nibir ss imperfectly perfect epilogue on page 147 - Page 58

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

read the last 3 parts in one go..

i musrt say u have a beautiful concept

and this story is really amazing

i am loving the developing bond between Kabir and Viraj and the existing bond between Kabir and ashish...and nibir are really sweet

wonderful job mansi

😳 thank you so much

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So here it is😆My comment on the numerous updates u hv given😆</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Chapter 18- A Delightful read 😳Nibir nok-jhok was very amusing and hilarious as always😆🤣</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kabir-Umesh conversation was good👍🏼</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">" waise kabir... tmhara koi handsome sa bhai vai nhi h kya..." kirti said winking. Kabir smiled and said " hai na... mjhse bhi jyada handsome and dashing." "Achha ji.." kirti said. " are ha.. itna handsome h ki u can't keep ur eyes off him." Kabir said. " Huh... itni bhi tarif ki jarurat nhi h... aaj tak esa koi nhi mila jo mujhse nazre hata sake.." she said with an attitude. " Dekhte hai" he said.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">They headed inside while kabir whispered in kirti's ears- "kyu hai na handsome...". " Hmmm..." replied a smiling kirti. " Ahaaa" kabir smirked. Then only she realised what does she said " matlab... itta bhi koi khaas nhi h" she said looking away. " ha ha vo to shakal hi bta rhi h" kabir said.- Loved this part</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The entire Kirti-Kabir scene was very nice😆Love the equation they share😳</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Lagta hai Kirti ko Mr Right mil gaya😆😆</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#990066">" ohho to yhi hai meri sautan... kyu patidev ji" ashish mimicked girls voice.- </font><font color="#333333">This was hilarious🤣</font></font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj thinking how he had opened up to Kabir so easily was adorable😳</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj thinking about Kaira- so bade bhaiya bhi apne pyaar ke khayaalon mein khoye hain😆</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Also the determination and the confidence Nisha has in Kabir is so cute😳She can face the world for him😳</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kabir asking Ashish to find out Kaira was adorable😳Thisjust shows how much he cares for everyone. He is a gem of a person yaar😳</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">How can we not fall for a character like him</font>

still two chapters left for ur comment. ... I luv ur comments 😆 😉

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 19- Wonderful update👏</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Couldnt stop grinningthroughoutthe entire chapter😆😃</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved how the cousins acted out the role of Gangwal family members and intoduced Kabir to the Gangwal family😆</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The girls dressing up as the men and th guys dressing up as the women was hilarious😆🤣</font>

Tbc 😉

😳

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice update mansi

Sorry for this short sa comment

m in a hurry

koi baat nhi... agli baar I want ur big wala comment 😆

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆

unres soon

amazing update mansi but nibir separated 😭

Originally posted by: mishrialways

amazing update mansi but nibir separated😭

hope they unite soon

even luved the other two luv stories on kriti ashish and viraj kaira😳

plz update soon

thanks for the pm

ritika

happy ending for everyone is what I believe... thank you for liking it

omg u also a writer? mansion?? 😃
I didn't knew this??!!
anyways...
let me do one thing for u first...
👏 👏 👏
u deserve claps for ur writing... 👏
awesome... awesome... awesome... ❤️
loved the story...
soon unique...
continue soon...
pm me yaad se wen u update... 😉

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

omg u also a writer? mansion?? 😃
I didn't knew this??!!
anyways...
let me do one thing for u first...
👏 👏 👏
u deserve claps for ur writing... 👏
awesome... awesome... awesome... ❤️
loved the story...
soon unique...
continue soon...
pm me yaad se wen u update... 😉

kya karu... nibir ne mjhe writer bna dia... thanks for liking yaar

same here 😉
nibir ne muje b writer bna diya!! 😲
warna me to itni lazy hu ke kya batau!!! 🤣 🤣