Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
where is reply? anyway love ur writing neha... do post others soon auh mei waiting... i knw rati too waiting to read... awesome writing yar.. mashaa Allah such mei... update soon ❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hey roshini read ur all parts in one go ...it was awesome yaar
And the check kiss☺️ it was hot hot hot
Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: FairyHM

Hey roshini read ur all parts in one go ...it was awesome yaar

And the check kiss☺️it was hot hot hot




awww thankyou so much dear 😳
Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: SaF_YHM_IshRa

where is reply? anyway love ur writing neha... do post others soon auh mei waiting... i knw rati too waiting to read... awesome writing yar.. mashaa Allah such mei... update soon❤️❤️




awww that was too cute safu
love u 🥺
Posted: 10 years ago
#65
i m sooo sorry for this nuch late guys...
but was too busy with studies & some other works >_<

so here is the next part...
read & enjoy...
Like comment...
praise or criticize ...
all ur comments r valuable ^_^
love ya :*

so here you gooo...


part 6

Next morning...
Nisha woke up with a sound...
It was alarm clock..
She took alarm clock in hand and looked at it !!
"kya 8 Baj gaye... Oh god itni der hogayi!! " she got up quickly from bed & went to washroom to freshen up!
Kabir was still sleeping...
"Kabir uth...
Uth kabir..."
"Are sone de na Nisha .. Kya Hua?"
"Kabir sade 8 Baj gaye hai..."
"Toh..?"
" duffer Tu bhool Gaya aj kya hai??"
Kabir ignored Nisha and took pillow on his face...
Nisha got annoyed & said to herself "ye aise nahi manega"
Then she look here & there and smiled evilly
She slowly removed pillow from kabir's face and splash a glass full of water on his face...
Kabir woke up in shock
"ye kya hai yar ...?kya kar rahi hai? Kyu Pareshan kar rahi hai mujhe?? Kya hai aj??"
"Tera dance interview stupid"

Kabir widened his eyes "Dance interview...?" immediately got up From bed ...
Nisha: "Haan duffer , ab jaa freshen up ho, already 8:35 ho gaye hai!! 10baje ka interview hai aur Tu abhi utha hai!! Kitna kuch karna baki hai kabir !! Tujhe practice b karni hogi na? Chal jaldi kar"

Kabir: "Haan yar Nisha... So Stupid of me!!! Aj meri life ka itna bada din hai aur me ghode bech ke so raha tha!! Tu nahi hota mera kya hota yar??"
And made his cute puppyface then said " Thanx yar"
And came towards her to pull her cheeks but Nisha stopped him and said...
Nisha: "chal ab zyada maska mat laga ... Ja refresh ho jaa... Main kitchen me ja ri hu dekhti breakfast k liye kya h!!"
Kabir smiled & moved towards washroom & Nisha towards kitchen but she stopped in midway , turned & said "Aur haan itna maska lagane ka koi fayda ni milne wala !! Main akele nashta nahi banane wali... Jaldi aa sath me banayenge..."
__________~~~~__________~~~_______

Kabir was practicing for interview..
Just then his mobile rang...
Nisha looked at phone and said "dadaji?? Iss waqt" and she looked at Kabir & he gave a tensed look to Nisha...
He stopped & picked the call...
"ji dadaji .. Ji .. Achcha ... Jii ... Abhi??leken ... Achcha thik hai..."
These r the only words Nisha can hear...
As soon as he disconnected the call Nisha asked worriedly... "Kya hua??kya kaha dadaji ne?? "
Kabir sat down on sofa tensed ... Nisha again asked "bolna Kabir kya hua??Tu dara raha hai mujhe ... Kya Hua bol??"
Kabir finally opened his mouth "Lagta hai mera sapna adhura hi reh jayega! iss bar bhi mauka nahi milega " and the words Nisha heard stunned her...
"Kabiirrr..."
Nisha shouted
"Akhir Hua kya hai??Tu aisa Kyu bol raha hai yar??bol na kya kaha dadaji ne?? Nisha asked with anger ...
"Kya bolu??Mere khud kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai"
He replied frustrated...
Nisha put her hand on his shoulder "Kabir" she said with concern and sat besides him on sofa
"Sirf 45mins baki hai interview ko aur dadaji ne ghar bulaya hai kuch kaam se... Unko mana bhi to nahi kar sakta!! Ab karu to kya karu?"
He looked at Nisha
She thought something fir a while then...
She got up & said "chal tayar ho ja hame nikalna chahiye..."
Kabir asked confused "Nikalna??kahan Jane k liye??"
" aise sar pakar ke yahan baithne se to achcha hai ghar ja ke dadaji ki baat sun le aur jaldi se kaam nipta kar tere interview ke liye jaye!!"
"Par Nisha..."
"Par war kuch nahi... Chal jaldi kar ... 40 minutes hai ab bhi hamare hath me!!"

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TBC ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
nice part dear.
singam ko bhi abhi bulana tha😆
thnx 4 the pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
AWESOME UPDATE...

Thanks for the pm...
Posted: 10 years ago
#68
thanx all :)
glad that u remember me :p
pehle i didn't got time to write but wen i sit to write i just wrote so much together ... :D
now i hav the story till 10th part...
so i'll update 7th part tomorrow afternoon in sha'allah
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
aawwwh wow! updaaate sooon pls otherwise ek story slow nehi rehta inta late karogi toh :(
Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

aawwwh wow! updaaate sooon pls otherwise ek story slow nehi rehta inta late karogi toh :(


u mean story flow nahi rehta i guess :p
lol i understand.. will try to update daily pakka till it end ;)


and plzz check DM on insta...

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