NiBir and Cousins -SS(part 10updated pg 14) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank all for all ur comments ☺️

Part 5
Nisha is chasing Kabir and Kabir runs into their house .
Nisha : Kabir tu rookh wahan mare ga tu mere haat se .
Kabir(Running inside the house) : Nisha tum Pt Usha ki behen ho kya ? kitni teez bhaagthi ho yaar !
Nisha (very irritated ): Wo boss kitini hot hai na ? jaake reh na uske ghar mein
Kabir : Nisha ...(trying to escape)
Kabir runs into the bedroom .
Nisha : Kya kaha tumne , wo bohot hot figure hai . Tumhara iraada badal gaya hai dhikh gaya mujhe . I can see changes in u r behaviour
Kabir : Chi chi ... mein bohot seedha hoon . I'm very straight
Nisha : Kitna seedha hai dikh raha hai . Kameena kahi ka !
Nisha throws pillows on Kabir . Kabir tries to escape but no Nisha is Nisha .She starts throwing everything placed in the bedroom.
Kabir : Nisha ... Nisha please wo nehi please
Nisha : Jaana apne sexy boss ke paas .Aur apna mardangi dikha . Go na go to ur boss he'll be waiting fo u !
Kabir : Nisha I was just kidding . mujhe kya patha tha tum Manjulika ban jaogi .
Kabir stands on the bed so does Nisha . Nisha starts beating him
Kabir : Nisha ... Nisha ... kya yaar ! stop it
He grabs Nisha
Kabir : Why r u over reacting
Nisha : What ? Why should I ?
Kabir : Agar wo ladka hai ya ladki tujhe farak kyun padtha hai ? Why is it bothering u ?
Nisha : Ofcourse it bothers because... (she comes to her mind and starts thinking)
Kabir : because ...
Nisha starts biting his hand and they both fall on the bed .Nisha is on top of Kabir
Kabir : Chudail ho tum who bhi doggie ki . haat bhi kaatli .
Nisha : Kya kaha tumne ! mein doggie hoon ?
Kabir : haan bull dog ! irritating ho !
Nisha : irritating mein ya tum
She starts beating him again . Kabir holds her by her waist and flips her . Now he is on top of her .
Kabir looks into her eyes and so does she .
Kabir : tumhe farak kyun padtha hai ? tell me why ?
Nisha : Tumse matlab
Kabir : Kyuni ki mujhe teri ye Jhansi Rani ka activated mode jhelna padh raha hai
Nisha tries to move . Kabir pulls her .
Nisha : Chodo mujhe leave me !
Kabir : Jab thak jawab nehi donogi I will not leave u !
Nisha : move kabir . Cousins ghar aa rahe hai . please (trying to hide)
Kabir : Now tell me warna ... (gives an evil look )
He comes more close to Nisha .Nisha just looks into his eyes . They just look at each for a long time . Then he just taps her nose with is finger
Kabir : U r J ryt ! (very happy to see say that )
Nisha : what ? (embarssed) U r K ! hato (changes her expression)
The door bell rings and NiBir gets aware of their position . They look around their bed room to see the mess they have created .
Kabir : Mein jaake dekh tha hoon
Nisha : I'll arrange the room
Kabir : koyi zaroorat nehi hai . Just come with me
They go to the living room and open the door . Its the cousins except for Bunty and Jwala . They are having exams .
Kabir : hello sasural waalon ! Hamare Ghar mein aapka swagath hai !
Nisha stares at Kabir . They enter into the house
Dolly : Hi ! sorrys ! bohat time lag gaya tha aane mein Sumit ke wajhe se !
Sumit : Mere wajhe se ya tumhare wajhe se ! Apna poora time kapdon mein hi niptadi .
Aman : Uffo tum dono
Umesh : Kabir , kaisa hai tu ? how is lyf ?
Kabir : bikul theek (looking at Nisha). Then he looks at Sukku
Sirf Suketu bohat hi handsome lag raha hai aaj !
Sukku : Sach ? thanx (Blushes)
Nisha notices him smiling
Nisha : tujhe kya hua ? ladkiyon ki tarah kyun khush ho raha hai ? why are u smiling ?
Sukku : nehi bas aise hi . Just like that
Kriti : Kuch dino se aisa hi hai yeh ! don't know why ?
Kabir : Hawa kuch badla sa hai na sukku
Umesh : Haan bohot badla sa . Aadmi ban raha hai na issiliye .
Sumit : iska matlab hormone lochha hai na ?
