||NIRAJ SS : i'm moving on!|| updated *16-4-15* pg 17 ~completed~

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INDEX
Part 1 - 1
Part 2 - 3
part 3 - 9
Part 4 - 13
Part 5 - 17
I'M MOVING ON!

" A single moment of misunderstanding is so poisonous , that it makes us forget the hundreds of lovable moments spent together within a minute" . But do we realize that sometimes these single moment of misunderstandings can also part away two people in any sort of relationship and by the time we realize its too late to change things.

part 1


Of course love is a beautiful feeling and when its your first love things seems to be more beautiful. But do all of us get to be with our first love ? nope not everybody is lucky here! and they say if it was a true love its only once in a life you get those feelings!
Sometimes in life we don't get what we want but does that mean we should stop living ? does it mean the world ends ?

So this love was something that didn't get a chance.

There he was in his room in his penthouse shattered ,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well expressed ...seriously, this is THE BEST ...you wrote it how he is feeling right now ? Fabulous ...Continue soon ...Most eagerly waiting 😛
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Bhagya, that was awesome!!!
Really touched my heart when I was reading.
Do continue soon...
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ya do continue
this is amazing

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Rula diya! 😭
This is truly Amazing! 👏
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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seriously bhagya...rula diya!!!
no words to describe my emotions...and your ss too!!
do continue and please update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

Very well expressed ...seriously, this is THE BEST ...you wrote it how he is feeling right now ? Fabulous ...Continue soon ...Most eagerly waiting😛


Oh my my the best sounds so nice to hear!
Thank u so much Nish (I m hoping u wont mind me saying u Nish)
Yup ryt now, assuming he knows Kabir is his brother n his mom is there in Jaipur :p)
Thanks once again! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaneriLover

Bhagya, that was awesome!!!

Really touched my heart when I was reading.

Do continue soon...


Thank u kri 😃
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ri21

ya do continue

this is amazing


Yup will continue
Thanks Riya! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@nuha
@achira
Thank u so much guys. This is something good to hear that my writing cud connect u n u felt it so much.
Thank u so so much ❤️

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