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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

@bold-agree.
maybe ramy tells and just leaves ...dadu is in a fix whether to believe it or not
then mohan and lakshmi openly support ramy.so dadu believes and is shocked
dadi will make dadu understand...will never blast him...
TS ya 3S will do na?i dont think OS will be enough
but since this is a single long shot,should i divide the OS into parts?😆

What about cousins or Nisha? Would they be around?

Can we bring in some proof? Which Mohan has or Ramy has which proves everything? A letter of some kind? Kashiqui letters 😆

Divide the OS...😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#932

So you would be writing the revelation and patch up scene na? That won't be OS...Or just with Dadaji realising?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

What about cousins or Nisha? Would they be around?

Can we bring in some proof? Which Mohan has or Ramy has which proves everything? A letter of some kind? Kashiqui letters 😆

Divide the OS...😆

yup letters...dadu needs proofs after all

letters wud do😆

yaar an idea...nisha knws everything na...what if she blasts dadu?😆will she blast dadu?

yes she might do that for ramy😆

3 options hai

1.nisha

2.lakshmi and mohan

3.lakshmi mohan and nisha

but if nisha is there,VV ya Kb willl also be there na...n i dont want that😆coz i cant bring that toota rishta element😆

wait...what if nisha is also there and ramy,nisha,lakhmi ,mohan tells the whole incident with proof and dadu believes...Kb was on his way to GH...overhears everything...raka patchup with dara patchup😆

oh God..this is becoming an SS now😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

yup letters...dadu needs proofs after all
letters wud do😆

yaar an idea...nisha knws everything na...what if she blasts dadu?😆will she blast dadu?
yes she might do that for ramy😆
3 options hai
1.nisha
2.lakshmi and mohan
3.lakshmi mohan and nisha

but if nisha is there,VV ya Kb willl also be there na...n i dont want that😆coz i cant bring that toota rishta element😆

wait...what if nisha is also there and ramy,nisha,lakhmi ,mohan tells the whole incident with proof and dadu believes...Kb was on his way to GH...overhears everything...raka patchup with dara patchup😆
oh God..this is becoming an SS now😆

No...Let Nisha talk after the revelation...She can talk good about her father. But first, let it be just Lakshmi and Mohan. Nisha can talk what Ramesh has been for her, which shayad Dadaji was never been for Ramesh.

Kabir who comes to GH can read the kashiq letters...and get to know the truth...

I think all our stories are getting combined now...😆 We should write one single SS then

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Posted: 10 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

No...Let Nisha talk after the revelation...She can talk good about her father. But first, let it be just Lakshmi and Mohan. Nisha can talk what Ramesh has been for her, which shayad Dadaji was never been for Ramesh.

Kabir who comes to GH can read the kashiq letters...and get to know the truth...

I think all our stories are getting combined now...😆 We should write one single SS then

u r right abt nisha

yeah...it is all reaching a single beautiful end...u think ki we hould give all these ideas to someone and make that one person write the whole thing?

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

u r right abt nisha

yeah...it is all reaching a single beautiful end...u think ki we hould give all these ideas to someone and make that one person write the whole thing?

No no...let's write it in parts and complete it...For eg...you write revelation, I will write DaRa...Someone can write RaKa...like that...let one story flow then. We can discuss the entire story in detail...and make it one.

In that case, we got to bring in Moren khaand revelation in between all this...Let's give that a closure also.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

No no...let's write it in parts and complete it...For eg...you write revelation, I will write DaRa...Someone can write RaKa...like that...let one story flow then. We can discuss the entire story in detail...and make it one.

In that case, we got to bring in Moren khaand revelation in between all this...Let's give that a closure also.

that's agreat idea yaar

s we can bring ranju's idea in btw this

compile all this and make a single story and send them

just one doubt...since it is written by many ppl ,their POVs and style of writing will be different...so when we combine it like a single story...will that flow be there...u get what i mean right?😆

yeah Moren should be there

shwetha we can make it like this...a single SS /FF with each chapter contributed by one person?

like one chapter...revelation...one chapter dara patchup...one chapter dosa reunion...sumit-dolly divorce...like that?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

No no...let's write it in parts and complete it...For eg...you write revelation, I will write DaRa...Someone can write RaKa...like that...let one story flow then. We can discuss the entire story in detail...and make it one.

In that case, we got to bring in Moren khaand revelation in between all this...Let's give that a closure also.

I can write Raka yaar also Rava fight if you wish or kava

You didn't tell me which scene did you want as the poem?

Edited by gagp - 10 years ago

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: anulovessarun
that's agreat idea yaar
s we can bring ranju's idea in btw this
compile all this and make a single story and send them
just one doubt...since it is written by many ppl ,their POVs and style of writing will be different...so when we combine it like a single story...will that flow be there...u get what i mean right?😆

yeah Moren should be there

shwetha we can make it like this...a single SS /FF with each chapter contributed by one person?
like one chapter...revelation...one chapter dara patchup...one chapter dosa reunion...sumit-dolly divorce...like that?

yeah...We can ask Ranju to work on it also.

Chapters would be a superb idea yar...Though I don't think we can make a public announcement of it...we can discuss with MOTDians...we can discuss among ourselves and come up with it? Don't you think that would be better?

When we make it chapter wise...then style of writing won't matter. We just have to decide on the chapters...and who would want to write on which? I don't even care if cast reads it or not...It would be a superb memory fr us to read...Believe me I read lot of stories which I have written it myself from the old shows...t's a good feeling.

We have t decide on the incomplete tracks now. And there is VJ also...who has to fit into all this.