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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

same here 😉
nibir ne muje b writer bna diya!! 😲
warna me to itni lazy hu ke kya batau!!! 🤣 🤣

mai bhi... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

unres😆

9th post Unres ng after my come back😆🤣
Sorry Mansi 4 Late comments..😳😆

Tu toh Fatafat express nikali..👏👏👏 Gud update ... an emotional one too😭 NiBir separated nah... Hope they wl meet soon..

Kirti-Ashish 😳 hehehe aakhiri bol dia ILU..👏 (Nishu is intelligent aa😉😆🤣)

Viraj & Kaira too mil gayee bass jaldi..😃

NiBir Terrace scene.. Aww...😳 Loved this portion..👏👏👏 Well Written Mansi👍🏼

" Go kabir... work comes first... I don't want to be an obstacle instead
I want to be ur strength..." she said trying hard to steady her voice
which was going haywire due to emotions. He was astonished at her. She
never fails in surprising him. " Never you say that again... u have been
my strength and always be... got that" kabir said. Nisha nodded. "
don't try to cover your tears nisha... u don't have to do it... just let
your tears fall baby... I know what u r feeling..." kabir said patting
her back. His words break all her unsuccessful tries to cover her
sadness with a smile. She did what he said. She let her tears fall
silently still clutching onto him. He too had tears in his eyes. He
couldn't believe how would he is going to live without seeing her face.
She looked at his face and wiped his tears and nodded in a no. " m ok"
she said "don't feel bad that u made me cry... because u only gave me
world's most precious feeling..." kabir looked at her. " M gonna wait
for u kabir... because I know u will come back to me" she said kissing
his forehead. He engulfed her touch in himself.


Last Part.. NiBir KISS☺️☺️☺️ Nishu...😲 OMG u did..😆🤣 (K panti is Contagious nahh😆)
Thanss 4 the Pm yaar😳

Do write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

k panti is highly contagious... because m too a victim yaar... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 19- Wonderful update👏</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">See I fall short of adjectives to describe ur update so I keep alternating between the few adjectives I know😆
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Couldn't stop grinning throughout the entire chapter😆😃</font>
<font size="2">Viraj and nisha were waiting for kabir from past half and hour. " Sorry sorry bade bhaiya... thoda sa late ho gya" he sid running towards them. Viraj smiled hearing bade bhaiya from him. " Its ok kabir"</font> - <font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Love the Rajbir bond❤️</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#333333">Viraj asking Kabir to be his friend😳
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<font size="2">But kabir just hugged viraj out of happiness. " Bade bhaiya u r great" he said. Viraj just smiled and hugged him </font>- <font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Mansi</font>e<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">veryday u give me one more reason to respect Kabir🤗</font>

<font size="2">" He bhagwan ab kyu ro rhi h " kabir said. " Ese hi" she said. " Oho drama queen... rona band karo nhi to ye bda sa ghar doob jaega" he said wiping her tears. She smiled and ruffled his hair. " stop being so cute kabir" she said. " Stop being so loving nisha" kabir replied. He embraced her again. " Ahmmm ahmmm" came the voices from behind.</font>- <font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nibir are so lovable❤️They are beyond adorable😳🤗
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<font color="#333333"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nibir and Ashkir (I invented a name for Ashish and Kirti😆) are so cute😳</font></font>
<font color="#333333"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Kabir-Kirti scene was very nice😆Kirti J like Nisha and not admitting she likes Ashish😆</font></font>

<font size="2">" Achha kabir I will leave now" ashish said. " Why.." shouted kirti. Everyone looked at her with what happened look while kabir found it really hard to suppress his smile. " mera matlab hai ki abhi to hm bhot imp baat karne wale the" said kirti with a cheeky smile. " sorry kirti had to go have an urgent work... but don't worry I will be back soon" ashish winked at her. While everyone was in "what is going on" mode, kirti was shocked and blushed heavily. Kabir couldn't control his laughter and started laughing seeing the scene. Ashish rushed out of the room and kirti excused herself. Everyone was looking at kabir who was still laughing like a maniac. "</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#333333">Thisentirescene was hilarious to say the least</font></font>🤣🤣Loved it😆
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The chotu sa romantic eyelock between Nibir was cute😳</font>

