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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Ri21

its really nice

do continue
waiting for the next part


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

NIRAJ SS:- "Love Triangle"


Part : 3


Nisha was sleeping peacefully on her bed...and she was dreaming about

her golden days spend happily wid her cousins and her lips were curved

in a smile...her natural smile...suddenly some sunrays starts falling on

her face...she opens her eyes and get up and sits on bed...she was still

smiling remembering all the moments they spend together...but suddenly

she realises her surrondings and her smile vanishes ya... she was

missing them a lot ,I knw u guyzzz mujhe bohot miss karte honge, I also

miss u a lot...' ...a lone tear fall frm her eyes..


Her cousins were not allowing her to come in europe bt they were knwing

her condition and they thought she needs some tym...


...she wipes it and goes to the window...the morning wind touches her

soft cheeks and she feel fresh and relieved...she got ready and got busy

in her daily chores.



here raghav gets down his room and notice tht many people are present in

their living room...some doing decorations ,some cleaning the house...he

moves to his mom and asks her wats the matter thn she informed him abt

the evening bussiness party...she asked him to come on tym to attend

party...then he leaves for his office...the weather was so pleasant.

he was going in his car ..suddenly he saw something and applies

brakes..he saw his DG(dream girl) was standing near a ice cream parlour

and eating her ice cream...he gets happy and run towards her...but when

he reached there he saw a little girl was standing there and licking her ice

cream...he smiles on himself...as he was imagining her ...he kisses the lil

girl on forehead n moves towards his car...then he reaches office and he

was more than happy that day.

here Nisha was doing her wrk in office then her phone rings..she takes the call .

Nisha: hllo Malhotra uncle.

Mr.Malhotra: hllo nisha beta.how r u??

Nisha: i m f9 uncle.

Mr Malhotra: vo beta maine aapko aaj shaam humare ghar party

mein invite karne ke liye call kiya tha.

Nisha: party??

mr.Malhotra : haan vo aaj humne humare ghar ek celebration party

organise ki h...humari new deal ki khushi mein..and aur tumhare daadaji

to yaha h nahi to tum aa jao...i would be happy if u'll come.

Nisha thinks for a min coz she dnt lke to attend parties.

Nisha:okay uncle main aa jaungi.

MR.Malhotra :okay beta so see u in the evening.

then he cuts the call and smiles to mrs.malhotra...yah she is coming...they

both r excited for Nisha's and raghav's first meeting.

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In the evening malhotra house was beautifuly decorated...with time all

people gathered in hall..all were busy in their talks...ladies in gossiping

and men in their bussiness talks...raghav's business frnds were also there

so he was also busy in his talks. but mr. and mrs. malhotra were waiting

for Nisha.

then a car comes n stops outside malhotra house ...a girl in beautiful

purple gown gets down the car...he gown was perfectly fitted to her

curves..her hair were tied above only some flakes were falling on her

face...her diamond earings were twinkling in her ears...her bracelet

shinning on her hand ...she was luking drop dead gorgeous..she starts

moving towards malhotra house

raghav was busy in his talks ..suddenly someone collided with him and

drink in his hand falls on raghav's coat...so raghav goes to his room to

change clothes


here Nisha enters in malhotra house ...evryones eyes on her...she was

luking like an angel...mr. and mrs.malhotra came and praised her baeuty

and welcomed her...soon she also mixes with those people.

raghav also cames down but didnt see each other...Nisha felt thirsty so

starts moving in search of something to drink...then she collides with a

tough muscular body...he was none other than our raghav...he holds her

through her waist and prevents her frm falling...he got lost in those deep

brown eyes...Nisha found it awkward so she helps herself in standing and

says sry to the guy and moves frm there...he was still lost

somewhere...then a waiter comes and offered him some drink then came

in his senses..then he thought tht she was again his imagination...again

they both got busy in their respective talks.

raghav was talking to his frnds then one of his frnd notice something on

his coat and he asked him abt it.he checks it an found a bracelet stuck

with his coat...then he realises that his DG was not his imagination this

tym...she was in real.

raghav(to himself):oh my god .,..oh my god...she was here...main abhi

usse takraya tha..oh god main abhi apni DG se mila...vo abhi yahi

thi...how silly i m ..maine phir se usse kho diya...par vo yahi h...abhi kahi

gayi nahi hogi...i'll find her...thnk u god thnk u...mujhe meri DG se milane

ke liye...thnk u.

he keeps the bracelet in his pocket and starts searching his dream girl.

