||NIRAJ SS : i'm moving on!|| updated *16-4-15* pg 17 ~completed~ - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys really a big thank u to all of u..
I really dint think ki muje itna accha response milega!
I feel so good to hear that even my words cud touch u all n it means alot alot n alot to me I cant explain it
Just thanks vo kam hai
🤗 to all
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks girshu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 4

He turned to nisha , nisha was teary and dint feel like facing him as she wud be broken down and will want to hug him but she wont be able to do that! she cursed herself for doing such a mistake!

Miss sorry mrs. nisha , hum kisike gunahgar hai ya nahi par aapke zaroor hai ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dijiye ga. he said looking down , nisha wanted to shout now but stood silent.

Aapko pata hai jab humne suna ki galti humri bhuaji ne kiya tha unhone fasaya , usi waqt hum andar hi andar kahin mar chuke the. aapke pas isi liye aaye kyon ki hume laga ki sach jaane ke baad aap mujhe ek mauka doge he said smiling kitne bade bewakoof hai na hum he almost laughed. aapke pure parivar ke sath waise vyavahar karne ke badh us din mr.gangwal ko dhakka dene ke badh bhi hume laga aap hume maaf karegi. he was now laughing. he was somewhere lost he dint know what he was blabbering in between.


The whole GF were somewhere a part of this state of him ryt now. vasudhara was almost fainting..
miss arey.. sorry mrs. nisha plz hume maaf karna.
sab yahan jo bhi hai sab maaf kar dijiye.
suketu tum bhi tumhari bahen ko bahot rulaya humne aur tum bilkul galat nahi the jab tum hume marne wale the marna chahiye tha shayad tab hume humari galti ka yeh sas hota. he was strong , he was laughing , he was broken but determined.

Bas ab ek hi pratana hogi ki agle janam me hi sahi ek bar hume bhi aisa hi parivar mile. ma , papa , behan , bhai aur sabhi. a lone tear escaped.

Mera raja beta main ab bhi yahi hun , tumhara bhai bhi hai , vasundhara pointed out at kabir and said with a loud cry!
viraj kahin na kahin humne bhi tume samajne me galti kar di hai beta hume maaf karo aur apni ma se ek baar baat karo , ramesha said he was too broken seeing viraj in this state.
bade bhaiya aap akele nahi ho hum sab hai aap ke sath , said kabir he dint like him but he always felt for him!
dekho viraj ramesh ne sahi kaha kahin na kahin humne bhi galti ki tume samajne me ab hum sab hai , tumhari ma bhi , itne saal baad tum mile ho tho saare cheezo ko bhool kar ek nayi shuruat karo , said dadaji.

Nahi mr. gangwal ab humara koi nahi hai yahan bas hum sab se maafi maange aaye the aur vo kaam ho gaya hai. ab main nikalta hun.
he was firm abt leaving , beta ek baar apni ma ko mauka do aise math karo mera raja , vasundhara was almost begging!
Ab kya mauka de hum aapko ? jab humne faisla karli hai ki ab se aap me se kisike zindagi me dhakal nahi denge! plz ab muje math roko. saying this he left!

only one more part then its done!
Edited by Gautamyagya04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
This is just soo good ...my eyes are teary ...
You are phenomenal girl ...These updates are soo soo soo good ... ❤️
Edited by heart_nishkala - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

This is just soo good ...my eyes are teary ...

You are phenomenal girl ...These updates are soo soo soo good ... ❤️


oh my god! ❤️
thank u so so so much nish u dont know by saying this u have made me feel so..
thank u so much 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
loved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Bhagya di!
You made me cry even now!! 😭
You are amazing!!! 👏
Continue soon!!
And a request...
Please give it a happy ending!?
Please? 😊
Edited by Nuha09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
bhagya my emotions ki rani u made me cried.u r really a true writer.literally i m crying now.loved this part also.as usual waiting for the nxt part frm an awesome writer. and also thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it wz really touching.. i do believe dat nisha doesn't deserve viraj.. i want viraj to b strong again without depending upon any1 else n start afresh to live his lyf n b happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
bhagya bhagya bhagya...mere ghar me baadh(flood) aa jaayegi ab...
jokes apart...very brilliantly wrote and well expressed...BTW...any plans to make it a happy ending??

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