Aman , Nisha , Dolly and Kirti gets surprised and shocked . Kabir , Sukku , Umesh also gets shocked .
Kabir : Aisa nehi hai . Bas har ladka yeh umar se guzar tha hai nai .Mein bhi sukku bhi , aap bhi ,umesh bhi . Its Natural
All the girls feel somewhat irritated .
Umesh to Kabir (in a low voice)
Umesh (gets scared liseing to kabir ): Mujhe marvana chaatha hai kya ? Uska sree ganesh Sukku ne already kar diya !
Kabir : relax Saale shab . aisa kuch nehi hoga .
Umesh : hope nothing happens like that .
Aman notices they both talking
Aman : tum dono ke beech kya guzur phuzur ho raha hai ? whats cooking ?
Kabir : Kuch nehi bhabhi . aise hi hum office ke baat kar rahe the !
Nisha gets irked
Nisha : Apne boss ke bare mein nehi bataoge ?
Kabir (makes an awkward smile) : bataonga na . ill tell
They start talking , girls made snacks and they all started chatting for a while .
To be continued ...
Part 6 is up 😉
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Amazing ha ha loving this Nisha...
Waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hehehe she j of all the gals n boys whom kabira talks to nah?! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Awesome Awesome stella!👏 Just totally Absolutely love it!!! Its just too cute and adorable ❤️🤗 I've been wanting to comment on this for a long time but IF is giving me logging in problems for the past 10 days or so, just cant seem to log in and when i do log in it gets logged off, even now it could get logged off any moment 😭 Anyways continue soon, eager waiting for the next update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice update abi
loved their tom and jerry fights
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
J nisha is cute...nisha in denial of feelings for Kabir is adorable...loved your update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh I love the way Nisha is J...!! I wish they realize their love soon
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amazing stella👏... sry actually i came to IF after a bit long time, so was not able to comment 😔... but read tis in 1 go... its realy amazing nd lovly ... nibir realy rockzz yaar.❤️.. hope to see their romance like tis in onscreen tooo ... accept my request nd do pm me dr... nd update sooon... waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Thank you all of u once again for u comments 😳
Some of them have requested for translation . I would be mixing English in btw .
Part 6
NiBir and cousins talk for a while . Then the boys gang leads out for some fresh air . There is a cafe next to NiBir's house . so boys go there .
Kabir : So guys sab kaisa chal raha hai ?(Hows everything going on ?)
Sumit : Kuch zyada nehi hai bas have to suffer wife troubles
Umesh : you also . Sab yehi problem se kyun guzar the hai ?
(y all of them suffer the same?)
Sumit : Tu bhi saale ! very nyc
Umesh : Don't ask yaar ! its lyk hell ! aisa lagtha hai ki kabhi bhi bomb phatega . Aman aaj kal behaves lyk bin laden
Kabir : what ? (laughs) problems aap create karte ho then u blame them !
Umesh : ya ya ur lyf is settled na . I cant believe u and nishu don't fight
Kabir : stop it mujhe sharam aa raha hai (acts lyk blushing)
Umesh : oho! lagta hai ur second honeymoon is set
Kabir gets shocked
Kabir to himself : uss electric eel ke saath honeymoon kon manayega .I will turn into punching bag !
Sukku : how cute ! waise pyaar aisa hi hota hai kya ?
Umesh : u don't talk about it ! tere wajhe se mera love mujhe dararahi hai !
Sumit : why? what happened ?
Umesh narrates the whole story . Kabir and sumit bursts out laughing .
Kabir : waise uss letter mein tune kya likha ? what did u write in that letter ?
Sukku : nothing bass yeh likha ki
U r lyk rose and father is lyk thorn
U r cute an pathlu aur tere papa nikamba and takhlu
Ur eyes are lyk stars tere papa ka eyes r like volcano
patha nehi tere papa ko kaise samjhaonga ya mere issat ka falooda banonga !
U r voice is lyk sparrow and ur mugambo's is lyk rabbid doggie
tum mere liye dost se zyada ho aur tere papa mere enemy se kam nehi ! ab kya karoon kise pataon tujhko ya tere papa ko 😕
All the three burst out laughing !
Kabir : tu pata raha tha yah bagah raha tha ?
Sumit : you don't know how to write a love letter ?
Umesh : and that's y her father wanted to see u ! unka izzat ka lassi banadi tune
Sukku : stop it guys . mein unke papa ko dekhne ke liye itna mukshil se tyaar hua hoon . aur tum ho ke .
Kabir : after writing all this zaroor wo tumhe unke doggie basi kaha hi khilaenge !
