Nibir SS -Your Guardian Angel-chap 2 ,page 13 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

WOW!...mindblowing job yaar anu

i loved the part where Nisha takes the iron rod and beats the guy up
and the touch you gave in her momentarily being unaware of things around her was really good
and i really loved the part where Saurav thrashes him...and i am glad you thought of adding it...
your ss makes me all the more sad that this was not addressed in the show...but very good piece of writing anu...very good indeed👏

i am so glad u liked it..😊😳
thanks yaar lachu😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

unres😆 Finally😆🤣

PILANI incident - A Sensitive topic 👏 4 selecting this &👏 4 presenting it so beautifully dat every emotions transferred directly to readers..👏👏👏

*SPEECHLESS*👏👏👏 Totally Literally I m Speechless Anu😭😭😭

Such an Emotionally Packed Part👏👏👏

I dont knw abt other readers But Wat I felt... was...

I sware Yaar Never Felt such a feeling My hands r not moving.. My Mind is totally blank.. My Heart beats increased, I m still Sweating... Tears Came in my eyes I dint evn realised when???

Aisa Lag raha tha ki Nishu ki saari darr bas mehsoos ho rahi thi... 😭

I may sound silly but I dnt knw yaar wat to say.. Nishu ke saare emotions translate ho gaye mujh mein.. First that fear, then that stubbornness, determination to fight, readiness in her action to punish the culprit.. Wat all was it just transferred... Just transferred...!!!


" I will fight...fight till death,if that be so...but I won't let u touch me...it's better to die than let a beast like you to touch me with your filthy hand"Nisha said,her words spitting fire...

This dialogue was bang on moment👏👏👏

Every girl is Strong yaar & agar vo apne peh aa gayi nah den Nothing can stop them frm getting Justice yaar...!!!!

Ur Words.. Jus From Ur words.. I forsee the incidents b4 my eyes... 👍🏼👏

I m happy dat u r continuing ur SS... N U r back with A BANGGG🤗

Sorry 4 not writing much.. literally i m fumbling with words...🤔

Do continue yaar...!!!!!

u think so highly abt my SS?😲😳
yaar...now i am crying😆
dont flatter me like this😆😆😆
i will be spoilt😆
i am on cloud nine right now😭
thanks yaar😳
if u felt what i was abt to convey through my words,then that is the biggest achievement😳
i am...i am really happy yaar...thanks🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was so much awesome part annu 👏👏👏
U described every emotion and feeling so nicely
I was sjust seeing every thing in front of my eyes
Continue extremely soon
Thanx for PM and updating your ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r really very good with your words... really awesome anu...loved it...tysm for the pm...n plz continue soon this time plz...it's really difficult to wait now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
U've portrayed Nisha's emotions beautifully
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ..its awesome. .
how nicely u wrote yar..👏
Continue soon. ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
yayii...finally u updated...🤣
glad to see that ...
now coming to the update...
it was awesome..
beautifully penned...
each emotions of nisha was described very amazingly...
loved it...
u write very well yaar...
both fun posts n serious posts ...
now I'm just waiting for the next part ...
do continue soon 🤣 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
good girl 😊😆
finally u updated!!😊
coming to the update

from run,her brain said...intensly
it was very beautifully penned anu..
i read it two to three times..felt lik i was seeing it
such an emotional update😭
love u..
ek jhappi nahi do jhappi fr ur beautiful writing ye le🤗🤗
the update was awsm anu👏👏👏

evry emotion of nisha was wonderfull portrayed..
we all are connected to ur ss more than u 😛

hope to update in dolly's love realisation speed...😆

Edited by arshiss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anu you finally updated it...awesome yaar...!!!
Do update the next part soon...!!
Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anagha.

u think so highly abt my SS?😲😳
yaar...now i am crying😆
dont flatter me like this😆😆😆
i will be spoilt😆
i am on cloud nine right now😭
thanks yaar😳
if u felt what i was abt to convey through my words,then that is the biggest achievement😳
i am...i am really happy yaar...thanks🤗



Anu... Dr.. First thing I never Flatter😳 BTW just tell me Why do I flatter???😲
Den Secondly I always write wat I felt in my mind While reading Any Stories... 😊
(Not urs but also others)

U dnt knw Hw This Part of SS affected me yaar.. It's hangover made me those wat I wrote there N Main khud shocked hu q ki its my first experience...😲 U knw after reading ur SS badi mushkil se wrds dhoondke likh paayi hu q ki mere fingers chal hi nahi the kuch likhne ke liye.. isliye toh Shibu ka stry bhi nahi padhi lekhs ki post nahi padhi aur seedha log out karke nikal gayi... phir ab aayi hu IF par ...😲 may be I was waiting 4 this SS 4 long n I was too much into the story so I felt soo..😃

So dnt evr think dat I m flattering U or sumthing...😉 Samjhi.. ya Samjhavu???😆🤣

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