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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: do0dleR

yahan bi interrupt ho gaya!😆😆

Nice...😊


thanku!!! 🤣😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey beautiful start to ur ts
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thanku sooo much everyone!!! 😃😃😃
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I love You
Last Part

Nisha reaches down with dolly dii and saw Kabir standing their her eyes were on him and only him either she went and met everyone but she continuously looked at him by the corner of her eyes getting a stroll of the moment she just spent with him in her room and the way dolly di disturbed her!! But her sudden thoughts were disturbed when she bumped in lakshmi

She closed her eyes to witness the hard ground but instead what she witnessed her to smile and blush to the core she was resting in the pair of two muscular hands she slowly opened her eyes and found him smiling at her she could not even help herself but just got lost in those hazel brown eyes of Kabir, giving him her million dollar smile for which he can do anything just anything!!

Every family member was smiling wide watching how badly Kabir care for Nisha and also how great and sweet their secret love is!!

No one was in the mood to interrupt them at all but there was one who could just not control herself!!

Lakshmi(extremely worried)- nishu beta tu thik toh hai naa kahin lagi toh nahin tujhe?

Everyone including Kabir (not nisha) made frustrated face. Nisha and kabir staraightens themselves and lakshmi understood what she did

Lakshmi(sorry face and hyperly)- ohh mujhe maaf karna nisha tu mujhse takra ke phirse gir jaa beta!!

Nisha- maa!!😲😲😕

kabir-☺️☺️

everyone-🤣🤣🤣

lakshmi- 🤢🤢🤢

dadi(laughing😆)- lakshmi ye tu ke bol rahi hai

lakshmi- maaa wooo... chaliye sab kahana thanda ho raha hai ham dinner mera matlab lunch kar lete hai

vasu😆😆 - ji chaliye

everyone goes to the dinning table and assembles there nisha and other girls first served everyone and then sat along with them

kabir saw that there was nthn in nisha's plate and she was busy on thinking smthn

kabir- nisha tu kuch kha kyu nahin rahi hai

nisha- mmm abhi man nahin hai

kabir- toh ye man kab karega

nisha(frustrated)- kabhi nahin

kabir(worried)- nisha tujhe hua kya hai

nisha- kabir tu plzzz khana kha 😡 mera man nahi hai 😡

nisha leaves from there in anger and goes to her room, kabir was about to go to her room when ramesh and dadi told him not to go now and give her some time...

nisha was sitting on her bed crying!!😭😭😭

nisha- kyu kabir kyu tu meri itni chinta kar raha hai mai tere bina nahin reh paungi aadat ho chuki hai mujhe tere sath ki!!😭

nisha- ek baar ko mai apne aap ko sabhal bhi loongi leking teri mom aur meri family ka kya!❓

kabir came in her room as they were about to go home now n he came to call her

kabir- nisha tu roo kyu rahi hai😕😲

nisha- kabir tu chala jayega naaa😒 bol kabir

kabir-...

nisha came to him and grabbed his colars

nisha(😭)- bol kabir bol

kabir- nisha tu pehle rona band kar aur meri baat sun

nisha was not ready to listen him

nisha😳😳- mai bhi kaisa sawaal pooch rahi hoon (she turns to other side o hide the pain) obviously tu chala jayega kyuki hamar saath sirf teen mahine tak ka tha

kabir was pinched by her words

kabir- nisha tu ek baar meri baat toh

but noo kabir was cut by nisha

nisha- hame abhi jaake vasu maa ko sab kuch batana hoga

kabir- nahin nisha maine tujhe bola naa tu ek baar sun toh sahi

nisha goes out of the room and run downstairs

vasu watches nisha and comes to hug her and take her wih her as her official bahu but nisha stops her

nisha- bas maa is se pehle aap aur kuch samjhe mai aapko ek sabse bada sach batane jaa rahi hoon

vasu- haan bolo na beta😊

nisha- maa wo meri aur kabir ki shadi sirf teen mahine ki shadi ai aur ye 1 hafte mein khatam ho jayegi!!

