Nibir TS I love you (last part pg-3)

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hey gyz i am new here a sure no one would know me so let me introduce my self my name is vidhi and i am in 10th standard well i have tried my hand at writing fan fictions and os on kriyaansh my first love and have achieved a lot of love from that!!
this for the first time when i have written smth on nibir i hope you gyzzz would like it!

❤️I love you❤️

Nisha completed making all the food at gangwal's house with
the help of lakshmi and her aman bhabi spoiling all her clothes and face as she
didn't allowed to do any work except a bit done by lakshmi and aman after a lot
of insisting by them to do much work because this was her test and she just wanted
to impress her mother in law anyhow.


Dolly(dreamily)-yummy!!nishu khane me se toh bahut
achi khushbu aa rahi hai </font>


Nisha- abhi khane ko maro goli dolly dii ye dekho meri halat, shakal
dikh rahi hai meri Bandar lag rahi hoon mai Bandar poore face pe aata laga hai


Suketu enters the kitchen eating an apple and giggling


Sukku- han bilkul waisi hi lag rahi hai jaisa kal parso Kabir lag
raha tha!!


Nisha was blushing inside but just to avoid this feeling she
show cased her fake anger on Sukku and asked dolly di to come and dress up her
before Kabir and his mom arrives at the home


After an hour...


A car stooped out of gangwal mansion and Kabir and vasu
stepped out of the car


Vasu was taken aback of wat she saw they all were at the gate


But her shock increased to an extent when Kabir called Ramesh as
papa


All the gangwal sons especially Ramesh and vasu were shocked
to see eachother


Vasu(in mind)- Nisha tumhare beti hai?😲


Ramesh(in mind) - Kabir tumhare beta hai?😲


Dadi- are aap bahar kya khadi hai andar aaiye naa vasundra jii


Vasundra(in mind)- nahin vasu tu chahe gangwalas ko kitni bhi
nafrat kyu na karti ho bas ek baat yaad rakh ki wo tera past tha and ye kabir ka
present or future dono hai jo bhi hojaye tu kabir aur Nisha ke rishta pe iska
assar nahin aane degi


Lakshmi- are aaiye naa


Vasu came out of her thoughts and headed inside with Kabir Ramesh
by watching her face of as if nothing has happened even relaxed and behaved the
same as he understood that she didn't wanted her son to be affected of her past
they all sat in the drawing room while Kabir left from there making an silly
excuse but all he wanted to see was his Nisha in the sari!!


Kabir went up and knocked nisha's room


Dolly- ohooo kaun hai u needs to waits😆


Kabir smilled and then waited for next five mins outside the
door and then was about to knock the door again when it got open and he saw
dolly, aman and jwalu covering the gate


Kabir(trying to peep inside)- ammm Nisha😛


Jwalu- ohoo Kabir jiju u need to wait


Kabir- aur kitna wait karwaoge😭


Aman- kyu itne besabar hoo


Dolly- besabar toh hoga hi naa yeh!!


Kabir looks at them with pleading expression


And then the three girls get side and let him get the view of
beautifully dressed Nisha blushing all way and passing her million dollar smile
to him!!


The girls went out of the room and pushed Kabir inside the
room that he went much close to Nisha ☺️and
then they left nibir alone


Kabir went more close to her while she departed back she was
about to fall when he just pulled her from her bare waist clutching it tightly
and making her bump in his chest Nisha was shocked of his action "kabi.."
before she could continue her mouth was
closed by kabir's finger


Kabir- tu janti bhi hai how beautiful you are looking?


Nisha noods a no from her head


Kabir smiles at her innocence and cressed her cheek with his
finger which was on her lips Nisha closed her eyes in order to feel his touch
the time he did this a smile crept up on her face


Kabi- Nisha bahut time se mai tujhe ye baat bolna chahata tha
par har bar koi na koi beech mein aajata tha par aaj mai ye bolna chahata hoon


Nisha (still feeling his touch by closing her eyes)- hmmm


Kabir- Nisha mai ye kehna chahat tha ki😳


Dolly- nish...😲😲


Dolly comes in and was delighted by the sight in the room and
stopped at the door smilling while Kabir all frustrated leaves nisha and goes
out blabbering curses on his luck


Nisha(frustrated)- kya dolly dii aap bhi😡


Dolly(teasing)-ohh toh matlab someone was feeling special😆


Nisha(blushing)- shut up dolly diii!!☺️


Dolly chuckles and tells her that everyone is waiting down for
her...


So gyzzz how was it? i hope you like it!!😊critical comments are most welcome😆😆

do review bcoz your each and every cmnt matters me alot!!😃

for the PM buddy me!!




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Great job .Plz do continue. eagerly waiting.
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Loved it.. please continue soon
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It was really cute ..continue soon. ..
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very nice...👏plz do continue.. and plz PM me if u can love okay😉
ummmah🤗
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yahan bi interrupt ho gaya!😆😆
Nice...😊
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Hey great start to ur ts
Can't wait to see how kabir confesses his love to nisha
Plz could you pm me wn u update
Thnku
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Good start👍🏼... update soon😊
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welcome 2 the forum dear🤗
nice starting ystarting dude
beautifuly written
kab confess karega kabiraa evy1 is on mission disturb Nibir confession😭🤣
patha nahi aur kitne Confess miss hoga show main anyway waitng 4 ur nxt update
update soon
do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

welcome 2 the forum dear🤗
nice starting ystarting dude
beautifuly written
kab confess karega kabiraa evy1 is on mission disturb Nibir confession😭🤣
patha nahi aur kitne Confess miss hoga show main anyway waitng 4 ur nxt update
update soon
do pm me


🤣 it is bcoz kabir ka frustration wala face dekh ke maze aate hai!!🤣🤣
n yaaa will update it soon!!!😃

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