||NIRAJ SS : i'm moving on!|| updated *16-4-15* pg 17 ~completed~

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Amber

@Mishubaa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Do Continue fr sure
In the serial we can depict it
But I'm glad u chose the current track ..
Nd U explored his feelings so well .. 😃

Quote

Bhagya

@Gautamyagya04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Mishubaa
Do Continue fr sure
In the serial we can depict it
But I'm glad u chose the current track ..
Nd U explored his feelings so well .. 😃

thanks mishubaa 😊

glad u liked it..! n yea wo bhi tho imp hai na isiliye i chose this one!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Bhagya

@Gautamyagya04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

part 2

Knock knock.. The door was wide open but he wasn't the one who was welcomed by them anymore he knocked the door it was past 2:30pm.

Rukma came to door to check who was it..
Aap ? She was surprised to see viraj there..
Ji haan hum hai , said viraj , kya aap dadaji.. Sorry humara matlab hai MR. Gangwal ko bula sakti hai ? He asked her with hesitation.
Haan ek min me abhi bulati hun unne..

By the time Ramesh was passing the door.. Tumari himat kaisi hui yahan aaneki ? He shouted at him.. Rukma was horrified by seeing Ramesh this angry .. She immediately went to dadaji n dadiji n asked them to come out..
Mr. Gangwal plz hume bas ek baar baat karne ka mauka... Mr.viraj muje tumari koi baat sunne ka shock nahi hai plz aap yahan se jayiye.. , Ramesh interrupted him while he was talking..
Plz Mr. Gangwal hum yahan kisika dil dukane nahi aaye hai ek bar mauka tho dijiye..plz..
Dadaji heard him pleading n felt a bit bad..
Ramesh unne Ander aane do.. He ordered Ramesh par bhauji.. Ramesh was adamant Abt refusing viraj to speak up..
Rukma jakar sabhi ko yahan bulao.. Said dadaji..
Rukma ji miss.vasundra ji ko bhi bulana plz.. He was doubtful if she will come.. Viraj said.
Par unse kya kaam hai ? Asked dadaji
Mr. Gangwal aap unne bhi bulayiye hum aap sabko batayege..

Everyone gathered down in the main hall.
Viraj was speechless for some seconds after seeing his 'ma'.
Nisha stood there as if she dint know him he was just another annoying person for her now!
Viraj's eyes were filled!
Mr.viraj aapko bas thoda hi der Dia jayega jo bhi bolna hai jaldi boliye aur yahan se nikal jayiye.. Dadaji said strictly!

Mr. Gangwal pehele aap se hum mafi manga chahte hai..
Plz hume maaf kar dijiye he said looking down.
Iski koi zarorat hi nahi hai mr.viraj aapka aur humra koi sambandh hi nahi hai aur waise bhi iski zarurat
...
Mr. Gangwal hum jante hai yahan pe humme koi maaf nahi karega.. Humne galti ki hai miss.Nisha ke shadi ke din hume aisa hungama nahi karna chahiye tha par us waqt pata nahi hume kya hua..
Hume galtiyo ke liye daatne wale koi nahi the.. Aap jaisa koi dadaji nahi tha jo hume humari galti pe date aur sudare.. Hak se humpe gussa kare. Humare zindagi me sab chodkar gaye pehele ma.. He took a gimpse of vasundhara..vo rishtedar jo hokar bhi nahi the.. Fir miss Nisha he paused for a second n looked at her.. Nisha was now a bit teary.. Aur fir ab dadji tho bas miss Nisha ko khodene ki daar me hi humne aisa bardav ki thi.. Hum galat the humme maaf kar dijiye.. He said with almost teary eye! He was trying to hide his tears...

He went to Ramesh.. For a second he just turned to go from there but then Laxmi stopped him..
Mr. Gangwal humme maaf karna hum jante hai humne jo harkate ki hai uske maafi ke like bhi nahi hai.. Par .. His throat were getting choked.. Kash humre pass bhi humare pita hote jo aap jaise hi har waqt apne bacho ka sath dete dete unne sahi aur galat ki samaj de sake.. Jo rishte ki samaj de sake.. Jo pyaar ke sath kabhi haat sar par rak kar hume aashirwad aur pyaar de sake. Par kabhi pita the hi nahi ye batane isiliye shayad aisa bartav kia humne.. Ramesh was now a bit guilty. His heart was aching abit now he was slowly trying to understand him... Mr. Gangwal aap jaise pita pana tho bas kismat walo .. Viraj was now crying.
Aap hi batayi na jab aapko kabhi pyaar hi nahi mila ho aur jab mil raha hai aur fir kisi galatfehmi ke wajah se vo pyaar hi dur ho raha ho tho kya aap nahi jayege us pyaar ko bachane ?? He was broken inside he tried not to cry but he did cry..nisha was now crying.
Bas humne bhi wahi koshish ki par humara tarika galat tha!

Saying this he moved to vasundhara..!

Edited by Gautamyagya04 - 10 years ago