Nibir SS - Stolen Hearts Chp5-Pg9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

both d chap r awsum,superb.
dying to see nibir meet
plzz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
Awesome update👏
NiBir kitne sad hai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome update janvi 👏
Matlab viren aur sumit villain hai 😡

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: itznimi003
chap 2

gangwala nishu ki shadi krana chahte h 😭
but nishu shadi nhi lrna chahti
kabir itna badal gya ki apne bday me hmesha kahin akele chala jata h
awsm update

chap 3
awsm update
vasu ke itne baar puchne par bhi kabir ne kuch nhi btaya
nibir kinne sad h😔
kabir ne gangwals ko mumbai bulaya..
feeling bad for nibir
i hope nibir jaldi mile
fb scenes was written nicely...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Sameeha151
Wow it was awesome jhanvi and pls update next part soon..nishu q call nhi utharhi thi kabir ka? I ll be waiting for next part 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Awesome update👍🏼
Continue soon

Thanks I will

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN
Very nice and interesting update!
Please continue soon...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: poornima_15
awesome update ... waiting for next part continew soon ... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 4

Nisha left the house shortly afterwards she didn't wish to be a part of the discussion that would follow after her father informed to the other family members, he had already informed her mother who she convinced with great difficulty. There was still time left for her train so she thought of doing a little shopping for a few people she knew well in Mumbai. As she went about the market area she remembered the times she had come here with him, slowly those flashback led to their other beautiful memories and stopped at the moment which changed everything. Nisha glanced at her watch and realized she should be leaving for the airport so she left the market area for the railway station. She sat in the train waiting to reach her destination.
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Kabir's flight had landed finally he had reached his destination.
On the phone
Kabir: I have reached, I hope the preparations are almost done.
????: Yes we both are on the work and the other two are also helping.
Kabir: I will be reaching soon.
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Nisha reached Mumbai, she looked around the city as she exited the station the city had given her new memories that helped her live her life in Jaipur without...she made a call.
Nisha: ya I just reached, I hope everyone is coming as well or humesha ki tarhe log late na ho
????: koi late nahi hoga, don't worry, you just come here, missed you (pause) ya the others missed you to.
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Back in Jaipur Sumit was busy trying to convince dadaji for the alliance he had brought for Nisha while Ramesh was speaking against it and standing by his daughter's wish like he had always done. Laxmi was a silent spectator to all this quietly praying to God to fill her daughter's life with the happiness she deserved.
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It was a palace like house surrounded by a beautiful garden, a large pool in one corner, the are enclosed by a wooden gate, that slid open. Just outside two taxis stopped and a person got out from each, the paid the drivers and the taxis left, they walked towards each other with tears in their eyes, he reached out a hand and touched her face, she caught his hand in hers as it reached her chin. There eyes reflected alot of unsaid emotions.
???: Kabir
Kabir: Nisha
They both hugged each other
Nisha: toh finally iss bar time mein agaye, warna mujhe laga iss time bhi, Mr late lateef late hi honge
Kabir: Haww mujhe kyun blame kar rahi hai, tu jaldi ajati hai Jan bhuch ke ta ke tu mujh par chade
Nisha: tu mujhe blame kar raha hai mein hi stupid hoon Jo tujhe itna miss karti hoon.
Kabir: Kal hi toh video call kiya tha, roz karta hoon, phir kyun miss kar rahi thi.
Nisha (angry): matlab tu ne mujhe bilkul miss nahi kiya.
Back hugging her
Kabir: miss toh unhe karte hai jinhe hum bhol jate hai, aur mein tujhe kabhi nahi bhol sakta.
The gate slid open
???: bhai aap yehi par Di se sari batein karoge ghar ka andar nahi ana.
???: haan Di aap aur bhai romance apne kamre mein bhi complete kar sakte ho.
Kabir: Alisha, Rishi tum dono mujhe nahi iss se khao, jab late ata tha uske liye mujh par chilati ab jaldi agaya toh usse kissi aur bath par problem hogayi.
Nisha: What are you trying to say that I over react, Alisha Rishi tell me do I over react.
Rishi (whispering): Alisha Di phir se shuru hogayi inki nokh jhok.
Alisha (whispering): yeh toh inka style hai Rishi, tom and jerry fight ke bina wo nahi je sakte
Rishi (whispering): waise six months se mein ne yeh witness nahi kiya
Alisha (whispering): kya
Rishi (whispering): tom and jerry ka live show
Alisha (whispering): wo dikhana ke liye unke carbon copies the.
Rishi (giggling): phir bhi original ki bath hi kuch aur hai
Alisha (smirking): wo toh hai
Alisha and Rishi's silent conversation was broken by Nisha
Nisha: tum dono apne dant kyun dikha rahe ho
Kabir: kya discussion ho rahi thi
Alisha: wo bhai...
???: Blue, Blu
???: pink, pink
???: masiDi ro se khao ke...
???: maa papa
The two kids ran towards Nisha and Kabir
Kabir: kaisi hai meri princess ruhanika meri ru
Nisha: mera champ Ruhaan, mama ka ro kaisa hai
Ruhaan: itta (spreading out his little hands, Nisha kisses his cheeks)
Kabir: thanks Alisha, thanks Rishi, tum dono na hote toh mein aur Nisha kabhi humare plans ko anjam na de pate.
Alisha: thanks toh hum dono ko aap ka karna chaiye, mein aur Rishi ne apne mummy papa kho diye massi, chachu chachi, tauji taiji, koi bhi humein apnane ke liye ready nahi hue kyun ke humare maa papa ne ghar se bhaag ke shaadi ki, uss waqt aap log agaye. Bhai bhen baniya aur jab chale gaye apke yeh carbon copies chod ke chale gaye (she glanced towards Ruhaan and Ruhanika).
Rishi: chaliye, ghar ke andar chalte hai.
All the six go in the house

Kaisa tha, do comment and tell me. I will send the pm for this update to people who liked the note on pg4 only.

Edited by janvi0513 - 9 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Awesome janvi 👏

Loved it

Nibir ke bacche 😳

Rishi and alisha conversation 🤣
Nibir nok-jhok 😆

Nisha kabir ka divorced nahi hua hai toh kabir gangwals ko barbaad kyu karna chhata hai? 🤪

Sabse chalak nibir nikle do bacche bhi hogaye 🤗
Update sooninsh can't wait please
Thanks for pm

Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago

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