vasu- nisha ye tum kya bol rahi hoo


shocked and worried kabir comes downstairs to find that nisha has already told this to vasu

nisha started crying

vasu- bolo nisha kya ye sach hai

kabir(shouts)- nahin ye sach nahin hai

crying and heart broken nisha comes there in middle of the place and pleads to kabir crying and joining hands

nisha sits on ground

nisha- plzzz kabir plzzz😭😭 abb aur jhoot na mai bol sakti hoon aur na hi sun sakti hoon😭😭

kabir comes and holds her by shoulder and makes her stand

kabir- nisha bas ek baat sun le meri aur plzzz tu roo mat😭

nisha- nahin kabir plzzz 😭 mat karo meri itni care 😭😭 aadat ho gayi hai mujhe iski plzz kabir door ho jao mujhse warna mai badme apne aap ko sambhal nahin paungi😭😭

nisha saying this leaves herself from his grip and turns to leave from their but kabir holds her hand

kabir- bas nisha bas abb tujhe meri baat sun ni hogi

within the second she turns he goes on his knees and closes his eyes

kabir- nisha tujhe kya lagta hai sirf tujhe hi meri aadat hui hai nahin nisha mujhe bhi teri aaddat ho chuki hai 😭 jaise tu roo rahi hia mera dil bhi ro raha hai!! nat ro nisha tera har aason mjhe bhi rulata hai mat ro nisha

nisha was all shocked of what he is saying by the time sab log sajh jate hai ki he is gonna cnfess it to her

nisha stops crying

kabir- jaanta hoon ki tune rona band kar diya hoga par nisha aakhein khol kar dekhne ki himmat nahin hai mujhme

nisha smiles on his this line

kabir- nisha bas ek baat hai jo mai tujhe kehna chahta hoon

nisha- bolo

kabir closes his eyes more tightly and holds her hand with both of his hands and starts speaking as fast as he could

kabir(fastly) - tu sahi kehti hai nisha mujhse bada pagal, gawar, bandar aur kamina iss duniya mein koi bhi nahin hoga, mujh jaisa duffer agar tu dhoondne jayegi toh bhi tujhe nahin milega bcoz jitni der mai ye bolne mein laga raha hoon utni shayad koi bhi naa lagaye nisha u r just like a sunshine, my sunshine nisha agar tu nahin hoti naa toh shayd mai aaj bhi paagal ka paagal hi rehta nisha, mai janta hoon ki meri aaj tak bahut girlfriends reh vhuki hai but u know nisha maine pyaar sirf tujhse kiya hai ❤️

nisha smilled more n more and started giggling by now

kabir(fastly)- maine apni abb tak ki life mein kabhi koi teri jaisi ladki nahin delhi tu sabse special hai isliye tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai aur haan abb is life mein kisi aur se pyaar kar bhi nahin paunga mai!! kyunki mera pyaar tumse, mera dance ka sapna tumse, meri har baat tumse hai nisha aur jis life mein tum na ho mujhe wo life nahin chahiye plzz aaj ke badd mujhe chodne ki baat mat kariyo plzzz nisha aaj mai ye bolta hoon nisha that i love you!!

he took a deep breathe and slowly opened his eyes and saw a beautifuly giigling and crying nisha there her and his eyes were full of tears the happiness ones

kabir- will you marry me nisha? aur is bar permanent wali!!

nisha😭- tu kahada ho pehle

kabir stands up

kabir- jawab

nisha started kicking hima dn giving him slaps while he ran and she followed him and with everyslap and kick she muttere gadhe!!, idiyot, duffer!!, stupud!! and more...

finally they stopped kabir's face was expressionless as he was not able to understand that what happened to her while nisha was crying and laughing harder both at same time

nisha😭- tune soch bhi kese liya ki mai tujh jaise suffer se...door reh sakti hoon

nisha just hugged him badly and he too hugged her

nisha- i love you kabir!! ❤️

kabir- i love you too nisha❤️

they both seprated and kabir cuppend her face wiping up her tears

kabir- abb bas han ye rona dhona bad kar!! 😭😆

nisha-😆😆tu bhi!!

they both hugged each other even more tightly!!

after few days...

kabir came with nisha in his room carrying her in his arms

kabir- nisha tu bahut bhari hogayi ahi

nisha- ye mera nahin is lehenge ka wazan hai

kabir placed her down...

kabir- toh utar de!!

nisha- hmm abhi aati hoon

nisha was about to go when was stopped as she sended her choli's dori got opened and as she looks back she founds that it was kabir who opened it and then she goes and hugs him!!

kabir- chale wifey

nisha(still hugging)- kahan?

kabir-bed par😉😉

nisha- kabir!!🤣

kabir carried her bridal style ad made her lie on the bed going above her showering all his love on her ❤️❤️❤️

The End


sooo how was it!!!! do telll me!!😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Aww dat was a beautiful ending
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
It was really cute ..and the best was that lakshmi s line to nisha ...🤣 Very nice emotional and romantic ending..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww... such a beautiful ending to a awesome story😳... loved it❤️... Do write more stories😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinelove

It was really cute ..and the best was that lakshmi s line to nisha ...🤣Very nice emotional and romantic ending..👍🏼



Thanku 😊 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awww... such a beautiful ending to a awesome story😳... loved it❤️... Do write more stories😊


Yaa sure will try to write more 😛 and thanku 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
beautiful ending
loved it
do write more

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