<font size="2">Kabir realised their position and stood up. Nisha too stood up and felt embarrassed. " Ha bta na kabir kya chal rha h yha" dolly asked. " Vo actually... ms world ko mr. World mil gya h" he said winking. " matlab" umesh said. " Are kirti likes ashish yaar... dhakkan ho tm sab" said kabir hitting his own head. "What? " nisha beamed happily. " Yes" kabir said. " And ashish.?" Nisha asked. " Looks like he too like her... but m nt sure?" He said. "Leave it to me then" nisha said. Kabir nodded.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Both Nisha and Kabir are expert in getting people to open up their hearts😆. The perfect match for each other and perfect match-makers😳😆</font>

<font size="2">" Uff... what a diversity yaar... ghar hai ki museum" kabir chuckled while nisha glared.</font>😆🤣

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved how the cousins acted out the role of Gangwal family members and introduced Kabir to the Gangwal family😆</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The girls dressing up as the men and the guys dressing up as the women was hilarious😆🤣</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">In short😆this chapter was perfect for me😳</font>

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thank u for ur super duper comments... a big hug
Posted: 10 years ago
update kab karegi???
m waitinggg...
and mjhe zyada wait karna pasand ni h!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

update kab karegi???
m waitinggg...
and mjhe zyada wait karna pasand ni h!!

update is on the way
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter - 22

Nisha was in her room. It had been two weeks since kabir left. He used to call her and they talk about whole night. Viraj is going to Rome tomorrow morning to meet kiara as he has promised kabir. Kabir too is leaving for london today itself for two months. She didn't know how she will survive these two months without him. He had an important project in his hand and nisha didn't want to be a distraction for him so she had decided that they won't talk till he came back to India. Kabir has protested a zillion times but nisha was affirmative about her decision. He had to agree to her. " Nisha yaar ye kya bachpana h... abhi bhi soch le..." kabir called her. " Offo kabir...ek baar m baat samaj nhi aati h kya...dhakkan " nisha said. " Tujhse kuch bhi kehna ka koi fayda nhi h... apni k aage to kisi ki nhi sunegi" he sighed. " Achha vo chhod dekh tu apna khayal rkhna thik h... ashish bhi nhi h tere sath warna mjhe itni fikar nhi hoti" she said. " Hmmm ur tu bhi... dekh tu akeli h...bade bhaiya bhi nhi h... maine tjhse bola tha na ki kisi cousin ko bula le...par tu meri ek baat nhi manti na" kabir frowned. " Kabire thik hu mai... samjha ur baki lgo ko bhi kaam h yaar sab mere sath hmesha nhi rh sakte na" she said. " Mai hmesha tere sath hu nisha... tu mjhe dekh nhi sakti to kya hua... mai hmesha tjhe apna ehsaas dilata rhunga..." he said. She smiled and he can feel it. " Achha muskurana band kar ur ye bta kuch khaya ya ese hi mjhse baatein karne m lgi h" he asked. " kha lungi kabir... tu jab baith jaega na plane m tb" she said. " Tab kyu. ." kabir asked. " Tere jaane ki khushi m jyada khaungi aaj" she grinned. " Achha ji... itni khushi...nautanki khi ki... chup chap khana kha samjhi... pta h mjhe... abhi tere aansu bahane ka session shuru hoga jo kal subah tk to rukne wala hai nhi" he said smiling. Nisha facepalmed herself as she knew she can't hid anything from him. " Thik h kha lungi pakka" she said smiling at his concern. " Kitni der h jaane m" she asked. " Last boarding call is for mr. Kabir kumar" she hear. " Kabir... tu gya nhi... last call h ye.." nisha squealed. " Are meri maa.. chilla kyu rhi h ja rha hu" he said "achha rakh phone nishu...apna khayal rkhna samjhi" he was about to cut when nisha said "ruk kabir... "
" bol nisha.." he asked. " I love you kabir... m always with you... n m waiting for you to come... tu janta h na tere bina mera kya hoga... jaldi aana pls" Nisha said with a trembling voice. "Nisha... I know... I luv u jaan... I will be back soon " kabir said. " Bye..." nisha said. " Bye" kabir replied wiping that lone tear. She hunged up the call and clutched his photograph close to her heart. She lay down in her bed still holding his photo and crying "jaldi waapas aana kabir" she said.

