Nibir SS : Sab mera tu last part on pg 26 (song's link added) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mishrialways

luving it poo

happy that nisha got to know about her past but sad coz she misunderstood kabir
waiting for the next chapter


Tysm 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mika17

Beautiful update

Thnku for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
read from begining.
sry for late reply.
i like the story track its nice.
u write well.i just have one suggestion.
can u make sure each dialog os ain a sepaprate line and make parahs...it's becoming difficult to read as your chapter size increases.

thank you

up8 soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

read from begining.

sry for late reply.
i like the story track its nice.
u write well.i just have one suggestion.
can u make sure each dialog os ain a sepaprate line and make parahs...it's becoming difficult to read as your chapter size increases.

thank you

up8 soon


Yaa I'll try
Thnx for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: juhirs

Awesome update... :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: juhirs

Part 4 kab aa rha h..


Soon. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: juhirs

Wen is dis soon... :p


After my mom recovers
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Gripping update Pooja👏
So Nishas know abt Viraj now !
Both Nisha and Kabir not confessing their love to each other thinking that the other doesn't love them was sad. U brought about the irony very well in ur story👍🏼
Update it soon😆
We r waiting patiently😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Next morning when nisha woke up she was still feeling that insecurity of being widow. Ramesh came to woke her up but noticed tht she is already awake nd he stopped at the door of her room & stared her to know what's running in her mind. she was staring herself in mirror as if trying to make out what's happening with her. Ramesh had a plan in his mind and he decided to involve dolly & saurav in it, bcoz dolly knew abt nisha's feelings for kabir nd saurav being the best frnd is always a grt support for her.

Ramesh told his plan to dolly & saurav nd they both agreed. As per plan dolly arranged meeting of all the cousins except nisha as they were planning all this for nisha only. they also agreed and they decided each other's role. According to their plan they convinced each family member for party as nisha was slowly slowly recovering nd everyone agreed to it. Ramesh invited kabir and told him to come as he is the one due to whom nisha is recovering so fast. At first he refused to come bt after Ramesh insisted him, he agreed but he was not feeling comfortable to go there so he decided to take sanaya with him.

Sanaya: what will I do there?

Kabir: arey yaar, it's a party and u r asking me what will u do? Seriously sanaya. Even if u don't wanna come, u have to come to give me company. I don't knw anything.

Sanaya: Arey but u r not alone na there. Nisha is with u, party is for her only na.

(Kabir got silenced, watching his state sanaya understood everything.)

Sanaya: Look kabir, u have to tell her abt ur feelings. Then its upto her whether to accept u or not but atleast tell her that u love her. Life mein ek regret to nahi rahega tht u hadn't told her ur feelings.

Kabir: My feelings doesn't matter yaar, what actually matter is what she thinks. Is she ready for falling in love? Is she ready to accept me even after knowing her past? I don't know should I tell her this or not.

Sanaya: did I ever gave u wrong advice?

Kabir: no

Sanaya: then trust me even this time nd u'll thank me for this for ur whole life.

(Kabir didn't said anything but sanaya's words made their place in his mind and he thought of giving one chance to himself, one chance to his feelings.)

At gangwal house everybody was preparing for the party, Nisha was not in a mood to participate but she did few works becoz she thought it would divert her mind but instead she was thinking more of kabir while working. Wherever she was, she found kabir there. In flowerwala, lightman, DJ, in each one she was seeing kabir only. She was not ready to accept bt she had fallen for him. Dolly who was watching nisha understood what she was thinking, but decided to keep quiet.

In the evening, guests started to arrive. Nisha was physically present in the party but mentally she was in some other world, she was waiting for tht special person to come. Her eyes was glued to the entrance. After few minutes tht person arrived, it was none other than kabir. After watching kabir nisha's face lighten up but very next moment she was shocked seeing sanaya with him. Kabir came and met everyone and lastly he came to meet nisha.

Kabir: hello nisha, meet her she's sanaya

Nisha: Ur girlfriend? (Asking very seriously)

Sanaya: U can call me that, I won't mind.*with smirk* (She wanted to make her jealous to knw her feelings)

Kabir: She's actually my best friend cum family. I don't have anyone other than her.

Nisha: Ohhh...hi sanaya, nice to meet u, njoy the party. *in arrogant tone* (She left)

Sanaya: Kabir, teri love story to already set hai, bas bol de use...dekh to kitni jealous ho rahi hai hume sath dekh kar

Kabir: please yaar, use tang mat karo...

Sanaya: oye hoye, possessive and ol haan...koi ni beta dekh lungi me bhi...

TBC...

A/N: Sorry for no nibir scenes today, i promise it will b there next time

Part 5- Page 14
Edited by poo10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys sorry again i tries but formatting is not happening from my cell, im really sorry for causing inconvenience to u all

Sorry again 😭

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