Nibir SS - Stolen Hearts Chp5-Pg9

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Chapter 1

In the streets of Dubai, a middle aged man in his forties sits in his back yard mourning the loss which he had to suffer due to the robbery that took place in his house week ago. This man was Abdul Shiek, a rich and respectful business man of Dubai. Just than a helicopter hovers over the top and throws a black bag into the swimming pool. Abdul Shiek looks up but is unable to have a look the person in the helicopter as the person flies away, after much hesitating he decides to open the bag where he finds all his stolen items.

If you think this was weird you are wrong this same thing has been happening to all the rich people in the UAE.The helicopter was still there it hadn't gone very far, just far enough that it couldn't be seen, but could see. The man inside wore all black, he smirked looking at the scene in front of him and than remembered how he was the one to rob the house, but did any of those down there celebrating their happiness think how they got those items back, no they didn't, why should they, they are happy that's it, his mind started drifting to the events that happened in the past, but he stopped thinking further and headed to his destination.

The helicopter landed and the man walked into a huge mansion, entering a room which looked normal for a while, until he pressed a small button at the edge of the bed, that revealed an entrance to another room. This contained the newest technology items amid any tool that would be suitable for the best robbery to take place.
Wondering why I hell rich guy would want to rob people just to give them those things back in a week, without letting them know anything?

The man stood there catching his head after a while events of his past once again rushed into his head, events that changed him.Just than a voice yelled out his name, he went to the sitting area where his mother waited for him.
Man: Anything important mom.
Mom: Asha (secretary) has come to meet you, she wanted to talk about tomorrow.
Man: Tomorrow?
Asha: Sir it is your birthday day, did you forget, (the man glared at her, the girl continues a little scared) I mean you are one of the richest person in the UAE, so this has to be a big event. Ma'am had asked me to plan it and so I did, just wanted to know anything more.
Man: I am travelling tomorrow, I won't have time so you may please leave.
The girl leaves

Mom:Kabir, even this year you are not going to be here, ever since you have come back you have been making excuses on this day you think I haven't noticed.
Kabir: Mom you know I don't like celebrating my birthday, I never really did, It is nothing new, sorry if I hurt you.
Mom: I love you beta, but ever since you have come from London you are behaving weird. You are not the boy, you were first. First you told me the dance school, was your dream, than suddenly six months later you come back saying you want to join the business, which you were never interested in.
Kabir: It is nothing like that.
Mom: The boy whose day used to start and end by dancing, hasn't danced in the past four years, are you sure everything is good.
Kabir: Mom we get over somethings with time (whispers) and somethings we are never able to get over.

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What is with Kabir and the robbery?
What happened four years back?

Note: I know this concept seems crazy, and I myself don't know if I will be continuing, I just wanted to write something where things turn out different.

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Index

Chapter 1 on top
Chapter 2 - pg 3
Chapter 3 & Note - pg 4
Chapter 4 - pg 6
Chapter 5 - pg 9
Edited by janvi0513 - 9 years ago

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mansi_as18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its different... seems interesting. ... do continue soon
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Wow..it sounds cool yar..continue soon. ..
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Different concept.like to read more.plz continue janu... well done👍🏼
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the concept is really differ and nice one
plzzz dooo continue sooon with this!!!
m waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Toh kahin Sumit ne Kabir ko chor toh nahi bana diya??
Dhoom 2 ka Hritik Roshan jaisa feel aa raha tha bas woh vaapis nahi karta samaan😆
Very diff ss
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Janvi nice start yaar
pls pls pls continue
I want to know the mystery 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting n diffrent
waitng 4 the nxt part jau
do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start Janvi 😊
The concept seems different... Please continue soon
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Hey lovely start to ur story
Can't wait for next part

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