Viraj was leaving for airport. " nisha kha h aap" he said. She didn't answer. "She must be sleeping... I will go and check" he reached her room. He found her sleeping clutching on something that look like a photo. He smiled seeing her, he can clearly see dried tear marks. He shook his head. He wake her up. " Nisha... uthiye... nisha..." he shook her. She woke up with a start. "Oh.. viraj aapke to jaane ka time ho rha hoga na... mai bhi soti hi rh gyi... aap late to nhi ho gye na" she panicked. " Nhi nisha abhi time hai... ur aap itna ghabraiye mat... aap hme ye btaie ki aap poori raat ro rhi thi hai na" viraj asked. She looked away. " Nisha... kabir jaldi waapas aaenge... aap apna khayal nhi rkhengi...ese hi roengi to kya kabir jaldi aa jaenge... nhi na" viraj tried to make her understand. " I know... but" nisha said. " Dekhie ab aap hme promise kijie ki aap bilkul nhi roengi... chalie hme see off karne nhi chalengi" viraj said. Nisha nodded.

Viraj was in plane. He was thinking about kiara. " Kyu kia kiara aapne esa... ek baar hme bta k to dekhti... hm sab kuch chhod k aapke pass aa jate" he thought. " Koi baat nhi kiara.. hm apne saare sawalo ka jawab aapse lke rhenge" he was determined.

It has been two days since viraj has left. Nisha was all sad and gloomy. She was missing kabir like hell. " Offo kabire... kitna yaad aata h yaar tu" she said.
She was hell bored now, so she thought to call her cousins. She was right in her decision, her boredom flew away with them. They kept talking for a long time. They teased kirti and nisha, played games and remember their good old days.

Viraj has found out kaira. He decided to go her home this morning. He was standing in front of her apartment. He was feeling nervous. " Come on viraj... lets go" he told himself. He rang the bell, a beautiful lady in his mid twenties opened the door. " can I meet ms kiara singhania... m her old friend. " He said with a smile. " Sure... this way" the lady led him to kiara's room. He entered her room to see it well furnished. He took a look at the room when a voice came from behind " may I help u". Viraj turned to see kiara who was sitting on a wheelchair wearing a cute long dress. She froze when she saw viraj's face. Tears formed in her eyes threatening to come out. " Viraaj.." she whispered. Viraj was shattered to see her like this. He had saw her pic but seeing her like this in front of his eyes was unbearable for him. She closed her eyes firmly. " aap yha kaise" she asked. " Kuch sawalo ka jawab aapse lne aae h " he said. " chale jaeye yha se viraj... yha koi aapke sawal ka jawab nhi dega" she said turning away wiping her tears. Viraj was angry at her now. He stromed towards her turning her to himself. " kyu kiara kyu kar rhi h aap esa... kya kia h hmne jo aap hme esi saza de rhi h" he said looking at her. " Hmne kabhi aapse kuch nhi chhipaya kiara... hm aapse pyaar karte the... par kyu kyu chhod dia aapne hme... hmne aapko kha kha nhi dhunda kiara..par aap khi nhi mili... ur aaj jab mili h to is haalat m... ab aap hme sab kuch sach btaengi kiara... varna aap janti h ki hm kya kar sakte h" he said his eyes red tears falling from them. She couldn't control herself and hugged him. She wanted to made sure that he was here with her. All her pain and agony which was buried deep inside was brought up. He hugged her and let her cry... he knew something very big is waiting for him. Slowly her cry stopped and changed to sobs. " Kiara please... pls hme kuch to btae... aapko pta b nhi h hmne aapko kitna miss kia kiara..." viraj said patting her back. She steadied herself soon and said " itna miss kia ki shadi hi kar li viraj" she said. " ur kisne kha hmne aapko kuch nhi btaya..."

