at tht moment. Now it was time for leaving, on all the way kabir's heart was fighting with his mind.

Kabir (to himself) : Dude, wat were u doing? Shez ur patient nothing else. Stop thinking abt her. I think its jst bcoz i see her everyday, i should take rest nd should talk to sanaya. Ohhh god sanaya!!!! She will kill me, i didnt call her today (and he calls sanaya nd nisha watches his conversation. She got jealous seeing kabir talking to anyone else nd dolly noticed this)

After reaching home kabir bid them bye nd went to meet sanaya nd cousins went to nisha's room for their daily chit chat. While talking dolly purposely opens kabir's topic nd notices smile tht appeared on Nisha's face which confirmed Nisha's feelings for kabir. Dolly wanted to make nisha realise her feelings bt how.

On other hand kabir went to meet sanaya who was waiting for him at his home.

Sanaya: Kitna time kabir nd aaj pure dinme tumne mujhe ek call bhi nahi kiya.. Ek case me itna involve ho gaye ki apni best frnd ko hi bhul gaye. Im very disappointed kabir

Kabir: Sry babes, plz maaf karde iss baar next time pakka aisa nahi hoga..i promise (he crossed his fingers nd sanaya noticed this)

Sanaya: U idiot, im waiting for u since long nd ur making fake promises. Go to hell nd dont talk to me nw ( shez abt to leave bt kabir helds her hand nd stops her)

Kabir: Plz yaar mat jaa, mom dad k baad ek tu hi to meri family hai..tu bhi mujhse naraz ho jayegi to me kya karunga? (made puppy face)

Sanaya: Isliye bola tujhe k ek gf banale atleast mera picha to chute tujh jaise duffer se. (she hits his had lightly) mujhe ek baat bata pehle kya chakkar hai is nayi patient ka ki tu mujhe bhul gaya?

Kabir: (fumbles with words) k.k..kuch bhi to nahi, wo sirf meri patient hai nd me koi usse pyaar vyaar nahi karta

Sanaya(giving winning smile): Bt meine to pyaar ka naam liya hi nahi tha (chuckles)

Kabir(cursing himself for wat he said): Wo...wo..wo sab chodna tu bhi kya bekar ki bate lekar beth gayi hum kuch aur bate karte hai na

Bt sanaya didn't leave tht topic nd asked kabir to tell her everything. Kabir told her abt nisha, her past, her present situation, nd how he feels some connection with her. Bt he himself is nt sure whether he has any feelings for her or not nd if he has any then it is right or not. Sanaya understood his feelings nd told him tht hez in love. Kabir denied bt sanaya told him to close his eyes nd see whos face comes (kabir follows her instructions totally in filmy style) nd he sees nisha's face whn she fell on top of him. He was shocked seeing her face nd seeing his state sanaya understood nd told him congratulations kabir, finally u got ur girl. And she told him to confess his feelings bt kabir was nt ready, he wanted to knw nisha's feelings first.

In gangwal house nisha ws feeling restless, she wanted to call kabir bt whenever she goes to dial his number she remembers kabir talking to sanaya nd drops the idea to call him. Nisha: Tujhe to usse hi baat karni hogi na...kar. Me kaun hoti hu tujhe rokne wali

(dolly enters nd sees nisha walking here nd there in room cursing someone nd she knw who he is)

Dolly: Nishu, kisko gali de rahi hai nd kise call kar rahi hai?

Nisha: Di wo kabir, jane k baad ek baar bhi call nahi kiya jan-ne k liye ki mein kaisi hu..k kahin ka

Dolly: But wo tujhe call kyu karega nishu wo to tera check-up karke gaya na ab wo pura din to tere sath nahi reh sakta na, usse aur bhi to kaam honge

Nisha: Kyu nahi reh sakta wo (realising wat she jst said) ha mera matlab ek call to kar hi sakta hai apne patients ko, unka khayal rakhna uski responsibility hai

(ramesh enters bt stops at door listening dolly nd nisha's conversation)

(dolly smiles) dolly: Tujhe nahi lagta tu kuch zyada hi kabir k bare me soch rahi hai ? Kahin tu uske liye kuch feel to nahi karti ? Nd plz nishu juth mat bolna meine teri ankho me jealously dekhi thi jab kabir kisi aur se baat kar raha tha

Nisha:(trying to hide her feelings) nhi di aisa kuch nahi hai, wo to bas aise hi meine kabir ki baat ki aur koi frnd hai nhi na mera. Usme feelings kaha se aa gayi di

Dolly did same trick wid nisha which sanaya played wid kabir. Nisha saw two faces nd she was shocked. First she saw Viraj nd then suddenly kabir's smiling face came in front of her. She told dis to dolly nd dolly got shocked too bt she remained silent. Nisha was asking abt Viraj nd then ramesh entered the room nd tried to change the topic. But nisha was sure she has to find out abt Viraj nd her frndship.


Tbc...
Ty guys for reading and appreciating part1 nd i hope u guys njoy reading part 2 also... 😳

Part 3 - Page 7
Edited by poo10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
awesome update... waiting for part 3.. :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic update👏
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plz PM me if possible😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomely written... do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome update 👏
Love nibir very much 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Poo darling it was a nice part.Really enjoyed reading it.🤗
This is what calls Destiny. Please update soon can't wait to read the 3rd part.
Thanks for the PM love.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Awesome update...loved it...
Post the next part soon...
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
I remembered the Holi scene (when Kabir applies color on Nisha at the party) while reading the ending...😊
Awesome update...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adeenafari

Fantastic update👏

Eagerly waiting for next part
Plz PM me if possible😊


Thnx for reading 😃
Nd surely next time I'll pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx everyone for reading nd I'll try to update as fast as possible 😳 😉 😃

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