*A Tale of Two Brothers*by Aditi & Jhanvi *Stopped*

huda123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Wow...that was so good!!! 😃

Your writing is just AMAZING!!!

I could just imagine everything happening in front of my eyes!

Can't wait till next update!😊

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Achira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

it was so freaking awesome...mindblowinnng

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: MyselfMihu
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*Dances like Govinda*
Thank u fir such an amazing update
its b'ful though I hardly care about Vasundhara but the way she's described reminds me of my own mother , jabki I hardly remember her .
Viraj 😳 the More I read him in ur ff ,the more I fall for him
#Keepthegoodworkup

I'm so glad we could remind you of your mother :)
And Viraj..? We've already fallen for him :P
*gazes dreamily into space*
Thank you so much Mihu!! 🤗

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: cue1
<font color="#FF9999">OMG I love it!
Such a great story
And I love how it's not just focused on the triangle (although I'm totes a Nisha-Kabir shipper 😆)
I love the poetry, references to Sherlock and Shakespeare (are you guys English Lit Students ????)
Can't wait for more!
I've Buddy'd you and hope to get PM's for the next update 😊

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Thank you! :)
Oh yeah, this is not about the triangle...it is much more :D
You liked the references? Thank you!! Umm..nope, neither of us is a English Literature student. :P
This is the second story that both of us are writing :P
Be assured of the PM, you'll definitely receive them. :)
Thank you again!

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Grishu30
O..thank u very much guys fr a long update...it is awesome...amazing...

Thank you for commenting! :))

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Rinu08
Wow what a start.!!!

Three different things happening in a two different families where one is Mother - Son bond,another is Father - Son bond,and last one is Friendship bond.

Everything is well potrayed,kudus to both of you Aditi and Jhanvi.👏

Eagerly waiting for next one.

Thank you so much Rinu Di!! 🤗
Next update on next Sunday :P

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: maniac200010
This is simply awesome...I Love It!!🤗

Thank you so much!! :))
By the way, what can we call you? Maniac is definitely not a good idea, right? 😆😆

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: huda123
Wow...that was so good!!!😃
Your writing is just AMAZING!!!
I could just imagine everything happening in front of my eyes!
Can't wait till next update!😊

Thank you so much!! 🤗
Next update on next Sunday! :P

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: achirasingh16
it was so freaking awesome...mindblowinnng

Thank you so much!! 🤗

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Shivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@Shivi: Thank You! :D Aditi se the question you asked I'll leave it for her to answer 😆

@Mihu: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! 😊

@Cue1: Thank You so much! We aren't literature students but are fond of it... Not much into the literary theory & criticism part as I've heard literature students have to delve into, but yeah we love novels :D
And one of us would definitely send the pm 😊

@Grishu: Thanks a lot! 😃 We are updating weekly so we're sort of trying to make it up through the length 😆

Edited by jhanvi.123 - 10 years ago

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