He can see accusation in her eyes. A hurt... hurt of being deserted was clearly visible in her expression. Viraj was confused. " What are u talking about kiara... u didn't contacted me since 2 years" he said. " Oh mr. Viraj singh rathore don't be so innocent... I know everything" she said. " Kiara listen to me... I don't know a single thing I don't have any idea what u r talking about." He said.
She was still crying. " Kiara pls stop crying... see I think we both have some misunderstanding... we will clear it up... but first pls stop crying na" he said. She looked at him " Please leave me alone viraj... " she said. " But I want to talk to you" he said. " We will talk but not now.. come and meet me in evening... but pls let me be for some time" she said. " Ok kiara... I will come at 7" he said disappointment clearly visible in his voice. She kept looking at his retreating figure which soon got blurred due to her tears.

Kabir was at his work place. He was there to choreographer perfomances in national fest. He was really working hard because he wanted to made sure that he give it 100% for nisha. He know she is very sad these days and alone too. He too was missing her. He wanted to see her. But forget seeing he even can't hear her voice. He was annoyed at her but he knew whatever she had done, it was for him. He smiled "nisha... I will be back to you soon my love" he whispered. He played a song on his phone and started his file work which was pending as ashish wasn't there to help him.

Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne
Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne
Kar Diya
Kar Diya Bekhabar
Bechain Shaam-O-Sehar
Bechain Shaam-O-Sehar
Bas Tujhe Yaad Karta Hoon Main Raat Bhar
Bas Tujhe Yaad Karta Hoon Main Raat Bhar

He smiled listening to the song. He remember their lachong dance... the perfect dance he had ever done. He still could feel her in his arms.

Ahista Ahista Saathiya
Tumne Koi Jaadu Hai Kiya
Ahista Ahista Saathiya
HoTumne Koi Jaadi Hai Kiya
Ho Meri Jawani Ki Kahani
Dubi Hai Tere Pyar Mein
Ho Ja Tu Ho Ja Meri Ja
Baitha Hoon Tere Intezaar Mein
Khoya Hoon Tere Pyar Mein

He remembered her confession. That day was the best day of his life. Her beauty was in her sweet innocent yet mischievous eyes. The way she perfectly fits in his arms as if they are pieces of puzzles which were created to get back together.

Maine Tumhe Chaha Jis Tarah
Chahega Na Koi Iss Tarah
Maine Tumhe Chaha Jis Tarah Ho
Chahega Na Koi Iss Tarah
Chahat Mein Teri Main Toh Yara
Na Jaane Kya Kya Ho Gaya
Bhula Main Saari Duniya Ko
Khwaabon Mein Tere Kho Gaya
Chain Bhi Mera Kho Gaya

He shook his head and closed his eyes. The only thing he can see was her face. That million dollar smile for which he can do anything. He remember their night on terrace, her kiss and her frowning expression when she found him awake.

Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne
Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne
Kar Diya
Kar Diya Bekhabar
Bechain Shaam-O-Sehar
Bechain Shaam-O-Sehar
Bas Tujhe Yaad Karta Hoon Main Raat Bhar
Bas Tujhe Yaad Karta Hoon Main Raat Bhar
Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne
Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne

He imagined her dancing in front of him. He was amazed at her beauty. Her perfect moves and her mischievously mysterious smile was making him crazy. He got up from his chair and tried to touch her... but she vanished in thin air. He facepalmed himself. " U have gone crazzy kabira" he said to himself.
" Crazy in love " he shouted and spined hard.

