Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 16

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Great update 😊

I always love your Nibir conversations. They r my most favorite part to read in any update😆

So Nisha is ready to forgo her fears and enter a nightclub only for Kabir

Also Kabir's dialogue "Kash tu hamesha mere saath rahe " was just ❤️

Continue soon😳

Originally posted by: P_shah

lovelyyy updateee..

nicely written...

sorry for late comment..

and thanks for the pm ;))

So guys as i promisedi m back with the update... ^_^
When the truth came in open

part 12

They went inside...
It was a very cool place..
Disco lights, music sound , noice , crowd..
Kabir loved the place & he just wanna go to the dance floor & dance like a deewana tonight :p
Nisha was not so comfortable with the surroundings .. So she hold his arm .. Kabir was so lost exploring the place that he did not noticed Nisha is not liking all this!! Kabir walked forward to dance floor & Nisha found a empty table & sit there in corner...
Kabir looked at her & thought wats the meaning of coming along if she just wanna sit in corner like this!! *Annoyed*
Nisha faked a smile seeing him looking at her
Kabir heard a song music & smiled evilly...
Dekha hai tujhko jabse Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya ...
Kabir lie-down on Nisha's table..
With his right elbow's support turned to nisha
Ooo Dekha hai tujhko jabse ... Haay main toh hil gaya...
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya..
Nisha shocked to see all this.. So tried to ignore & moved away.. But he hold her hand..
Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe..
Removed her hand from his hold & went ahead..
Arey jo bhi main kahun tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat??
PALAT...
(She turned & looked at him)
Tera dhyan kidhar hai Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai ... Ye tera hero idhar hai
Kabir came to her & started dancing with her .. Nisha wasn't interested but he forcefully moved her here & there..
(Imagine it plzz as I cant describe properly wat i imagined.. So use ur imagination :p lol )
Nisha pushed him & again moved away from him..
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai... Toh Palat... Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai ki tera dhyan kidhar hai
She looked at him irritated..
But as usual Kabir continued irritating her with his antics
Tera dhyan kidhar hai... Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai...

He grabbed her hand & took her to dance floor
Are aaahh kahin coffee pilau tujhe main...
Aree aaahhh kahin pichure dikhau tujhe mein...
He came close to her
Chal le chalu tujhko aisi jagah...
Oo meri janejah..
He caresses her cheecks his fingers
Jahan humko nahi ho kisi ki khabar..
He hold her from back rested his chin on her shoulder
Jahan laage lage na kisi ki nazar...
Nisha hit him with her elbow part away,,
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat??
She was going back to her table..
PALAT... Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
She turned to look at him..
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Nisha gave a disgusted looked & turned back & went to her table..
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai Toh Palat... Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
ki tera hero idhar hai,,
He came in between her & table Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
so she tried to go to other
But followed her where ever she goes..
He keep on following her while music playing in background..

*last Para of song*
He sit in a chair in front of her
Ho kehta hai mujhse kyun zamaana..
Put his elbow on table cupping his own face.. Looking at her with a innocent expression..
Arey haan, nahi aasaan hai tujhko paana...
He hold her hand again take her along..
Aah.. tere nakhre uthaaun sanam...
Mujhko teri kasam..
Nisha looked at him & felt special & was lost in him
Taang dun chand ko, teri khidki pe mein
He leaned close to her..
Taank dun chand ko, teri kurti me mein... He winked..
Nisha comeback to her senses & kicked on his foot & went away..
Arey jo bhi main kahun tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat!!!
Arey PALAT...
She turned but this time she smiled.. Tera dhyaan kidhar hai Ye tera hero idhar hai ...
Kabir came to her ..
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai ... Ye tera hero idhar hai
this time Nisha also danced with him..
Toh Palat na... Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai...
Both enjoyed dancing..
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai...

