Nibir SS -Your Guardian Angel-chap 2 ,page 13

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Heyya guys!🤗

I am back with another SS on Nibir.Read and enjoy.Pls hit the like button if u like it...and do comment!




Chapter 1

It was a starlit sky.The road was deserted...there was not a trace of human life to be seen.The atmosphere was calm and serene...there was not a single sound except for the faint rustling of the leaves in the cold breeze.And that is where the beauty of this path lay...it was amazingly different from the rest of the city...no vehicles blowing their horns...no human machines...no commotion and din...It was all so peaceful and heavenly. Nisha and Kabir walked through this path every night,hand in hand,not uttering a single word, immersing themselves in the picturesque beauty of nature...the warmth of their hand against each other as the only remainder of the human presence beside each one of them.


But all days cannot be the same...Some days are destined to be different ...like this one...Nisha sighed as she recollected the day's events...She regretted fighting with him ;and that too for the silliest reason of all.She knew that he might be pretty upset with her because it was more or less her fault and she scolded him for no reason of his.It was all her fault...But then it was these cute little fights kept their relation lively.


The cold breeze blew once again and the light weighing gossamer fabric of her knee-length top clung to her skin.She wrapped her arms around her shoulders to protect herself from the nights' cold breeze.Nisha felt lonely.Walking through the darkness,all she could think about was Kabir.His intense eyes,his cute smile,his continuous blabbering,his protective attitude...everything made her feel special.Whenever he looked at her ,she felt as if her knees were going numb...whenever he talked to her, she just wished that he could go on like that ,his one smile could take away all her pain...his one touch could make her feel that she was the luckiest on earth,his very presence was a reason of unbounded joy for her. She wished that he was there with her,holding her hand,walking through the darkness,his smile lighting up his face and making its way to his eyes,making his eyes gleam.

Nisha started humming a tune ...the tune of the song that Kabir used to sing for her.Songs...beauty conscious,etc...?girlish stuff?she just couldn't understand the changes in her behaviour...All she knew was that he was responsible for these changes ...he was solely responsible.Why else did she become beauty conscious in the recent past?...because she always wanted him to think that she was beautiful,because she wanted to prove herself worthy of him...After that horrendous incident that took her childhood by a storm,she became tom-boyish.Because somewhere in her mind,the society's voice kept ringing...that somehow girls are responsible for all evils against them...she didn't know how...they always said that being a girl ,the weaker sex,she should always take care of herself,carry herself elegantly,but should never fall prey to anyone...She was just thirteen then and was not worldly wise,so all these things confused her... her innocent mind concluded that all these happens to her just because she is a girl..."Being a girl?Girls are weaker?why so?What if I was a boy? Would I be safe then?Why only girls?Does that mean that girls should not enjoy?Why should I associate myself with a weaker group?I am not weak!...not at all!...I don't want to become weak!...maybe being weak meant being a "girl"...yes...being a girl...that was the root cause of all problems and so I don't want to become one...I cant change my body but I sure can change my attitude ..."she concluded. She hence donned a boyish attire ,put on a rough exterior and tried her level best to stay away from everything described by the society as girlish'.


But Kabir...Kabir changed her.He was someone special...very special indeed.He accepted her as she is-with flaws and faults.He never disliked her tomboyish attire-in fact he always supported her .He always told her to do what she thinks is the best...He never forced anything on her...that was what made him unique.He always let her do what she wanted...in her own way.But he was always there to guide her and protect her from all thorns of life.Slowly,but surely,he was making an impact on her...he successfully woke up the woman sleeping inside her.


Nisha snapped back to reality.It was more than fifteen minutes since she started walking .Kabir should have come by this time.She turned back and looked at the direction of her house.It was now a distant view."Why is he still not here?Is he still angry with me?He should have come by now...Or maybe he won't come...maybe I am expecting too much from him?What if he thought that I needed some time alone?Should I stop this lonely walk and return home?"Several questions were running in her mind .But her faith for Kabir overpowered all her doubts."He will come...for me.He wont disappoint me."Nisha smiled and walked through the dimly lit street .


Little did she know that she was walking into the worst nightmare that will change her life...forever!

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I have been Shelving this SS for a long time since I didn't knw whether I cud complete it or not...but I cudn't resist myslf from posting this!😆

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Anu.

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Chapter 1-pg 1(above)
Chapter 2-pg 13


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Edited by Anagha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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bestie it was super awesm😊
kabir woke up the woman inside nisha i loved that line
nisha's pov was beautifully portrayed..
waiting fr t nxt part


ps:i am happy that finally u wrote😊
Edited by arshiss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anu complete this ss!
It.was.such a good one!
Are some thieves going to come there?
Pls.don't keep us in suspense 👏
Edited by Terra04 - 10 years ago
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Wow jaan.. I loved it
Continue soon please and mujhe PM karna mat bhulna😃
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Anu...excellent start..!!!
Please complete this os...
You had made us to wait for your os
Loved a lot.. waiting for ur next part..!!!! 😛
Edited by zaara610 - 10 years ago
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THAT WAS SUPERB... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb Anu👏 What a start !👏
Loved ur description of Nibir's relationship😳
U hv been able to penn down Nisha's thoughts so well👍🏼
Really eager to knows what happens next !
I m just hoping that this SS does not turn out to be a tragedy in d end cz I knw u like tragedies
Its different but really nice😊
Continue soon🤗😃😆😳😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one.. Thanks for writing it in English..Last line is scary one.. Eagerly waiting for next part.
Little did she know that she was walking into the worst nightmare that will change her life...forever!
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loved it...totally...mind blowing...super awesome start...do update soon dude...👏

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