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Hope u all like this part... waiting for ur feedbacks

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Prachi...
It is amazing
I am speechless... Can't wait what will happen next...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Prachi...
It is amazing
I am speechless... Can't wait what will happen next...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...



thank u soo much anshi... will update it soon...😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Superb update.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
fantastic . love u yaar amazing waiting for next update
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Originally posted by: Vrushika321

Superb update.
Plz continue soon.


Thank u thank u...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: aarvi123

fantastic . love u yaar amazing waiting for next update


Tysm... Bt not so good as u ok, u r just mindblowing .. And love u too...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: candy.shameema

Awesome , pls update soon.👏


thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

NIRAJ SS : "Love triangle"


PART: 4

jaipur-(afternoon tym)

viraj was sitting in his cabin. he was lost in any other wrld..niraj wrld n thn

someone knocks on door...viraj comes to his senses and says"come in".

and then a girl wearing a beautiful dress comes inside..she hands over

some files to viraj and talks abt some wrk with him.and then while leaving.

girl:viraj..r u alright??

viraj:yeah kyra,i m fine. (guys dnt bash over kyra ,she is a +ve character)

kyra:so we all r going out for a movie...why dnt u join us??

viraj:no thanks kyra, i have some work,u guys enjoy.

kyra comes out of viraj's cabin and tells kabir and priyanka tht he said no...both becomes sad.

kyra: let him be guys...hum pichle 5 saalo se yehi to try kar rahe h but vo

nahi maanta...vo aaj bhivaha jaaye bina manega nahi.so we should not

force him.

priyanka: ya kyra u r ri8...we should not force him varna vo phir depression

mein chala jayega.

kabir: okay then guys lets get back to work.

EUROPE (Malhotra's party)

raghav was busy in finding his dream girl...its been 20 mins but he didnt

get even a single glance of her.but he is not gonna loose hope so

easily...then suddenly someone taps on his shoulder.he turns around and

see tht his mom-dad were standing behind him.

Raghav's dad:raghav kya dhoond rahe ho.

Raghav :kuch nahi dad...vo aapko kuch kaam tha kya.?

Raghav's dad: haan beta vo tum nisha se nahi mile na ab tak.

Raghav :baad mein dad abhi mujhe kuch aur bahut jaroori kaam h.

Raghav's Mom:par beta ek baar usse mil to lo...i m sure u wnt regret ur decision..plz

ek baar mil lo.

Raghav :okay mom main mil loonga...but vo hai kaha.

raghav(in mind):haan milkar usse jaldi se mana kar deta hu...aur phir apni

DG ko dhoondunga.

raghav's mum luks all around in the hall and then she finds nisha standing

near a window. she tells raghav n indicates towards window...raghav

starts moving towards window.

nisha was busy in her own thoughts...she was not intrested in this party at

all...there was a little snowfall outside...evrything was so beautiful .. as

raghav was moving towards her, his heart strts beating faster but he

ignored it n goes n stands behind her.

raghav :excuse me ,miss.gangwal.

nisha turns around...and luks tht the same guy with whom she collided in

the eve was standing there.

raghav was hell shocked now...he was not in this wrld. he was on ninth

cloud.

nisha: ya i m nisha gangwal,aapko kuch kaam tha.

raghav was still shocked and not answering her question.

nisha: excuse me ...hey.. where r u lost...??...hello (n snaps her hands in

his frnt)

raghav came backs to his senses n asks again. "r u nisha gangwal"??

nisha: yes i m nisha ,nisha gangwal.