(i m not so good in describing the scene >_< i hope i didn't spoiled the fun with my bad story telling... sorry if i)

"Bas ho Gaya Tera?? Ab jau mein??" Nisha asked him smiling
"itni jaldi?? Nishaa..."
Just then Nisha's phone rang ..
"Kya hua??" Kabir asked..
'Phone aya hai" she shouted as there was too much noice..
"Kiska phone hai??" he asked
"Kya??"
"Meine pucha kiska phone hai??" He asked loudly this time
"Maa ka" she replied
"Hello maa"
"Nishu tu kahan hai beta??" Laxmi asked
"Maa zor se bolo apki awaz nahi aa rahi.." Nisha said putting her finger in other ear..
"Nishu itna shorsharaba kyu hai wahan?? Tu hai kahan iss waqt??"
"Maa ek minute.."
She came away from there, where was less noise
"Haan maa ab bolo kya bol rahi Thi ap??"
"Nisha beta Tu kahan hai ?? Tu Teri dawaiyan le Jana to bhool hi gayi!!"
"Dawai?? Kya maa ap bhi!! Apne dawai ke liye phone kiya??Meine kaha na apko mein ab bilkul thik hu!! Phir dawa kis liye??"
"Aise thodi hota hai!! Bas ek dose le li aur ho Gaya!! Kam se kam jitni layi wo to khatam kar!!"
"Kya maa ap bhi... Mujhe nai khani Wo dawai plzzz.. " she cut the call saying that!.
"Arey Nishu..."
Before Laxmi could say anything phone was disconnected..
She thought "kya karu Mein iss kadki ka?? Kitni la parwa hai ye!!" she then thought why there was so much noise behind?? where would she be?? She tried her number again but Nisha hav already switched off her mobile to avoid her lectures..
She tried kabir's number but it was also switched off .. She got tensed again..
She thought to send sukku with medicine to Nisha's house..
Just then she heard kirti talking to Saurav, sukku, Aman & dolly ..
"Guyss pata ni wo log wahan kya kar re honge is waqt... Kash me bhi wahan jaa sakti yar!! Its such amazing place..."
"Kya baat kar re ho aap sab??" jwala came there & asked..
"Kon kahan kya kar raha hoga?? Konsi jagah??"
"Arey jwalu ... Jaipur ki sabse best jagah.. Night shine palace yar!!"
"Kya ?? Night shine palace?? Matlab Wo nightclub Jo last month hi khula hai??"
"Haan jwalu .."
"Par wahan kon gaya hai??"
"Kabir jiju le gaye hai Nisha ko !!" aman replied
"Jahan jane ke bas dreams hi kar rahi hai kirti .. Kabir Nisha ko wahan le bhi gaya.. Nisha Kabir , nightclubs , dance.. Awww... How romantics na?? How luckys Nisha is!!"
"Kya Nishu bro aur night club??" jwala giggled
"Tu hans Kyu rahi hai??" dolly asked
"Hasegi nahi to aur kya karegi??" Saurav interrupted
"Aur kya?? Nisha wo bhi romantic?? Pagal ho gaye ho tumlog.. Mujhe to Kabir par taras aa raha hai!!! " sukku laughed saying that!!
"Bechare Kabir jiju..." jwalu said giggling
"Tum log bhi na kuch achcha nai soch sakte kya?? Dekha nahi Kabir ke ane ke baad se Nisha kitni badal gayi hai!! Wo kafi had tak ladkiyon jaisi harkaten karne lagi hai!! To romantic kyu nai ho sakti wo??" dolly di scolds them..
"Par aplog ko kisne bataya??"
Jwala asked
Everyone looked at kirti
"Meine Galati se un dono baat karte sun kiya Tha bas..."
Kirti told jwala..
& described how she heard all this
*Flashback*
She was at window side .. She heard someone saying her name loudly .. So she went outside & found nibir standing there...
She didn't heard wat were they talking but she just heard a few words "Night shine palace" "Nisha saying yes to come" that was enough to understand that they are going there...
So she came to tell all cousins in excitement...
*Flashback ends*

Laxmi overhears them ..
Got tensed bcoz she can understand wat Nisha was going through as she avoid going to such crowded & noisy places...
And more over going to disco, night clubs is not allowed in gangwal family...
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TBC