Sukku : yaar positive bol !
Umesh notices a man standing in the counter
Umesh : woh insan kuch jaana pehcana se nehi lag raha hai ?
Kabir : woh mere boss hai
Umesh and sukku looks at him
Umesh : wo jiya ke papa hai
Kabir gets shocked
Kabir : what ????? (shell shocked)
Kabir : Yaar ! yeh sab mere saath hi kyun hota hai !
Umesh : Kabir im going to the garden . If he sees me then im dead
Sukku : me too
Sumit : me three
Kabir : my naukri ! zaroor wifey ne curse ki hogi . Jal jal ke mere kaam ko jaladi ! (worried)
At NiBir's house
Nisha: so ... what r u plans ?
Aman : Nothing !
Dolly : yeh sumit ne call cut kyun kiya
Aman : sab aise hi hote hai . until we get married they take care of us but after that they throw us
Dolly : u r ryt ! sab aise hi hote hai !
Kirti : I know how u guys feel . I understand . Hope mera hubby aisa na ho !
Nisha : sab aise nehi hote hai .(tries to protect Kabir )
Kiriti : seriously ? how cute ? I cant belive u ppl don't fight !
Nisha: hmm... he's very understanding
Dolly : that's so cutes ! Sumit ko dekho very irritating call bhi nehi kartha hai
Aman : I don't why y but I'm having doubt on Umesh .
Kirti : bhabi ! yeh saare men hume irritate karne khel karthe hai . we should not give attention to it
Nisha : Accha hai kabir sab directly bolta hai (in low voice)
Dolly : mujhe ab sumit pe bhi doubt ho raha hai !
Nisha : Oh god calm down aisa kuch nehi hoga !
Aman : kal bhi I heard him talking about some girl ... haan Jiya
Nisha : what ? ...I have heard this name somewhere ... oh yeah she is our neighbour !
Aman and Dolly : What ?
The boys gang go to the garden and Jiya comes there
Kabir : woh dekho Jiya . Sukku tera wala .
Sukku without even thinking : Hi Jiya !!
Umesh : abbe ...
Jiya : Hi Tullu
Kabir , Umesh ,Sumit : Tullu ? (trying to control their laugh)
Jiya and sukku sit on a bench . while the other three hide behind the bush beside the bench
Jiya : So ...
Sukku : wo letter
Jiya (laughs): Tullu , u r scared of my dad ... it was really nyc
Sukku : ur dad read it and he...
Jiya : what ? (shocked and scared) oh god ! he called u dint he ?
Sukku : koyi problem ?
Jiya : see ... don't meet him today just send someone from your family .
Sukku : theek hai . Umesh bhaiya aur Sumit jiju
Umesh : abbe gadha ... saare toofan mujhse hi kyun takratha hai ? (making an irritated face)
Kabir : Tu bohat handsome hai na issiliye . (naughtly)
Sumit : mujhe kyun beech me bularaha hai ? (scared)
Kabir : thank god mein nehi . Other wise explusion ke saath ghar mein jhaadu ke maar bhi milta ! (in low voice)
Girls gang
Aman : Issilye yeha aane ke liye bol raha tha ! (angry)
Nisha : Bhabhi aisa nehi hai . she is a very nyc girl
Dolly : That's y they went outs ! (turning green )
Kirti : dho ladke ek ladki pe try kar rahe hai ! how blah !
Aman and Dolly really gets possessive .
Mean while Jiya goes to her house seeing her dad coming . While all the boys run into NiBirs house .
As they enter
Aman to Umesh
Aman : Kahan gaye the ?
Umesh : wo .. wo Ji... su... susu karne ke liye
Kabir (controls his laugh). : Haan ...
Dolly pulls Umesh's ear : Susu ... ghar mein washroom hai na !
Aman :laddo tu badal gaya hai
Kabir : aisa nehi hai bhabhi
Nisha : haan
Dolly : sumit tu kahan gaya ...
Sumit : to show him direction
Sukku and Kabir (tries to control their laugh )
Doll (making awkward face) : How cheaps !
Kiriti : Disgusting
Nisha : guys stop it !
Kabir goes to Nisha : do couples ke life ke beech mein mat aana
Nisha stares at Kabir and stamps his leg .
Kabir : ouch ! (to himself) yeh doggie ke saath donkey bhi hai
curse my kismat !
Sorry no much Nibir this in this long update but next update for sure ! 😉
Part 7 is up
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome buddy too funny 🤣
update soon 😃
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