Viraj was again in her apartment. She had made coffee for both of them. " So kiara... please tell me ur side of the story...," he literally pleaded her.
" u remember the day viraj when I have called you to tell u that m going on a research project" she said. " I clearly remember it kiara that was exactly 2 yrs back" he said. " Hmmm... after I have called u... I started up my journey... I was driving when my car got stuck in the middle of the road. Hmne bhot try kia par car start nhi hui... so I get out of the car and was trying to make a call to papa when a high speed truck hit my car from the back. I was in front of the car, the impact was so much ki hm road k dusri taraf gir gye... I was just trying to get up when some vehicle hit me and I rolled down the road when my head collided with a stone." she said.
" When I woke up in the hospital... the day was 6 months back. I have been told that I was in coma for 1 and half year. mumma was dead in an accident 6 months back. No one was there with me viraj only papa was... doctors told me that I couldn't walk because my back has been severed in the accident. I tried to call u... u never picked my call. I got back home... I asked him if he called you and told u about my accident. He told me that he tried calling you... even he had talked to you but u never called him back or even asked about me. I didn't believed him and tried calling you again but got to know that u were getting married. That day I understood that u don't need me anymore or should say u don't love me anymore. So I stopped trying. I got a job offer here and settel down. Papa died some 3 months back due to illness. From then m here." She looked at viraj who was staring her.
" but I never get a call from ur dad kaira" he said. She looked at him in complete disbelief. " after ur call that day... I got news of my selection in international sports competition. I had to go for my training sessions in denmark. I was there for two months. After that I had my competition and won. When I came back after 3 months, I tried to contact u but u weren't answering my call. I tried to call uncle too but he said u r busy with work and will only came back after 6 months as ur project has been extended. I waited for you kiara... but u never contacted me. I called uncle again after 6 months but he changed his no. I tried to find u but there wasn't any clue of yours. What I got was a mail of ur father saying u don't wish to see me again and I should never try to contact you. I was shattered kiara. I stopped working and was in my house for two months trying to figure out what went wrong between us. Thats when daadji decided to get me married. I always thought of him as my father and I know he was worried for me so I started my career again but he was determined to get me married. After a long time, he found nisha for me, he was ill and wanted to see nisha as his bahu. I married her for daadji only. I still luv u kaira..." he said sighing and wiped his tear.
She looked at him with tears in her eyes. " I have always loved u kiara... do u believe me? " he asked. She can see it in his eyes that whatever he was saying was true. In that one moment she saw his pain and hurt in his voice. She knew he can't lie to her. She too was tired...tired of being strong without him. She nodded in a yes and hugged him again. " But why did papa lied to both of us" she asked. " I don't know kiara... and I don't want to... I just wanted to know do u still love me" he asked holding her face. " I wouldn't have been alive if I had stopped loving you viraj" she said. He smiled and kissed her forehead. " but viraj... u r married now. What will ur wife will think of you" she asked worried. He smiled and handed over a gift to her. "This is from nisha" he said. She unwrapped it and found a beautiful showpiece in it with a letter. She looked confusingly at him. He asked her to read it.
" Hi kiara... I know u don't know me... this is for u from kabir and me we hope u like it. Viraj loves u very much kiara... I hope u both will clear ur misunderstanding and will get back together. I will be waiting for you "
-nisha

