NiBir and Cousins -SS(part 10updated pg 14) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hehehe poor guys! N poor kabira shw aur saare ffs me bhi pitt tha rehtha hai! 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7
The boys ganag r hell scared to reveal up whats happening .They message Sourav also to come as he knows all about Sukku and his girl . Girls r in the guest room . While boys r sitting in the hall . Sourav is also there .
Girls gang
Dolly : Nisha hum guest room pe kya kar rahe hai ? why not ur bedrooms ?
Nisha (trying to hide ): woh , we are arranging our room . So cheezen misplaced hai .
Aman : tum dono ek saath kaam karthe ho hayeee
Nisha : Aisa kuch nehi hai . Bas hum kaam ko divide karthe hai !
Kirti : How cute
Nisha blushes
Aman : bas yeh laddo fatoo banthe jaa raha hai
Dolly : Sumit bhi
Aman : mujhe kya lagtha hai kuch na kuch zaroor ghadbad hai . something is fishy !
Dolly : Aman tujhe bhi wahi lag raha hai ?
Kirti : shayad mujhe bhi
Nisha : par hume unhe trust karni chahiye (tries to protect Kabir)
Dolly , Aman , Kirti : shut up !
Boys gang
Sourav : ok time abhi 6 hai . 7 bajhe ko Umesh bhaiya aur Sumit jiju Jiya ke papa ko garden ke peeche milenge
Sukku : till that I'll be with Jiya
All of them glares at Sukku .
Umesh : hey u Nuclear bomb . tu yehan hi bait .
Sukku : This is not fair ! (makes a sad face)
Sumit : fair kya this is the only solution to escape biwi hitler !
Sourav : tho mein tere saath window thak kahada rahoonga . theek hai !
Sukku : ok
Kabir : mein kahi nehi aane wala . mere naukri ki swaal hai .
The boys agree .
Girls gang plans to peep into the hall and hear what they are saying .
Saurav : tho theek saath bhaje hum bhare assemble ho jayenge .
Umesh : Ok
Sukku : theek hai
Sumit : Done
Dolly (in low voice ) : Yeh log kahan jaane wale hai
Kirti : I don't know
Aman : What r they upto
Nisha : guys ... (trying to explain)
Girls to nisha : Shhh
Dolly : mein Sumit ko follow karungi
Aman : mein Laddo ko
Kirti : mein Sourav ko
Dolly , Aman , Kiriti to Nisha : tu Kabir ko .
Girls gang agree .
As the boys move , girls also follow them except for Nisha as Kabir is at home .
Nisha goes to Kitchen
Nisha : Pata nehi kya naya khichdi pak raha hai . (in a low voice)
Kabir : Nisha ... ek cup coffee lana (says loudly )
Nisha : Khud bana le (irritated)
Kabir comes to the kitchen
Kabir : wifey subah subah to bada care aaraha tha mujhpe . ab kya hua ? (questioning look)
Nisha : tere harkathe dekhkeh mujhe tumhe maarne ka man kar raha hai .
Kabir(surprised and irritated) : Kya ? I have had enough of it . waise I'm hungry
Nisha : really ? mere dhimag khake tera pet nehi bhara ?
Kabir : agar dimag mein kuch hoga tho na bharega !
Nisha : Kabir ...(gets angry)
Kabir : acha acha theek hai
Nisha : whats going on ?
Kabir (confused): what ?
Nisha : jabse cousins aye hai, I'm seeing u .kuch tho ghadbad hai
Kabir(trying to hide): Kuch bhi nehi ...nothing
Nisha : Sach bol .
Kabir : waise where r the girls ?
Nisha: they r in detective mode went behind their hubbys !
Kabir : WHAT ? oh sit !
Nisha : kya hua ? Kabir jo bhi problem hai please bol de .
Kabir tells the whole story
Nisha : What ? Sukku ? Idiot !!!!
Kabir : Problem abhi khatam hone ka naam nehi le raha hai !
Nisha : mein abhi use dikhata hoon
As Nisha moves , Kabir pulls her . But again as she moves she pulls he by her waist an lifts her . Nisha turns towards Kabir and they share an eyelock
Nisha : Ab kya kare ?
