*A Tale of Two Brothers*by Aditi & Jhanvi *Stopped* - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ekstase

Hello!😳

I am quite new to this forum and mostly a silent observer, though I've been watching NAUC for a while, now. The title of this story was what made me curious and the prologue amd character sketches made me even more curious^^

If I have understood correctly, Viraj and Kabir will be a focus, right? There are so many threads here on Niraj or Nibir and wondering who it will be, in the end, but I am one of those people who would be happy with either (though I might have a soft spot for Kabir😆) and I think that's because the show, for me, isn't or wasn't supposed to be a (complete) romance but focusing on other beautiful relationships such as the cousin-bonds. Love has, after all, many facets and a romantic kind of love is just one of those. What I am trying to say is: Personally, I'm more curious about Viraj and Kabir's relationship, what happened in the past and how they will deal with it. I always had a knack for (good) brother-bonds😉

Someone else mentioned a triangle and Aditi (I hope you don't mind me calling you that😳) replied that you weren't sure about that. So, I was wondering if this is supposed to be a romance? Or will it be, as the title suggests, more inclined towards the brothers? Not that I have anything against love thrown into the mix (even if I had, it shouldn't matter since this is your story and you should like it above everyone else) but I'd love to get a feeling of what I should roughly expect genre-wise (and a warning in case there's a serious love triangle, not such a fan of those, especially if they come between other relationships, but if done well, they are not that bad😆)

Sorry, my post got a little long. I never can't keep it short😛Anyway, I send a buddy-request to both of you as was suggested for those who'd love to receive a pm upon an update. Since I'm new and haven't read anything by either of you but everyone here seems to love your writing, I'm really curious how this FF will turn out to be^^

Wish you both lots of inspiration👍🏼

Originally posted by: bhagya25

Yup janvi di is top good I have read her fictions but never commented :p sorry di
U can do it when u people are free I guess shivi even u have got some exams na?
Do well aditi all the best! :)

Originally posted by: MyselfMihu

okay ! How old is my Viru in this story?
Character sketches padh k mekko pura "All's Well that ends well " wala feel aa raha tha.
Especially Vikram's part 😛
Ekk din mai bhi kisi k collaboration mae likhugi 😆
Superb .

Originally posted by: Aditi_28

You know, I don't believe much in "All's well that ends well"
Does only a good ending erase all the crimes/sorrow that a bad road led you too?
Just saying :P
Aapke collabs padhne me bohot maza aayega! :D Usme Nimrit doge? :P

Originally posted by: Aditi_28

Thank you so much for this comment! :)
I'm glad we could pique your curiosity here, that was the point. :D
Oh, you can of course call me Aditi! :) what can we call you though? :P
As the Preface will tell you, we haven't finalised anything other than the basic plot. We want to make this a literary adventure for the both of us. I'll just reveal a suspense, it is not going to be a clichd love triangle. I believe many more emotions come in the picture before love, and we want to explore them as well. This IS a tale of Love, but the unexpected and beautiful love.

As you have guessed, this focuses on the Rathor Brothers more than Nisha. The show is already focusing on her story, we want to focus on the Rathor family here. Of course, Nishastill has a main role here:P

What you can probably expect from this story is many different emotions and exploration of the hitherto unexplored bonds. A mixture of genres maybe? ;)

I agree with almost everything you've said here ^.
And, I'm a fan of sibling bonds as well, I think they are more powerful than anything else.

People in this forum are generous, and have given us lot of love. Jhanvi Di has written a story and I've written 2, one of which is just about to end. We will love your feedback on those. I'm sorry I can't insert the links here (my stupid phone doesn't let me), but you can find them in the sticky post - Creativity of the cousins on NAUC forum by ishqnme.

I know what you mean when you say you can't keep it short. Look at my reply, I can rarely keep it short either! :D

Originally posted by: Ekstase

Hello! 😳

I am quite new to this forum and mostly a silent observer, though I've been watching NAUC for a while, now. The title of this story was what made me curious and the prologue amd character sketches made me even more curious^^

If I have understood correctly, Viraj and Kabir will be a focus, right? There are so many threads here on Niraj or Nibir and wondering who it will be, in the end, but I am one of those people who would be happy with either (though I might have a soft spot for Kabir 😆) and I think that's because the show, for me, isn't or wasn't supposed to be a (complete) romance but focusing on other beautiful relationships such as the cousin-bonds. Love has, after all, many facets and a romantic kind of love is just one of those. What I am trying to say is: Personally, I'm more curious about Viraj and Kabir's relationship, what happened in the past and how they will deal with it. I always had a knack for (good) brother-bonds 😉

Someone else mentioned a triangle and Aditi (I hope you don't mind me calling you that 😳) replied that you weren't sure about that. So, I was wondering if this is supposed to be a romance? Or will it be, as the title suggests, more inclined towards the brothers? Not that I have anything against love thrown into the mix (even if I had, it shouldn't matter since this is your story and you should like it above everyone else) but I'd love to get a feeling of what I should roughly expect genre-wise (and a warning in case there's a serious love triangle, not such a fan of those, especially if they come between other relationships, but if done well, they are not that bad 😆)

Sorry, my post got a little long. I never can't keep it short 😛 Anyway, I send a buddy-request to both of you as was suggested for those who'd love to receive a pm upon an update. Since I'm new and haven't read anything by either of you but everyone here seems to love your writing, I'm really curious how this FF will turn out to be^^

Wish you both lots of inspiration 👍🏼

Originally posted by: jhanvi.123

Thank you for the wishes. I'm glad you found the prologue and CS interesting.

Yes, the focus would be on the brothers, though Nisha is an important character too, also there are other characters as well who will be important and integral part of the story...
I completely understand what you feel, there's this serial that I follow (The Vampire Diaries), and in that too there's a love triangle with two brothers in love with the same girl... Thankfully in that serial they showed how their brotherly love overcame it all, and I really like that. Passion should not overshadow other bonds of love (according to me atleast).
Anyway, the love triangle is not part of the main plot, if we reveal right now whether it would feature at all or not then it would become a spoiler. But what I can tell you is that we'll be focusing on different bonds, emotions and revelations. Genre would be mixed as Aditi said, I would like to add here that there are some stories which are love stories and there are others which have love as an element, ours would come under the latter ;)
I hope Aditi & I were able to satisfactorily answer your questions. :)
And long comments are always a delight to read, we'll be happy if you keep them coming! :D :)