Ramesh/Vivek AT #2 |*Detective Ramesh-Our Hercule Poirot*| Edits Pg 99 - Page 92

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

if it iss more than 10 parts,it should be FF na?


That's fan fiction na...That's more like..You can write Anything, needn't be about NAUC itself...Use the characters for a completely different story.

This can be SS..not problem.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


What does Dadaji blame Ramy on? Matlab he gets to know the twisted truth/VJs version and believes her or what? What maes Dadaji believe Ramesh now then?

basically dadu will say that nothing wud have happened if he listened to him...
but it wud be odd coming from dadu's mouth after all these yrs na...i mean ramy is married and is father now..
maybe KN's toota marriage will trigger him to say that...?
maybe dadu crosses his limit and says that ramy was in someway or the other responsible for her daughter's toota marriage and this will make ramy angry and he will blast him...sounds funny😆

but then i have to fix KN marriage too and i sont want that...i want to conc on dara
maybe i can include a hug?😆ur wish fulfilled😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

basically dadu will say that nothing wud have happened if he listened to him...
but it wud be odd coming from dadu's mouth after all these yrs na...i mean ramy is married and is father now..
maybe KN's toota marriage will trigger him to say that...?
maybe dadu crosses his limit and says that ramy was in someway or the other responsible for her daughter's toota marriage and this will make ramy angry and he will blast him...sounds funny😆

but then i have to fix KN marriage too and i sont want that...i want to conc on dara
maybe i can include a hug?😆ur wish fulfilled😉


Dadaji can talk about Ramy running away and facing failure? He can take that topic again...and VJ can add fuel may be? Ramy might either blast...or still stay silent. I am not sure...Smething regarding Nisha can only trigger him.

What if Dadaji hears Ramy blasting VJ for trying to break KN marriage? And Dadaji blasts him for talking like that to her...and Ramy in anger tells what happened and to his surprise, Dadaji actually believes him?


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


Dadaji can talk about Ramy running away and facing failure? He can take that topic again...and VJ can add fuel may be? Ramy might either blast...or still stay silent. I am not sure...Smething regarding Nisha can only trigger him.

What if Dadaji hears Ramy blasting VJ for trying to break KN marriage? And Dadaji blasts him for talking like that to her...and Ramy in anger tells what happened and to his surprise, Dadaji actually believes him?


yeah something dealing with nisha can only trigger him...issliye i thought abt toota KN marriage.
no more silence yaar i want him to blast dadu😆
yeha...that's a nice idea.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

yeah something dealing with nisha can only trigger him...issliye i thought abt toota KN marriage.
no more silence yaar i want him to blast dadu😆
yeha...that's a nice idea.😉


Say if we take toota marriage...You mean Dadaji will taunt saying he ran away leaving VJ, and it's his karma or something?

Yeah..blast Dadaji and Dadi..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


Say if we take toota marriage...You mean Dadaji will taunt saying he ran away leaving VJ, and it's his karma or something?

Yeah..blast Dadaji and Dadi..😆

ya he might say ki he always ran away from situations and issliye he didnt even try to save his daughter's marriage(he doesn't knw ki ramy didnt knw abt it..and got to knw when it failed) and ramy becomes angry...

dadi is sweet yaar...why wud ramy blast her?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

ya he might say ki he always ran away from situations and issliye he didnt even try to save his daughter's marriage(he doesn't knw ki ramy didnt knw abt it..and got to knw when it failed) and ramy becomes angry...

dadi is sweet yaar...why wud ramy blast her?


You mean..Ramy doesn't know about KN marriage broken and he is in shock when it happens...


Not exactly blast...Like Dadi would definitely try to stop him from talking angrily with Dadaji na? He can tell her sternly to let him speak.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


You mean to say...You have already written it?

RaDa scene as in the one you already have in your SS? Or a different one?

No i haven't written it yet but it'll be simillar to that one and i'll copy paste that scene to make it feel like they are nostalgic and somehow the misunderstangings will be cleared

Guys give me something else to write too. But make sure you provide the details if its from earlier episode i don't have good enough memory
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


You mean..Ramy doesn't know about KN marriage broken and he is in shock when it happens...


Not exactly blast...Like Dadi would definitely try to stop him from talking angrily with Dadaji na? He can tell her sternly to let him speak.

yeah something like that...nisha hid everything from him and he finds it unbelievable coz she never said anything to him.and on top of that dadu says ki he didnt do anything to save the marriage...always ran away from situations...reminds abt mumbai thing...then when he left the house during KN trip...
ramy gets angry and asks him to stop...dadu says if he doesnt stop wjat he will do?leave the house ?
ramy gets angry...blasts dadu😆


yeh that is possible😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gagp

No i haven't written it yet but it'll be simillar to that one and i'll copy paste that scene to make it feel like they are nostalgic and somehow the misunderstangings will be cleared

Guys give me something else to write too. But make sure you provide the details if its from earlier episode i don't have good enough memory


On which characters?

One scene which I feel they should have shown is Lakshmi asking Ramesh WHY he left the house, when he left after having a fight with Dadaji. I think they missed that. Ramesh became the culprit at the end.

Write on Moren khaands...I was planning but scrapped the idea for now..😆

Tell me the characters you would like to write on?

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