Kabir : Kyun kya hua ?
Nisha tells the whole story of girls
Kabir : Yeh problems great wall of China ki tarah bada kyun hote jaa raha hai ?
Nisha : I think hume unko jaake dekhne chaiye !
Outside Nibir's house
Sourav stands next to Jiya's window . Kirti stands behind the wall .Sukku stands next to curatins of Jiya's house and talks to sourav
Sukku : woh Naha rahi hai
Sourav : Naha rahi hai ?
Kirti : How cheap ! ek ladki ki window ke paas kahada hai and he wants to see her taking bath ?
Sukku : accha hua . Jaldi se jiju aur bhai kaam ko khatam kradenge
Sourav : Koyi yeha pe nehi hai .Jaldi se kaam kardenge .
Kriti : Cheapo ! How blah !
Umesh and Sumit talk to Jiyas dad on the bench and Dolly and Aman hide behid the bush
Dolly : yeh taklu kon hai ?
Aman : I saw him that day ! In the shop
Jiyas dad : Tum dono jaante ho usne kya kiya ?
Umesh : I know , par pyaar mein ghadbad hota hai na !
Sumit : mein bhi bohat galtiyan ki
Dolly : yeh dono kya galti ke bhare mein baat kar rahe hai ?
Aman : kahi ...
Umesh : Sir sach kahoon tho har ek ki life mein ghadbad hoti hai jaise ki meri lyf . Meri biwi mujhe washing machine ki tarah dulathi hai ! (making a weird expression)
Aman : Kya ? When do I do that ? (shocked and angry)
Sumit : and my wife she is a tractor ! keeps on making noise (making faces)
Dolly : Noise ? (angry)
Jiya's dad : yeh baat isse kaise conneted hai ?
Umesh : who harmara loutha hai . So we shud take care . I promise u sir next tym he wont make any mistake
Sumit : ofcourse kabhi bhi nehi !
Jiya's dad : ok I'll give a chance .
Jiya's dad leaves
Umesh and Sumit : Mission Jiya accomplished
Dolly : Mission Jiya ? yeh dono ? (cries)
Aman : Cheee ... mujhe yeh umeed nehi tha ! unke papa ko pata liya ! (disgusted)
Nibir
Kabir : pata nehi yeh log kahan chale gaye
Nisha : Phele hi bol diya hota toh itna hungama nehi hota ! (angry)
Kabir : god !!!!(worried)
Jiya's dad comes in the meanwhile
Jiya's dad : Hi Mr and Mrs Kabir Singh
Kabir : aap yeha ?
Nisha : hello sir
Jiya's dad : hello, kyun wats the problem ?
Nisha : wo Umesh bhaiya and Sumit Jiju
Jiya 's dad : are they ur relative ?
Nisha and Kabir nod their head . (in worry)
Jiya's dad : Chalo andar jaakhe baat karthe hai
Nibir moves to Jiya's house .
Nisha : Im sorry sir wo Sukketu (guilty)
Jiya's dad : its ok . he has guts to speak up those things . Im proud of it
Kabir : thanx sir . Wo bohat badmash hai par he is very good . (smiling)
Jiya's dad : hmmm . I will see (thinking)
Nibir talk with Jiya's parents for a while .
While Kriti taps Souravs shoulder
Sourav : tum yehan ?
Kirti : tumhe kya laga ? I'll let u be cheap like this ?
Sourav : Wo wo (embarassed)
Kirti takes out her chappal and starts chasing him .
On the other hand Dolly and Aman comes out from the Bush .
Dolly : mein tractor hoon ? (irritated)
Aman : aur mein washing machine ? (angry)
Umesh and Sumit gets shocked
Umesh : Haan ... matlab nehi ... matlab
Aman : Tum uss Jiya pe bet lagaye ?
Umesh (gets shocked) : K..K ... Kya ?
Sumit : Wo ...wo ... Dolly ? (stammers)
Dolly : kya ? kya ? bolo
to be continued ...