Raghav (happily moves his hand forward) :i m raghav..raghav malhotra.

nisha shakes hand with him

nisha:nice to meet u mr.malhotra...

raghav:really ??

then there was an awkward silence btw both...they were just luking here

nd there.

raghav(in mind): omg...nisha hi meri dg h...thnk u so much god...thnk u so

much...ye kuch bol kyu nahi rahi h...main hi baat karoon kya...isse pata h

humare rishte ke baare mein,...obviously usse to bataya hi hoga uski

family ne .par baat strt kaise karu...god help me.


raghav: so nisha (nisha luks at him )...congrats.

nisha:congrats???

raghav: dad ne bataya tha ki tumhe bussiness women of the year ka

award mila h.

nisha:oh ya...thnks mr.malhotra

raghav: raghav...call me raghav.

nisha: thnks raghav.

raghav: so...kya karti ho tum. (in mind-freak raghav..bussinesswmn ka

award mila h to bussiness hi karti hogi na...)...i mean business ke alawa

studies n all.

nisha: hmm nahi abhi nahi pehle hi studies finish hui h abhi only daadaji ki

help karti hu bussiness mein.

Raghav : dadaji??oh so mr.gangwal tumhare daadaji h...nd tumhare

parents i mean ur mom n dad...india mein rehte h kya. ??

(nisha's face falls suddenly after hearing wrd parents as she was really

missing them...)

Before nisha could reply...mr n mrs malhotra came there. And joins them.

Raghav's Dad: tum log yaha akele kyu khade ho...come..hav fun.

Raghav's Mom : ya why dnt u guys dance.

nisha: vo actually aunty...(before she could complete..raghav's mom goes

in centre n takes a mic n makes announcement)

Raghav's Mom : attention evryone...thnks for coming...so as we all

knw..today Malhotra's are going to make a big project. . ...so i want to

call miss nisha gangwal and raghav ... nd all of u to come on dance floor

to make this day more memorable.

nisha was not comfortable at all ...she hates dancing ...actually she hates

evrything which reminds her of viraj ...but dancing was also in

list...because while dancing she can feel viraj as he only teach her and

motivated to dance ...she can feel his presence... nd nisha wanted to stay

away frm even viraj's memories so how could she dance .

raghav was confused tht why she is thinking so much over it...then he

thinks tht she must be of shy nature...so he forwarded his hand n asks

nisha for dance.

nisha looks around and see tht evryone's staring her and she didnt want to

create a scene so she keeps her hand on raghav's hand and gives him a

smile.

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they both moves in centre and many other couples join them...and then

the song starts...raghav asks for nisha's hand and she gives him her hand

and he holds her by waist and nisha keeps her hand on his shoulder and

closes her eyes.

As she started dancing wid raghav ... she remerbered the ppr dance

which she done wid viraj on her bday party ... And was smiling

remembering those golden days

Raghav saw nisha in frnt of him and still closing her eyes...he smiles seeing her like this. there was a sweet smile on her face.

All were dancing but

nisha was still in her flashback... and as song got over all started claping

and nisha came out from her flashback

then a tear drop came from nisha eyes and she realises tht she is not with

viraj anymore... she was with raghav... and they were doing tht formal

dance and evryone around them clapping ...she was feeling

uncomfortable to be with raghav.

raghav notices the tears in nisha's eyes...he was confused tht why she is

crying...before he could understand or ask her ...she rans away from

there...she runs out of the door...still crying leaving a confused raghav

behind. and then raghav moves from there..

raghav wents outside and tries to call nisha but she sits in her car nd

drove off. raghav was now confused as well as worried.

jaipur (eve- 6pm )

a car came n stops. viraj comes out of the car and starts to move...

viraj: nisha i m here again ,for u...nisha u r my life .aaj bhi main tumhe

yaha feel kar sakta hu.

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Hope u all like this part ... so don't forgot to comment guyzz...😊😃

Edited by Prachiiiii - 10 years ago

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