She looked puzzled. " kiara... I will tell u everything." Viraj said and told her everything about kabir and nisha. " Kabir was the one jisne aapko dhunda ur hme yha aane k lie convince kia... ur nisha... vo to aap ko milne k lie bhot excited hai..." he said. She didn't knew how to react. " Viraj... ye kismat bhi kya khel khelti h na..." she said. " Offo kiara ye sab bhool jae na... are hm to bhool hi gye hme kabir ur nisha ko call karna h... rukie hm abhi skype karte h unhe." He said and called kabir first.
" hello bade bhaiya... " kabir smiled at him. " Hi kabir kaise hai aap.." viraj said. " Bade bhaiya... mai to mast hu bus aap jaldi se btao aap kiara se mile... aap ne unse baat ki... vo maan gyi na.. bolo" kabir asked. " Offo kabir... aaram se... ha hmne baat karli ur vo maan bhi gyi... aap khud hi baat kar lijie" he moved the screen towards kiara.
" Kiara ye hai kabir hmare sabse achhe dost..." viraj introduced her to kabir. " hi kabir" she said. " hi... " he beemed.
" Thanks kabir... viraj ko yha bhejne k lie" she said. " ur welcome... " kabir said. " Hme aapka gift bhot pasand aaya" she said. " Gift?" He got puzzled. " Ha kabir... nisha ne aap dno ki taraf se kiara k lie ye gift bheja tha" viraj said showing him the showpiece. Kabir smiled foundly at her mention.
" beautiful" he said. " Bade bhaiya... vo."he asked. " ha kabir... nisha is fine... vo thik hai.. hmne subah unse baat ki thi... she misses you kabir" viraj said. " I miss her too " kabir smiled sadly. " Achha bade bhaiya talk to you later... bye... n bye kiara" he said. " Bye" both answered.
" He loves her very much... h na viraj" she said. " they both are madly in love with eachother kiara... u will see... lets call nisha too... she will be waiting" viraj said. He skyped nisha.
" Hi viraj.." nisha said. " Hi nisha... kaisi h aap" he said. " m fine viraj... u tell me na... kiara se baat hui... aapne baat ki... sab thik ho gya na.." she asked in one go. Kaira and viraj looked at each other and bursted out laughing. " Kya hua viraj" she asked. " First meet kiara... kaira she is nisha" he said. Kiara was still laughing but managed to do a hi to nisha. " Kya hua aap dno has kyu rhe h" she was still puzzled. " vo kya h na nisha... abhi just we talked to kabir and he too asked same questions in one go like you" replied viraj. " Oh.." she said and blushed. " Aapka gift hme bhot pasand aaya nisha" kaira said.
" Thanks" nisha smiled. Nisha was about to ask something when viraj said " ha nisha... kabir thik hai... vo thoda busy tha isilie jyada baat nhi ho payi... usne kha h ki he misses you" viraj said smiling. Nisha blushed crimson red. Seeing her kiara and viraj laughed again making her embarrassed. She did a rushed bye and cut the call.

" They both are really crazy viraj" kaira said. " I know... they can't live without eachother... I hope these months fly away soon and they both reunite." Viraj said. " Ok kaira... we will go india now" he said. " but viraj... are u sure u want to keep this relationship..." she said looking at her legs. When a lone tear made his way through her eye. "Shhh kaira... how could you even think that... hme yha aane se pehle pta tha ye sab... I m here only for u kaira... ek baar aapse door hoke dekh chuke hai hm... ab ur himmat nhi h hmme... " he said embracing her. " u will never say such words again... u hear me" he said. " I luv u viraj" she said.





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Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res😉 me first.. 😆

Unres..😆
18th post I m unres ng Aftr my comeback..😲😆🤣
Sorry Mansi 4 Late comments yaar..😳

This update was superb...👏👏👏👏👏
Yeh Nisha bhi naa Kitni ziddi hai yaar.. 😲Bechare Kabir ko baath karne se bhi mana kar dia..😒
Paagal hai donom... Ek doosare se itna pyaar karthe hai phir bhi baath nahi karenge..
Unique piece hai NiBir Love Story...😆🤣🤣

I always loved NiBir Relationship q ki vo donom ek doosare ko bina dekhe aur bina sune hi samaj sakthe hai... Dil se juda hai unka rishtha☺️

Kabire thik hu mai... samjha ur baki lgo ko bhi kaam h yaar sab mere sath hmesha nhi rh sakte na" she said. " Mai hmesha tere sath hu nisha... tu mjhe dekh nhi sakti to kya hua... mai hmesha tjhe apna ehsaas dilata rhunga..." he said. She smiled and he can feel it. " Achha muskurana band kar ur ye bta kuch khaya ya ese hi mjhse baatein karne m lgi h" he asked. " kha lungi kabir... tu jab baith jaega na plane m tb" she said. " Tab kyu. ." kabir asked. " Tere jaane ki khushi m jyada khaungi aaj" she grinned. " Achha ji... itni khushi...nautanki khi ki... chup chap khana kha samjhi... pta h mjhe... abhi tere aansu bahane ka session shuru hoga jo kal subah tk to rukne wala hai nhi" he said smiling. Nisha facepalmed herself as she knew she can't hid anything from him. " Thik h kha lungi pakka" she said smiling at his concern. " Kitni der h jaane m" she asked. " Last boarding call is for mr. Kabir kumar" she hear. " Kabir... tu gya nhi... last call h ye.." nisha squealed. " Are meri maa.. chilla kyu rhi h ja rha hu" he said "achha rakh phone nishu...apna khayal rkhna samjhi" he was about to cut when nisha said "ruk kabir... "
" bol nisha.." he asked. " I love you kabir... m always with you... n m waiting for you to come... tu janta h na tere bina mera kya hoga... jaldi aana pls" Nisha said with a trembling voice. "Nisha... I know... I luv u jaan... I will be back soon " kabir said. " Bye..." nisha said. " Bye" kabir replied wiping that lone tear. She hunged up the call and clutched his photograph close to her heart. She lay down in her bed still holding his photo and crying "jaldi waapas aana kabir" she said.