Part 8 is up 😉
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
omg abi🤣🤣
poor boys now who will gonna save them from their sherlock holmes wives
and saurav and kirti nice yaar😉they both look nice together
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dolly tractor, Aman washing machine 🤣 bechara boys 😆It was Awesome yaar!! NiBir close moment in the kitchen ☺️ loved it! 👍🏼 Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice chapter...
Liked it Abi a lot..
Thanks for the pm 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg...cousin pairs are in deep trouble
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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abi ... ur realy a nyc writer dr👍🏼... poor boys🤣.. hope nibir wil sought tis out.. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 8 Aman , Dolly ,Umesh , Summit , Sourav and Kirti are at NiBirs house now . NiBir are not aware of what just happened and they look confused . The boys are sitting on the sofa and girls are staring at them and Nibir are standing aside and watching .
Aman : Sharam nehi aati aap logon ko ??
Kriti : sharam baccha hoga tab na ayega !
Dolly : haan wo inlogon ne kho hi diya !
Umesh : yeh kya bol rahi ho Dolly ? Hum tho bas (trying to explain)
Aman : CHUP! agar ek shabdh aur bole toh aaj raat ko murder hojayega ! (angry)
Umesh : mein marna nehi chahta (makes a puppy face)
Dolly : kyun nehi bet lagage pata na chahta hai ??
Sumit : Nehi toh !
Dolly : mein tractor hoon toh tum bhail ghadi ...very slow ki humne tume padkli
Kabir : yeh tractor bhail ghadi kya laga rakha hai ?
Aman : washing machine bhi hai
Nisha : kya ?
Kabir : tum logon ko hua kya hai ???
Aman : patha hai yeh dono ne Jiya par bet lagayi ! haan
NiBir : Kya ???(shocked)
Umesh and Sumit : What ?(shell shocked)
Kirti : aur yeh sourav neh khidki se Jiya ke ghar par peep kar raha tha ! how blah !
Sourav : nehi guys
Aman , Dolly and Kriti : Chup ! (staring at them)
Now Sukku enters happily .
Sukku : hey guys ! Sourav tujhe kya hua why r looking lyk being beaten up ?
Aman : iss ghar mein Sukku hi ek hai jo aisa waisa kaam nehi kartha hai !
Summit and Umesh stares at him in shock
Umesh : jise data na chaiye use toh compliment ki bearish mil raha hai ! (irritated expression)
Summit : wahi toh !
NiBir try to control their laugh .
Umesh : Sukku tu gaya kaha ? (shouts loudly)
Summit : haan ?
Sourav : zara pooch isse gaya kahan tha yeh ?
Sukku : Woh...woh ...
Aman : Tarzaan ki tarah chillao mat . Bechara Sukku dar jaye ga ! (irritated)
Umesh : This is not fair ! Dara toh tum rahi ho ...Junglee chudail ki tarah ! (gave up)
Aman : What did u say ??? (angry)
Nibir bursts out laughing .Cousins look at Nibir and gets confused
Nisha : ha ha ... tum logon ko aur koyi topic nehi mila jagda karne ke liye ??
Kabir : yaa ... Bechari Jiya issme phass gayi (trying to explain)
Nibir highfives . Then they explain the whole scenario .
Dolly : what ????? (shocked)
Aman : toh yeh sabb !! (guilty)
Kriti : How blah !!
Sourav : how blah nehi blah blah ... yeh sunne ke mere khan pakk gaya . Bakri kahi ki (giving an irritated look)
Dolly : Sukku tune hume pehle kyun nehi bataya ?
Aman : Haan Sukku !
Sukku : woh...mujhe laga (trying to exlpain)
Nisha : tujhe laga ki haam sab tume support nehi karenge ?
Kabir : agar aisa hai to ur wrong v all r with u
Cousins : Haan
They have a group hug .
Dolly : waits ! Sumit tumne mujhe tractor bhulaya
Aman : aur laddo tumne mujhe washing machine .
Sumit and Umesh looks confused and scared
Kirti : aur tumne mujhe bakri bulaya sourav
Nibir gives a not again look . The girls leave in anger and the boys also runs behind the girls . As of this cousins leaves Nibir's house making Nibir all confused and they start laughing again .
Sorry guys for short update and no much Nibir in the update .
Part 9 is up 😉 I will update it soon ...
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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