Nibir SS - Stolen Hearts Chp5-Pg9 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start jaanu...loved it..!!!!
Waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
oh i am so glad u r writting
this looks very interesting...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Different plot... excited... please update soon😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice story...very interesting...plz update the next part soon...
Eagerly waiting to read more of it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
nice concept totally different
loved the title
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Kabir------ a robber.!!! Please jaldi se suspense Khatam karo.
Awesome update 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Very interesting start. Kya hua hoga 4 saal pehle?? Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Nishu di, Nishu di, Jwala and Bunty called out while opening the door to Nisha's room. She was sitting on the bed with her legs crossed, lost somewhere, she turned her head around as she saw the door opening.
Jwala: kya hua Nishu di, hum dono app ko itni Der se awaz lagae ja rahe the apne jawab kyun nahi diya.
Nisha: Aise hi waise tum dono ko kya chaiye tha.
Bunty: Kuch nahi Nishu di, bas wo Vimla taiji ne halwa banaya tha, toh app ko bulane ko kaha
Nisha: Un se khena ke mera man nahi hai
Jwala: Please please Nishu di
Rupan: Jwala zid kyun kar rahi. Waise bhi agar metha khayegi uski zindagi ka khatas aur adhurapan kam nahi hoga, ab Jo ho gaya so ho gaya, hum past mein ja kar usse bada toh nahi sakte hai ne Nishu, tu apni zindagi mein aage kyun nahi badhti. Jis ladke ko Sumit bata raha tha tere liye usse shaadi karne ke liye haan kyun nahi kheti.
Nisha: Mein hazar bar khe chuki hoon, mujhe shaadi karne mein koi interest nahi hai. Aur apko aisa kyun lagta hai ke meri life incomplete hai, mein ne ek saal tak archery ka course kiya, Jo mein humesha karna chati thi, uske badh Rajisthan mein hone wali archery competition ko jeeta hai aur bahut sare international competition ko bhi. Jaipur ki sab se prestigious archery academy mein ek instructor hoon. Jo mein jhati thi wo mere pass hai
Rupan: Mujhe teri fikar thi sirf Issiliye kaha
Nisha: janti hoon apko meri kitni fikar hai
Jwala: Nishu Di aap maa ki batein chodo
Nisha: Unki baton ka mujh pe koi asar nahi
Jwala (monologue): kyun apne kiya ese jiju kyun
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Vj: Iss baar kaha ja rahe ho apna birthday celebrate karne, akele mein.
Kabir: Mom ek meeting hai, wo jo naya project hai uske silsile mein, aur kuch nahi. Mein ek baar ticket ke baare mein confirm kar deta hoon.
Vj: Humara beta kab wapas ayega.
Kabir: Apna kaam khatam karke jald aane ki koshish karunga
Vj: Kaun ayega ek rich and successful business man, hum toh apne bete apne jojo ke baare mein phunch rahe the. Jis ki duniya uski mom aur dance the.
Kabir (monologue): Shayad jab wo log barbad ho jaye, tab apko apka beta wapas mil jaye, magar kya pata, wo aap se aur dur na chala jaye.
Vj: Apna khyal rakhna.
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Viren: Babuji wo order ka kaam badiya chal raha hai, Sumit ne saab kuch bahut ache se sambhal raha hai, saach mein ladka bahut layak hai. Itna acha ladka chuna apne Dolly ke liye.
Dadaji: Khushi hui sun kar, umeed hai jaise chezien dekh rahi hai waise hi ho.
Viren: Mein kuch samjha nahi babuji.
Dadaji: Phele bhi vishwas kiya tha kissi par, buri thara se wo vishwas toot gaya.
Viren: Sumit uss Kabir ki tarhe nahi hai, wo humari Dolly ko akele chord ka nahi jayega
Dolly: Kiss ne kiss ko choda iss bath ka bhagwan ghawa hai, aur app bhi, bas manna nahi jhate.
...
Kabir: Files ki details check karta hoon jo mail kardi gayi. (Looks at some thing on the computer).
Suddenly pictures flashed infront of his eyes and he closed his eyes to calm him self down.
Kabir: kar pecha chodegi yeh yadein.

Hope you all like it. Exams chal rahe hai 3rd Jan ko akhri paper hai, I wasn't going to update any of my stories till than but I thought chottu sa welcome 2016 and goodbye 2015 gift diya jaye.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update janvi 👏
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update 👍🏼
read both parts right now both were awesome 👏👏👏

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