The Above Para Proves my point.. especially the Red Portion.. & Pink Portion☺️

Kabir Listening to song & imagining Nisha Dancing was well wriiten scene loved it❤️👏👏👏

(I m writing this comment listening to the song "Ishq Ne Tere Ishq Ne" bcz never heard dat song.. & Mansi Its superb yaar.. Excellent choice of the song👏👏👏👏)

He smiled listening to the song. He remember their lachong dance... the perfect dance he had ever done. He still could feel her in his arms.

He remembered her confession. That day was the best day of his life. Her beauty was in her sweet innocent yet mischievous eyes. The way she perfectly fits in his arms as if they are pieces of puzzles which were created to get back together.

He shook his head and closed his eyes. The only thing he can see was her face. That million dollar smile for which he can do anything. He remember their night on terrace, her kiss and her frowning expression when she found him awake.

He imagined her dancing in front of him. He was amazed at her beauty. Her perfect moves and her mischievously mysterious smile was making him crazy. He got up from his chair and tried to touch her... but she vanished in thin air. He facepalmed himself. " U have gone crazzy kabira" he said to himself.

" Crazy in love " he shouted and spined hard.

@bold Suprbly written loved it..👏👏👏👏 @red 200% true.. NiBir r Mad in Love😆😆🤣

Loved Viraj-Kaira Scenes..😃 Happy 4 them that they both cleared their misunderstandings..

The Skype Session was fun..😆😆😆😆 Blushing NiBir ☺️& Teasing Viraj-Kaira🤣🤣😆

NiBir asked same Questions...😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Donom ko Patience ka "P" bhi nahi patha..
🤣🤣🤣🤣
I wonder How they wl survive 4 two months.. 😲& I m also worried wat wl b their reaction wen they meet eachother aftr 2 months..😲😲😲 Kahi ek doosare ko kha na jaaye😆
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" Hme aapka gift bhot pasand aaya" she said. " Gift?" He got puzzled. " Ha kabir... nisha ne aap dno ki taraf se kiara k lie ye gift bheja tha" viraj said showing him the showpiece. Kabir smiled foundly at her mention. " beautiful" he said.

@Red See...😳 Hw Much He Misses His Love.. dat is Her😳☺️

Mansi Loved this update..👏👏👏👏

Thanks yaar 4 PM😳
(PM se pehle I saw liked it n res kar di..🤣 par comment ab kar rahi hu🤣🤣 Sorry😳)
Do write More..🤗Q ki DMM☺️😆
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(Dnt forget wat I told u in my comment on NAUC TSC DT SYS😉😆
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Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Wow kiara nd Viraj r together
Plz jaldi jaldi kabir nd nisha ko bhi sath lao, i can't see them like this 😕
Thnx for pm, its wonderful part
Edited by poo10 - 10 years ago
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wow so good it's lovely an amazing update as u always give ...u r an amazing writer ...keep writing ...update soon...n tysm for the pm
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Wow ..how cute ..viru and kaira❤️.. but why did her papa lie??
my nibir poor guys ..jaldi se ya dooriya khatam ho jai..I want my crazy lovers together😒 ..ab to singham and gangawal drama bhi ha .. hope isma kabir mom is nice not like our vj..
continue soon. .

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